female I know other one..

[bledsoed]

it looks good but i think there is something that could be better but i cant just put my finger on it. i think it has to do with the face. but im not sure, i will look at it some more.
but it looks pretty good

derek

actually just looking at it again i see that the upper part of her legs seems a little thin. same with the knees. her calves are soo much bigger then her upper leggs and that should be the other way around i think

[scott2600]

i think it looks really good....like the proportions on the body....but i think her mouth is too far from her nose and her lips are lookin kinda off.... post a closeup of her face, and maby ill be able to help more withe the face.....keep up the good work, and keep posting

[aurora]

I think scott2600, has something there with the mouth it looks like its to far down from the nose. It also causes the checks to loose definition making the whole lower part of the face seem to round. The eyes might be alittle to far apart, or more particularly the bridge of the nose going into the eye brow ridge seems like its sweeping alittle to far out. But that one is hard to tell without a close up of the face.
On the positive side I love the body of this character and think with just a little work on the face you have a fantastic model here. Good Job.

[mastering3d]

Thanks guy so far .Here is a close up for you to have look at.
Keep the feed back comeing,

http://www.mastering3d.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/W.I.P/head%20shot%201.jpg

[Jeffo]

hey not bad so far, a few suggestions if you dont mind. It depends on the style ur going for, are you trying to make it realistic?

If so i would thicken her legs up (thighs and knee area in particular), the area around her knee especially looks odd. I would also raise her breasts up a little and tone down on the ghetto booty, although it might look different with thicker thighs, i would also spend a little more time on the head, try and make her look a little more sexy.

How old are you making her look?

Nice job on the clothes/accessories so far! just maintain that quality throughout!

Good job, keep it up!! :thumbsup:

[mastering3d]

Thanks for your replys ...I will have to look in to what you are telling me about..

Jeffo @ are you trying to make it realistic?
Kind of ..
Jeffo @ try and make her look a little more sexy.
Thats what I am trying to do...
scott2600 @ but i think her mouth is too far from her nose and her lips are lookin kinda off.
I new there was some thing odd about the face but could not work it out,Untill now...thanks for that

[scott2600]

no problem!! post the new render as soon as u fix it..... I wana see..

[Adam]

looks great overall. The clothes look really nice. I think the problem with the face is just that the lower half of the face is to flat looking. Pull the lips, chin and part of the cheek back a little.

Great work though.

Oh her buldge seems a little to buldging:thumbsup:

[Lukashi]

I think shed look better if the lips where in another pose, they look kinda odd open

[karabo]

I don't think I like the hair. It looks like some clay hair. I think you should use a hair plugin for her hair.

[mastering3d]

OK thatks every one for your crites...As you can see I have been working on her today so here is before & after...Save you haveing to keep going up and down the page look to see what I have done...


Keep them crites comeing and thanks again ...


http://www.mastering3d.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/W.I.P/female%20new.jpg

[lerpiedood]

Thats a pretty nice model. The hair is a little odd, the clothes are nice, and the body is also, but the knees look to small on the legs.

[Lukashi]

Hey thats getting really good :)

[mastering3d]

Thanks you for your crites...I will have to do some more work on the knees.Starting to go blind at the moment.Where I have been looking at it to long today ,LOL...So I 'll be getting back to her tomorrow,Well today now as is 3:34 am...

Thanks again..

[mastering3d]

OK been doing some more on the head over XMAS...Hope you all all a good one..

Hope you like it better now...Let me know what you think..
All so I all most for got to say that this is not textured just in case you think it is..I done it like that just to give me a better fill of the female face ..

http://www.mastering3d.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/W.I.P/newfemalehead1.jpg

[mastering3d]

ok here we go another update for your you to have alook at..

Fixed problems with the ears ....Give me some crites please as to what you think of the new look so far...
http://www.mastering3d.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/W.I.P/earupdatesw.jpg

[HapZungLam]

:applause: you are gettin there. maybe the mouth is abit too low. the leg is too thin to me. check if you have any reference.

[Stonefist]

Mastering3d, i have a Question, did you model her hair seperately and then Add it (boolean) to the head or did you extrude verts?

Check out My Newbie WIP's (http://petstown.net/photos/nedd)

[aurora]

Bravo, Much improved:applause: The only thing I see, and mind you I've only had a couple hours a decent sleep in almost 4 days now, that the flare on her nose seems a little to pronouced or maybe the rest of the nose is alittle to narrow in width. Do you have a front view of the face to look at? Again it's probably just me not thinking clearly.
You might also want to pull the jaw out just a bit. I love the cheek definition it just seems alittle extreme on the zygomatic process (the bone defining the cheek). I tried adding a image showing where I thought you might look at widening the jaw but it was not loading so if you can't figure out what I trying to say just let me know and I'll try again later.

[mastering3d]

Hey sorry for this very Long update ...As some of you know i have been working on training CD ,So have not had much time spare..But had two hours free to kill today and done some more...I have given her long pants now I think it looks alot better then the other one's that she was wearing ,All thou they are still the same one's that she had on before but longer with more added to them.She has hair now too but still not all done as of yet..Hands I am not very happy with yet.Arms still need more work on them..but the over all look is starting to look some what good ..Still I hope that you like the update and thanks for looking in on my work...

Fill free to give your crites....:thumbsup:
http://www.mastering3d.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/W.I.P/frontonL.jpg http://www.mastering3d.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/W.I.P/frontonR.jpg

[Quik]

awesome

[mastering3d]

Thanks but i think its far from awesome yet...

thank thou...I wise that i would of got more replys and may be some crites on the up dates would of been nice ,May be its just me...

[maular]

Looks good! :)

Are the gloves gone now? Her forearms are very smooth and appear to have a circular cross-section. Also, I'm not sure where the pants are ending, perhaps where they meet the thong. Some wrinkles in the fabric on her right hip would help.

[ninja noodle]

WOW! you've improved it alot!!! fantastic modelling!! i think the mouth looks a hella lot better now that it's more proportional to the face!! you've definately evened out the legs more but one thing that i wasn't too sure about was the arms, i think the crease on the arm ~elbow area~ is too harsh, i think it can be softened slightly.
But it's coming along really well! keep up the good work! ;)

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