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SuperXCM 03-08-2006, 06:03 PM Lombardo Simone is entered in the "The Journey Begins Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/journey_begins/view_entries.php?challenger=10776)
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SuperXCM
03-08-2006, 06:15 PM
Hi all!:wavey:
Welcome back to an another challenge... and what a challenge... like this new theme, lot of idea, lot of possible directions... must defrag :wip: .... anyway, i've some prefered versions, want perhaps to make something with a "tooned-tuned"-Spermatozoide going for a longest journey ...but perhaps not the good idea not really "epic", always epic image must be done for these challenge... :arteest: ... Or perhaps i can do a mysterious girl, looking the horizon to see the long way to the giant bonzai... :rolleyes: .....( Any ressemblance with past challenge is purely coincidential.) :rolleyes:
But it's really cool that this new challenge begins, and i wish you all good work and good fun!!
Good luck all!!
Let's go!! Beer for all! :beer:
beelow
03-08-2006, 07:55 PM
Welcome back, dude, Loved ur last entry in the spectacular challenge, good luck dude!:thumbsup:
ODoul
03-10-2006, 12:31 AM
Judging from your spectacular entry, I'm going to keep track of your thread. Good luck!
Gunilla
03-10-2006, 07:49 AM
Lombardo! :buttrock:
Haven't seen your thread - so glad you're in - this will be lots of fun!
Don't forget to put a link to your thread in your sig so you're easy to find. ;)
Spermatozoide idea sounds great! It could be difficult to give it a strong emotional expression, but if you could it would be awesome. Looking forward to see what you come up with! :beer:
SuperXCM
03-11-2006, 06:49 PM
beelow, 3D_Explorer aznd gunilla thanks for post!! :beer:
Here come i can begin now, ok, must forget the Spermatozoide idea, not enough epic, and not sure about how to make the feeling of the journey, now i've got 2 other idea, post sketch of first soon. :wip:
And thanks Gunilla, i've forgot to change my signature, now it's done!!
Let's go! :beer:
SuperXCM
03-11-2006, 06:55 PM
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Hello, here's my first concept (ugly concept :s), want to make the beginning of a Space Journey, the pilot walking on the bridge, on the background we can see the Shuttle(not sure the good word?) always attached with some smoke, keeping is reactor hot, ready to go... with some light coming on the bridge trough the pipeline, and some technological stuff.... hope you see where i want to go... first concept. :p
SuperXCM
03-11-2006, 07:04 PM
The first one is not really original, and i'm not sure to do it, but i like this vertical format....need to defrag, the second concept, is really different, but not sketch for now, my hands don't like pen lol, i want to make a big tooned-parrot, take a branch on his shoulder, with at the end of this, his bag, walking in profile view from camera and taking a tresors map on his hand, ... and on the road we can see a panel which show how miles need to the next city, or something like that, must developp the idea, but i've the character good in my mind big fat parrot, i'll try to make a sketch... :wip:
SuperXCM
03-13-2006, 11:24 PM
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Hello all!
I think i will go on with the first concept, but i don't want to make it hyper-realist, it will be the beginning of spatial journey but not on earth, don't wont to make some NASA style, i've begin the modeling, and try some light and compo, but i've a problem with my bridge grid, an the render i've got some strange "arch" as you can see on the image, perhaps the hole in the grid are too small, but i try to render on bigger resolution, always the same problem, anyone got an idea to correct this problem, but keeping the same size for hole? I'm working on Max 8, render with brazil.
Thanks a lot! :p
Squibbit
03-13-2006, 11:25 PM
hey dude wassup, nice start u got there :thumbsup:
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coolrio
03-14-2006, 11:14 AM
hey man,...i think you have a very good idea, but i dont see any shuttle here, and probably it'll be better if you get rid of those pipes above the bridge, its some short of nuissance to the compostion and maybe you want to lower the camera angle a bit so the audience can see the sky above, the destination....well maybe. good luck and keep on going
SuperXCM
03-14-2006, 11:33 AM
Hello thanks for replies!! :bounce:
Squibbit, thanks man, and i don't see link on your signature, well do you participate? :deal:
terminus_ad_quem, the shuttle will come for sure, for now it's only a cylinder, but it will be :)
For the camera, i think it can be a good idea, but as now i want to show the ground also, trough the grid, but i've got some problem on render. Anyway it's a very good idea, thanks a lot. :beer:
Glad to see you here ,interesting concept.
looking forward to see your worlk!:cool:
Jaba153
03-15-2006, 12:01 AM
yeah nice entry here ! maybe the holes in the grid should be smaller..i think the arch on the image are logic... it's like a visual holografic effect ..but anyway it looks strange.. good luck& keep post'
madshooter
03-15-2006, 10:58 AM
Hey dude thats a cool concept. Nice to see you in this challenge:) All the best and rock:scream: :thumbsup:
SuperXCM
03-16-2006, 02:22 AM
Hi, thanks for replies,
jab' thanks for help i will try to make it smaller, i hope it will be right! :wip:
Thanks all Update is coming!! :beer:
SuperXCM
03-16-2006, 02:27 AM
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Hello all,
here's a start for modeling, i made the part who support the attach of the space shuttle, not yet finished, just a start, must add details!! hope you like it!! :p
Stefan-Morrell
03-16-2006, 02:29 AM
looks good to me,nice detailing
theWOODman
03-16-2006, 03:55 AM
Looks neat whatever the heck that thing is. :)
Gunilla
03-16-2006, 07:11 AM
Nice start! It's cool that you're going tech and space with this - I haven't seen many around with this idea so far.
Your modeling is always a pleasure to see :thumbsup:
Lemog
03-16-2006, 08:36 AM
Finally, you're here my friend... good to see...
...a futuristic idea well with your universe... I'm so curious to see more.
Modeling well started, nice mechanics Simon... and best wishes for the continuation... seeya :buttrock:
SuperXCM
03-16-2006, 04:53 PM
Thanks all for replies!! :buttrock:
Stefan-Morrell---> Thanks man, i love your modeling!! :bounce:
-WOODY- ---> Thanks, i will show soon what it is, and where it's on my compo.
Gunilla ---> Thanks my friend, it's always a pleasure for me to see your replies! :blush:
Laurent ---> Thanks my friend, glad to see you come back, hope you're well now, good luck!! :beer:
Update really soon!! :wip:
emajedi
03-16-2006, 05:15 PM
Nice modelling! I really like what you have so far.
Climax
03-16-2006, 05:36 PM
Nice design of the moving piece, great to see u working again, your sketch is looking promising, :thumbsup: I'll see u in your next post! :beer:
SuperXCM
03-16-2006, 09:44 PM
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Hello all, here's the new update, i've go on with the attach, post soon a complete scene render, to show you where they go. :)
SuperXCM
03-16-2006, 09:45 PM
emajedi and Climax, thanks for replies! :beer:
SuperXCM
03-16-2006, 10:50 PM
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Ok, here a render with the attach place at their good place. Lot of work to do. Always the same problem with the grid. :s
nemirc
03-17-2006, 04:32 AM
Hello Lombardo. Good luck :beer:
elmasfeo
03-17-2006, 01:32 PM
the modelling of that "bridge" is looking great :eek:
I guess that in the final image it will be more obvious that it is a shuttle ;)
about your problem with the grid, I don't think it has an easy solution, because I've seen that effect happening sometimes in real life... maybe try it with thicker grids, textured and lit, but if it's still happening (quite likely) you may have to change the grid... however probably everybody around here is more experienced in this than me, so....:shrug:
SuperXCM
03-19-2006, 09:56 PM
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Hi all! I've turn around my scene, and i perhaps want to change the compo, place the camera lower, but looking higher, to see the top of the shuttle, that will propably look more a ship, it give a best feeling of begin of the journey, the departure day, what do you think?
Also i want to place a second character, little girl attach at her father's leg, doesn't want him to go in the mysterious space journey....a little gril like the girl in Monster, perhaps 1 or 2 years more. But it's more work to do! lol
SuperXCM
03-19-2006, 10:26 PM
Nemirc Thanks for reply!! :beer:
Elmasfeo, thanks for reply, didn't find a solution, but when i've changed the camera position, the probleme disappaer so, it' will probably work, depend of my final view...
thanks again for help!! :)
Zapan
03-19-2006, 10:40 PM
Hey man , really cool concept you got here !
And that's rocking mechanicals details !!
Ouh I'm glad I found it , will definitely follow this now !
Can't wait for more !
cheers ,
-Zapan
SuperXCM
03-20-2006, 08:42 PM
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Hello all, here is the base modeling for the shuttle-space-ship, want to make it like a hawk, or some strange bird, lot to do, but it's the style i want to do!
Hope you like it!:)
SuperXCM
03-20-2006, 08:44 PM
Thanks Zapan for reply, your modeling is amazing, very clean. :beer:
shahabp
03-20-2006, 08:57 PM
that's awesome,
I think if you make the lens more wide it would be better.
If the ship is important for you it's better to mirror those technological stuff!
or change it somehow
it gives you better composition and those stuff can lead eyes to your ship.
good modeling though
good luck
nemirc
03-22-2006, 08:07 PM
Nemirc Thanks for reply!! :beer:
Elmasfeo, thanks for reply, didn't find a solution, but when i've changed the camera position, the probleme disappaer so, it' will probably work, depend of my final view...
thanks again for help!! :)
I remember something about "supersampling" in MAX. That was supposed to get rid of the effect.
Lemog
03-23-2006, 06:59 AM
I'm curious to see more about this shuttle Simon... original one for sure :thumbsup:
SuperXCM
04-03-2006, 08:03 PM
Hello all!!Sorry for late, but i was so so busy these day, that i can't go on with the challenge, no enough time also for connecting, anyway i'm in now, and i must hurry to finish at time.
Thanks all for replies!! It help me a lot!!
nemirc, the supersampling, i must find some help to this, i will look on google; thanks and shahabp, yes it can be a very good idea, i must work on that too! :wip:
Laurent, thanks i will go on on shuttle now, must work fast!!!
Thanks all for support!!
Anyway i'm looking now at your thread, to see your progress!!!
Stay tuned, hope to update soon!!! :bounce:
:beer:
Womgoose
04-03-2006, 08:45 PM
Great progress so far, the detail is brilliant :)
I believe the effect on the walkway is called Moire and is very common in my industry when dealing with small areas of high contrast like your bridge (black on white).
Glad to see you fixed it ;)
SuperXCM
04-04-2006, 12:13 AM
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update shuttle... lot of work...
thedirtypaw
04-04-2006, 12:28 AM
i wonder if you looked at the the pics from the inspiration section of the challenge? it resembles very much with one with a taking off shuttle..or space ship or whatevar.. just an opinion. oh... please loose the pipes . i ruins your composition as another guy here sayed. i dont wanna sound like giving lessons but grab a paintings book and look at composition with characters and look at Philip Straub's lesson of composition very helpful i can say. and for your grid problem you can get rid of it making the character walk on a transparent plexiglass boxes, some mray or brazil glass nice effect and you'll lose the grid stuff. and the sampler only makes your render last longer coz it super sapmples your antialiasing options on the material or object.i wouldn go for it if i was you because you;ve got some great geometry there but some big detail also and it might cost you some render time. good luck
cheers
Russel-Nash
04-04-2006, 09:41 AM
Hey, just discovered your thread.
Welcome and have fun (But I see you already have :D)
Good work so far. Bring on more. :wip:
Russel
asbassie
04-05-2006, 12:32 PM
I like! I like. Looks like stacks and stack of fun. Of what I've seen so far, I think your work has no flaw. The new angle, in my opinion ('cause I have one ) is really the way to go and if there's not going to be another character, maybe another element - like robot or luggage-carrier-machine-thingy or even a pet of some sort, I mean, I don't know...anything. The image could be balanced out more with another element in there. Go on with these articulated models. I like it.
nemirc
04-06-2006, 02:49 AM
Why do I sense that bird thing will be covered with flames? You can even call it the phoenix :D
Lemog
04-06-2006, 06:25 AM
I really like the look of this ship... yes... why not the Phoenix :scream: :thumbsup:
Gunilla
04-06-2006, 07:26 AM
Yes - very nice shapes for the ship - glad to see you back on this :bounce:
thedirtypaw
04-06-2006, 12:45 PM
nooo, no phoenix , thats my ideea :) kidding.. cant wait to see that thing take off
SuperXCM
04-11-2006, 04:27 PM
Hi all!!
Again sorry for late, i was on another project, i wanted job, now i found one, i want to make this challenge, but the job will be finish in one more week, so i can go on with challenge, and then i will show you the work i did this week.
For the Phoenix, don't know if it the way i want to go, but it's a good idea.
Thanks again all for support and post, :blush:
thedirtypaw--> Man don't know if the it's the same that the inspiration page, but for sure these images inspired me..i think it's what this page was there... anyway i hope to finish this challenge to show you, where i go, and you can at the final of the challenge, look at the insiration pictures, and mine and i'm already sure, you will say, their not the same..But i would like to thanks you, for helping for the grid, the plexi can be a very good idea, for kick off the grid problem, i will see that. For the pipeline, i like them sorry ... for sure they will not be like they are now, but i want to make something with lot of tubes and part bring one in the other to make the decoration...
For the compo i don't know Philip Straub, but i will look on google, i hope it can help me.
Thanks man for all the help. :beer:
asbassie---> Thanks, like i said on early post, i will add a second character, a little girl taking her father's leg...
Thanks all for replies and support!! Hope to post soon, good luck for your challenge!!!
:beer:
I can't post now'cause i can't go on, but the next week, i hope i can do it!!!
:wip:
Lemog
04-12-2006, 06:52 AM
Well mate... good news about your job... and best wishes for it... I hope you can fins some spare time or rest time to finish your interesting challenge... seeya Simon :beer:
SuperXCM
05-03-2006, 07:05 PM
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Hello all, here i come back, finally... damn, i hope i will have time to finish, here is an update with the second character, the girl.
Lot of things to do!
:)
Dironik
05-03-2006, 07:14 PM
Nice idea and nice modeling. Good luck, Lombardo!
Gunilla
05-11-2006, 05:31 PM
Come on now, Lombardo - there is still time left, go go go :bounce::bounce::bounce:
Lemog
05-12-2006, 06:32 AM
An update will be welcome mate :beer:
SuperXCM
05-13-2006, 06:02 PM
Hello all, thanks for replies, yes i must update... must work also... damn i don't understand how you do, since i've beginning to work, it's difficult for me to continue the challenge. When i come back home, i do'nt want to turn on my computer, :cry: ... but i must do that!
I've the week-end to work. And i must hurry.
Thanks a lot for support my friends. :blush:
This work must be finished a week ago, but go on until August. And i hate what i'm doing there..some bad, and simply 3D... no creativity, no challenge... bah... but it's work! :shrug:
Hope i will finish in time.
Lemog
05-15-2006, 06:31 AM
Héhé and never forget, we're watching you, then, you must finish :thumbsup:
SuperXCM
05-26-2006, 10:59 AM
Hello,
sorry for late... but OMG i've so much work :cry: , and the challenge finish in 1day and 14hours....damn... i would like to finish it, but it will be hard. Anyway today is holyday in belgium...so i've 38h to finish my image.... hope i will have enoug time.
Thanks Laurent for support and good luck with vote for your image.:)
I work this night to finish the character, i'll post soon. Then i must hurry to finish and don't do it, like i wanted at the beginning.
Anyway good luck for all who finish and try to finish!!! :beer:
SuperXCM
05-26-2006, 11:48 AM
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Hi all, here's the charcter, make with the same metohd of the my spectacular gril (here is the link of the amazing tutorial : http://mr2k.3dvf.net/tutorials/max/tutorials_joan.htm )
Must do the shoes of the gril, some style of old converse. And for sure make the texture.
Hope you like it. I must hurry.
SuperXCM
05-26-2006, 02:25 PM
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Here's the modeling of the new ramp, and barrier, i've made plexi like thedirtypaw saied, it's look cool i think.
Maybe this is the winner image. Is going to be better and better....take the mood of the challenge.is clear, iS (now) very nice to watch.
SuperXCM
05-26-2006, 04:36 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10776/10776_1148657806_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10776/10776_1148657806_large.jpg)
Ok i think i've finished the modeling now, must hurry to finish the shaders!!!:d
ilusiondigital
05-26-2006, 04:49 PM
Oh my god, what an strong entry, woooo. Congrats, Hope to see soon the final image
Neubius
05-26-2006, 05:01 PM
wow
just came wandering in to the 3d entry forums for the fist time and found yours!
really stylish.
good luck to you !
SuperXCM
05-26-2006, 05:14 PM
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The test for the sky. and ambiant.:)
SuperXCM
05-26-2006, 05:17 PM
OZ, ilusiondigital and Neubius thanks a lot for support!!! :beer: Hope i can show you the final, i'm starting the textures now. I'm must hurry!! :wip:
Russel-Nash
05-26-2006, 05:33 PM
Hey,
that looks very nice already.
Hope to see your final soon. :bounce:
Russel
KOryH
05-26-2006, 06:05 PM
Fantastic so far. I love the poses on the characters.
The only problem I see is that thgere are some tangents with the figures. There are few strong lines in the BG intersecting the characters in a less than appealing way. I would try to soften it somehow. color and atmoshpere may be the easiest way.
Best of luck, it's really looking great.
tredistudio
05-26-2006, 07:00 PM
Fantastic, I think that will be one of the best.
SuperXCM
05-26-2006, 07:15 PM
Russel-Nash, KOryH, tredistudio thanks a lot for support!! :bounce:
KOryH, i understand, i will soften the background with the value and color, make it more lighter than foreground. And i must change the mod of the bridge line near the camera, add details.
Thanks for help and support!! :beer:
SuperXCM
05-26-2006, 09:36 PM
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here an update for the ship... lot of work to do.
SuperXCM
05-27-2006, 05:17 AM
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Hi, don't know if it will work this time, can't post anything and go to forum...:(
anyway here's the all plan rendering... second try to post.
Now adjust and compo on toshop:)
SuperXCM
05-27-2006, 06:02 AM
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Hello all, here's the compo on toshop, don't really what i can change, crits are welcome...18H left :)
Gojira
05-27-2006, 11:06 AM
I think you can ad more blurry reflection on the ground. It's a great image good luck
hey! your bird like space ship is superb, very fantastic job
SuperXCM
05-27-2006, 01:06 PM
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Here's the final image, can't work enough, now must write my story in english and post it. Good luck to all participants! It was hard, it was fast, and then i can go to bed!:d
SuperXCM
05-27-2006, 01:43 PM
Gojira and cgoz thanks for help and support!!! :beer:
Here' a link for hd (580ko) ---> Lombardohd.jpg (http://www.superxcm.com/talk/lombardohd.jpg)
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And the story :
""Dad, Daddy.... why you must do this Journey.... Please don't go...
My Name is Britney, last year my Mum died cause an strange virus who appeard on our beautiful planet.
It comes from space, some other planet are using the space like a garbage and we received all the pollution here, on planet "Chronik".
But our scientist have found a solution, an antidote, that can be only find on a very far planet called "Heaven".
They must find an exceptionnal pilot, 'cause the travel is very long, and hard...
2 days ago, Daddy received the order to get place in the "Eagle-Ship 1", and until this moment, all comes really quickly.
He has stop to work for the gouvernment when Mum leave us... but when he heard about the antidote... he can't say no...
And now, it's the departure, i don't want to detach my-self, don't want to let you go away....
Daddy, please be careful... you're the only one who stay for me, and now, you must leave, you must begins the journey....
Don't go away from me!
But you're the only solution, and i know that, i'm looking at "Eagle-Ship 1", and i can feel the power of this amazing piece of technology...
I know it take you far from me....i'm scared, honored and impressed all at the same time...
Take care Daddy, go with the "Eagle-Ship 1" cross the space, defeat the danger and come back home soon, come back near me...
....
The journey Begins Daddy...."
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It's finished, thanks a lot all for help and support. waiting for next one!!! :D
good luck to all participants for judging, and now, it's time to beeeeeerrrr!!! :beer:
haha just fast and great, you deserved a nice sleep...is there any tickets left for the Eagle-Ship 1?
congrats
ravioli_rancher
05-28-2006, 01:33 AM
Super XCM,
WOW. :eek: First time I've seen this. Immensly engaging and a beautiful render. Nice cinematic quality to the framing and poses. Very polished in every respect. Great entry. :applause: :buttrock: :)
gregoo23
05-28-2006, 09:59 AM
Hey;)
Your final image looks great too:p... i specially like the lighting..good job
oceanbluesky
05-28-2006, 11:05 AM
Hey Lombardo! Great sense of depth and emotion...really like your use of light and reflections, too. Love the little girl's bare feet. Very expressive scene. Looking forward to seeing your work in future challenges, good luck!
theWOODman
05-28-2006, 02:02 PM
I like your scene and the pose of your characters. The POV shows off the emmense size of the spacecraft and other machinery. It conveys a real sense of warmth.
The only thing about it that I think would have helped would be to use more varied textures rather than having a smooth reflective surface to everything. I know that's probably not what you intended, but it's just a thought.
Looks great though:thumbsup:
Russel-Nash
05-28-2006, 02:15 PM
Congrats for such an amzing final. :bounce:
Good luck with the voting.
Russel
SuperXCM
05-28-2006, 04:30 PM
Thanks all for replies!! :bounce:
cgoz, ravioli_rancher, ravioli_rancher, oceanbluesky, -WOODY- and Russel-Nash thanks a lot for these replies!! :blush:
-WOODY- ----> yeah, i know what you want to explain, but i think it will change this "mood" that i've here, i would like to keep a uniformity to all, it give some "smooth" feeling, to not disturb too the eyes. Thanks for support. Great final too.
Good luck all participants for judging!!
Peace!! :beer:
Climax
05-28-2006, 04:52 PM
Great Final image My Friend! I am glad you did it on time!
:thumbsup::)I wish u the best with the jury! :beer:
Gunilla
05-28-2006, 07:31 PM
Wow Lombardo! This is wonderful - very impressing how you could achieve such result in the last few days. I really like your style and the special Lombardo-mood in this :thumbsup:
Good luck and good beer now :beer:
monks
05-28-2006, 08:02 PM
really good picture and great point of view ! :) Congrats !
Lemog
05-29-2006, 06:53 AM
Triple congratulations for you Simon...
- first for this fast finishing...
- second for the story...
- third for the final way of your framing, and the global treatment of the picture, wich give us something really beautiful, strong and sensitive... I really like your result my friend...
I'm speachless... the result is awesome :thumbsup: good luck for final step but in any case, you must be proud of you... bravo... :applause:
Scied
05-29-2006, 07:18 AM
I like very much the final picture, congratulations on finishing this beautiful image! I exepcionaly like the "no texture" style, so the image is much cleaner and somehow reminds me of the japanese anime style, I don't know why :shrug:. Good luck!
Great image , congrats man!:thumbsup:
legon
05-29-2006, 09:11 AM
Excelent :thumbsup: Do you make great design for building :thumbsup:
SuperXCM
05-29-2006, 08:00 PM
Climax, Gunilla, monks, Lemog, Scied, tuck and legon thanks a lot for replies my friends. Sorry that i wasn't more here to support you, but damn this job make me crazy!!
(for info i've made this game : http://www.powerofcool.com (http://www.powerofcool.com/) :arteest: with my friend Lakombo )
I'm very happy that you like my final image, i wish good luck all for judgement, and i really hope to be more present at the next challenge.
Scied ----> hehehe thanks, it's fun that it remind you japanese anime style, it's the feeling i would like to give, my principal inspiration and reference for this picture was "Honneamise no Tsubasa" from the Studio Gainax. ( http://rmeg.free.fr/static/Anime/honneamise/honneamise1.jpg (http://rmeg.free.fr/static/Anime/honneamise/honneamise1.jpg) , http://www.animint.com/encyclopedie/base/4_116_0-honneamise-tsubasa.html )
Thanks again all!! :beer:
Lemog
05-30-2006, 05:43 AM
Congratulations for the game too, it's really well done, even if I was very bad... not easy to surf with arrow keys :scream: hahahahaha (and especially not easy with fat fingers huhu)...
soapy
05-30-2006, 07:00 AM
Super kool image! Very dreamy and high tech looking. It took me a minute to pick out the eagle shaped nose cone on the rocket ship, very funky, I like it. The muted choice of colours and lighting and the slick surfaces are all very stylish. Great work. Good luck. :-)
hhssuu
05-30-2006, 07:44 AM
MAN ALSOME STUFF!!! love the boldness of your design and the character's build, nice color and lighting, one of the top entrys IMO. Really cool, hope you do well. Congrats on finish!
icedeyes
05-30-2006, 10:59 AM
I hadn't seen your entry up to now but i really really love what you have done... I mean it really moves me as an image and that is what its all about... I love it... Especially the lighting... good luck....
SuperXCM
05-30-2006, 11:28 PM
soapy, hhssuu and icedeyes thansk a lot for replies, i'm very happy that you love my image, thanks a lot and good luck too for challenge! :beer:
Laurent, merci :)
ahaha, c'est cool que tu ai essayé:) c'était gallère de faire ce jeu...
Thanks! :beer:
centurionit
06-01-2006, 10:02 AM
Great work here I like it a lot... compliments...are you italian?
http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=330707
SuperXCM
06-02-2006, 07:22 PM
Thanks centurionit, and yes i'm Italian but from Sicily (Agrigento). :)
Anyway i'm born and i'm living in belgium. :beer:
Derferic
06-03-2006, 04:39 PM
Very beautiful image, these colors pastel are more beautiful effect! But In my mind, the rail of launching is a little... vacuum. Very good work!
http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?postid=3433678#post3433678
Greatto
06-04-2006, 03:17 PM
Great work! but your texturing is too monocolored !
Good Luck!
naresh
06-14-2006, 06:35 PM
hey dude thats call realy journey begin man..:bounce:....want to see you in the top 5....:thumbsup:
keep it up my vote for u...:scream:
thanks
stooch
06-14-2006, 09:53 PM
I think it looks great, one concern though...whats keeping the girl from plunging to her death over the side of the catwalk? the handrails look fine for an adult (even though not very comforting im sure) but a kid better learn flying...
Anatoli
06-15-2006, 06:14 PM
I liked your work, especially light... :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
It would be interesting to me to hear your opinion on my modest work.
Thanks:)
SuperXCM
06-15-2006, 07:10 PM
Hi all, thanks a lot for replies! :bounce:
Derferic---> thanks yes perhaps it's too vacuum. :/ but not a lot of time, and finally i like it a lot like that, it's a antoher style.:)
Greatto--->Thanks! Yes, no time, another style! I must hurry to finish, so i choose a render style very simple, and very "épuré", don't know how to say in english. Trying to approch 2D, but without cell shading render.
naresh---> Thanks Man, thanks a lot, it mean a lot for me. :blush:
stooch---> LOL, :D thanks man, yes, i didn't think about that, she can learn! We can say, that she follow her dad to take him a last time in her arms...:) Thanks again for reply.
Anatoli---> thanks!! I'll try to find your work, perhaps edit your signature, to help us to find it!
Thanks again all for replies and support! :beer:
gregoo23
07-07-2006, 08:46 AM
Hey!
Congratulations for your 2nd place. Really great job, i'm glad for you;)
hope to see you in the next contest.
Greg
Lemog
07-07-2006, 08:52 AM
Yeeeepeeeh.... great place for you my friend.... much congratulations :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: ...
...you're the best :thumbsup:
Climax
07-07-2006, 09:03 AM
Congratullations Lombardo! :bounce::bounce::bounce::bounce::bounce: very well done, and well deserved Keep going my friend :thumbsup::buttrock::applause:
irananimator
07-07-2006, 10:07 AM
Congratullations Lombardo .
ashiataka
07-07-2006, 11:25 AM
Congratulations Lombardo and best wishes.l've posted an email to you at siegfried_de_phoebe@hotmail.com (siegfried_de_phoebe@hotmail.com.When) .When you get it please answer me.
flaeticia
07-07-2006, 12:35 PM
Yoooo lombardo !! Congratulations ! ! :applause:
Whooooooehehehe :applause:
Great job fellow, and congratulation for the second place... well deserved :)
Gunilla
07-07-2006, 06:14 PM
Yay - big congratulations, Lombardo! Very well deserved :thumbsup:
shakes
07-08-2006, 03:30 AM
congrats Lombardo, very slick work!
chaitanyak
07-08-2006, 09:27 AM
hey dude, great job, was watching your progress. congratulations
tredistudio
07-08-2006, 12:19 PM
Really great work congratulation!
SuperXCM
07-08-2006, 03:56 PM
gregoo23, Laurent, Omar, irananimator, flaeticia, Goul, Gunilla, shakes, chaitanyak and tredistudio Thanks a lot for posts and support!! It was a really good suprise for me!!
Hope to see you on the next challenge!! :beer:
ashiataka, thanks and congrats too, i don't look at this email usually, i used only for msn. But i will look and answer you when i find your email.
Congrats to all participants! :beer:
MT-Cup
07-08-2006, 10:29 PM
Congratulations!
coochaki
07-14-2006, 09:03 AM
congrats man.great work.
SuperXCM
07-16-2006, 01:58 PM
MT-Cup and coochaki thanks a lot for replies! :)
oceanbluesky
07-18-2006, 08:39 AM
Whoohoo! Congratulations Lombardo! Love the atmospheric illustrative feel to your work. Looking forward to seeing your inspiring participation in the next Challenge. Cheers!
(Hope such a win helps with the "looking for a job" thing...)
Petraeus
07-19-2006, 06:29 PM
Congratulations SuperXCM, yours is my favourite piece in the series. It appears to have Art Deco elements set in a futuristic environment with a theme of heroic adventure - Inspiring stuff mate :)
wxr001
07-21-2006, 09:47 AM
郁闷了????????????
carlg
07-26-2006, 04:55 AM
Hi,
That's really impressive -- Your 2 characters really convey emotion well, and we don't even have to see their faces.
The environment has a great style to it. I hesitate to call it "retro"; it seems so overused, but it does have a touch of retro to it, in the streamlining and ornamentation on the rocket.
Carl
SuperXCM
07-26-2006, 01:52 PM
oceanbluesky----> Thanks for reply, i'm glad that youlike it! see you in the next one! :beer:
(no, i'm working but it will finish in august, and it's a work i hate, no creativity, no challenge, nothing interesting :( )
Petraeus----> Thanks! make me :blush:
wxr001---> sorry but my chinese but "wo bu ming bai"...:blush:
carlg---->thanks for this reply. It mean a lot for me, i'm glad to see that something different can be appreciated too.
Thanks again all for replies!!!
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