The Journey Begins Challenge (3D) Entry: Gustavo S. Torqueto

[Spinho]

Hi....
First of all, I´m sorry for my bad english... If I wrote something confuse.. please tell me.. =)

Well my idea.. is use something romantic with a little of adventure....
I want to use the love of the brother by the syster..or something else... the boyfriend.. with a girlfriend.. in a scene of 'good bye'.. and put in the scene the impression of them the boy now go.. but some day will came back.. It´s like say them him begin a journey, and this journey.. will transform the life of him..
hmmmm... it´s only this.. LOL..

C&C are wellcome!
See you!

[Spinho]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1142392523_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1142392523_large.jpg)

The Sketch of my scene.. some thing romantic...

[Spinho]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1142392853_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1142392853_large.jpg)

The head of the boy.. but.. I´ve change the model.. to appear more with a teen.

[Spinho]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1142476304_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1142476304_large.jpg)

add more style to the caracter

[Spinho]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1142557432_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1142557432_large.jpg)

Is the concept of the boy...

[soundwav_]

Hi there!
First of all, I really like your concept drawings.. Great skill and great idea.

This can turn out great... a man leaving his woman to go out on a long adventure.

I have just a small suggestion...
To emphasis how long this journy will be, so the viewer will get even more emotionally attached when he sees the woman's face, I suggest the man will hold a map, and we could see a bit of the map peeking behind the woman's back (with an "X" or something on where he's going)..

I also like how the face modelling is coming along :) good stuff..

Good luck in the contest!

[Spinho]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1142626730_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1142626730_large.jpg)

Now it´s time for the cloth!LOL

[Spinho]

Hi !!

=)

soundwav_: I like so much... I will draw and post here! The idea of the map is really good, I think them I will going to use it!... Thank you!
maybe a children.. (a sister of the boy!) can be a possible option too!


See you!

[a-papantoniou]

Your sketches are really nice. And the modeling has the right retro feeling to it... nice work!

[Spinho]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1142737729_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1142737729_large.jpg)

Modeling objects...

[Spinho]

Hi.

a-papantoniou: Thank´s

[alancamara]

Hey Gustavo, how are you dude? I liked the concept dude, the story around is good too. I think you could make some suitcases, luggage or something like that to show what he is doing, I think it's would be more clean, just a sugestion dude.

Cheers,

Alan

[Spinho]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1143170370_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1143170370_large.jpg)

There is the ballon...
I will add some details

[Spinho]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1143170762_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1143170762_large.jpg)

details of Balloon

[Spinho]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1143170932_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1143170932_large.jpg)

I need to do the shoes yet, and work better on the cloth (add more details)

[Spinho]

Hey ....

Alancamara, HI... I´m fine! and you?
Yes, nice ideia.. I was thinked something them around you say... thank´s!



See you people!

[Nigio]

Hi , thanks for your words at my entry. I can see your idea is nice too, and your concept sketches are good. I´ll be looking forward to your further developments.
Cheers.

[Spinho]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1143319074_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1143319074_large.jpg)

On this picture I have added more details on this cloth, and the shoes.. hehehehe... I need to do the hands yet!

I was thinked. I will made a small girl, and put in her hands a map, show where she is going... and maybe on the another hand a recipient... Is like if she is begin the journey look for some liquid, a miracle water por example...

[Spinho]

Hi...

Nigio: Thank´s!

[Spinho]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1143808681_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1143808681_large.jpg)

now have add more details in the cloth and the hands...

[Spinho]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1143809131_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1143809131_large.jpg)

Sketch of the girl..
I hope them I can made her. LOL

;)

[Spinho]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1143920269_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1143920269_large.jpg)

I have added more details on the ballon, to appear more full of air.

;)

[irananimator]

Really nice work..
Great concept!
good luck:thumbsup:

[Spinho]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1144034090_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1144034090_large.jpg)

more pics of the ballon

[smokie]

Curious on what's gonna be in the background. suitcase and luggages would really add to the story the picture tells. Just my 2 cents. Keep at it!

[3Dspline]

Awesome work on the character!

The balloon looks a bit drawf-ish to me, the scale doesn't quite suit the scene, maybe the bars are a bit too thick, also doesn't seem to have the kinda of detials the characters do.

great work regardless thou, keep it up.

[Spinho]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1144235099_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1144235099_large.jpg)

More details added

[Spinho]

Hi people... =)

iran_animator: Thank´s ;)

smokie: ho yeah man! thanks for the idea... I will do this! it´s my next step. And about the background, i didn´t have no idea yet.

3Dspline: Thank´s... You are right.. I have change somethings on the balloon! I hope them it looks better now..


See you!

[Spinho]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1144364418_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1144364418_large.jpg)

Head of the Girl

;)

[Spinho]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1144531020_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1144531020_large.jpg)

one up!

[irananimator]

Hi my Friend.
very nice character :)
watching for updates
good luck :thumbsup:

[Jaba153]

very good models here!! good continuation gustavo!

[Spinho]

Hi !!

iran_animator: thank´s

Jaba153: Thank´s

Now I need to do the cloth of her... when I have a image I post here.

Thank a lot!

[Spinho]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1145827009_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1145827009_large.jpg)

;)

[raultabajara]

poxa, nao tinha visto mais um brazuca por aqui! :)
ae, sua ideia e concept são muito legais! adorei seu estilo de desenho! lembra bem o estilo de desenho vitoriano... bacana! :)
Só acho que o cenário ficará meio vazio... acho que vc poderia fazer um galpão ao lado do balão... pra dizer "foi aqui que eles construiram...

[Spinho]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1146336671_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1146336671_large.jpg)

Here is the test of the texture. I will send more details of this.

[Spinho]

Hi....


RaulTabajara: Oooo fiii.. vi agora o seu comentario.... eu tinha visto teu topico no 3D4all.. pois é.. to aki, conversei com uma professora da faculdade ela deixou eu entregar a img do contest como projeto final.. ahuahauaha.. me passa teu topico aki pra eu comentar

vlw.. t+

[Spinho]

I removed the image

[Spinho]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1146645276_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/10763/10763_1146645276_large.jpg)

I´m sorry.. about the previous image. LOL... hauahau...

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