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Varmanaria

03-08-2006, 01:29 AM

http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/214051/214051_1141784992_medium.jpg

Title: Sarta Look At Me
Name: Tarek Dergamoun
Country: Morocco
Software: Photoshop

this my first time that i registre in this web site, i foud it very intersting because you found a lot artist who they have a different style, i would like, to have your critique in
this illustration called sarta look at me, sarta is thename of the guy,i used photoshop and finish in corel painter, i d like critique

, i will put other my works when i will finish them

thanks

DarkSkills

03-08-2006, 12:28 PM

I love the face and the hair! Something about the arms seems a bit odd to me though. Specifically the elbow/forearm area.

prophecy313

03-08-2006, 09:33 PM

Its pretty good but you need to work on your foreshortening. your lacking somewhat in that department. The arms are a bit akward as well as the legs... dont know exactly what he is sitting on but i cant distinguish the floor from the wall... :wip:

Kid-Mesh

03-09-2006, 01:41 AM

Not bad but the poportions are off just a tad. Specifically the length of the arms as that would compensate for the legs you got going. I like the style though ....anime-ish to a degree.

Nice work.

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