Character: Another incomplete sketch ...

[Slacker]

at least you got a pile :p Cool pic, the airplane looks a bit strange to me, but the rest of the pic really has a good feeling about it.

[smfjersey]

wow that kicks ass. Where is lotsa cows anyway?

[Kirt]

Originally posted by smfjersey
Where is lotsa cows anyway? It's the third gate of Hell, more commonly known as Merced. You can't miss it ... the citizens are all on anti-depresants and all the birds sing the blues.

I really hate this town ... can you tell?

[Kananga]

Thats funny, like the rabbit. :thumbsup:
Will be nice to see it coloured!

[bumskee]

wow.....kirt....
it's DISGUSTINGLY GOOD!!...
it's sick man...i wish i could draw half as good as you...
also would love to see dat in colour...

[eunuchbot]

I love the boots!!! are those papers that the rabbits are holding going to be money?? good comp. (can't see any thing to bag on)

[Kirt]

Slacker Could you be more specific about the plane? I'm not sure what you're seeing on it. Is the perspective off or what?

Kananga & bumskee It may be awhile, but I'll color it eventually. I'll repost when it's done. :wip:

eunuchbot Yes, the things the little rabbits are holding are going to be dollar bills. They're waiting for thier turn. The boots were a challenge. I must have sketched 3 or 4 different pairs of shoes for him (even tried barefoot) before I got these the way I liked them. In the end it was one of those "duh" moments where I realized boots would go better with his flight jacket and other aviator-type apparel.

I noticed a couple things after posting this. The top of the sign is at an odd perspective angle. I'm going to fix that. Two of the small bunnies are almost mirrored in clothing and expression. I've already changed the one on the right to have a open-mouthed grin. I might even change the one on the left to a girl (with cute little dress or mini).

I know the background is very light and sketchy, but from what you can make out - does it work with the rest of the image? Or should I loose the residential area and put them in a different setting?

[Rye]

Take this out of that pile and color it now! This is a great illustration, and would make a great children's book :) I think the image is too cut off on the left side, you should increase your canvas size a little. The little bunnies are just hugging the edge a little too much, plus youd get to see more of that airplane! I think the background works very well with it. It gives it the sense that these are all the kids of the neigborhood coming to ride in the plane. Good job, don't stop now!!

-Rye

[art7sayan]

Yeah I agree with Rye for the canvas size...
Hehe, nothin' else to crit on this one Kirt. Really cool drawin'...I can't wait to see this background.
Great start! :thumbsup:

(ps: I loooove your lil bunnies sooo much! Too cute!)

[typeA]

omg..meced?!?..you poor poor thing...btw wth that aint a post it note..post-it notes are the media of the next gen you know...

[eunuchbot]

i like the background, but have you tried other ones? i can't really think of anything else that would work right now...

[eunuchbot]

maybe inside the mall would be comical

[LordEzzat]

Very cool picture man...I love your style and your very simple yet effective humor,it doesnt have to come out and hit you in the face its very sutle and very humorous at the same time!!:applause: :thumbsup:

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