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Mille5

12-15-2002, 04:47 PM

hi!:)
I'm not new here bu this is only my secound post=)

This is my first CG ..=) It's done in painter classic.
It's not finished yet,I yet have to colour in a backgound and finish the shirt=)
any crits please?
or ideas for a background??

http://anime.no/galleri/show.php?id=1768

thnx:)

M.Rogne

12-15-2002, 08:10 PM

Hmm... Looks nice to me, but the hair on her left side seems as if positioned a bit too high. As for the background, I dunno... Something normal and quiet would be my idea.

Slacker

12-15-2002, 11:32 PM

i think the pic looks pretty good. the hair does look a litte strange, needs to flow a little more with the head line. don't be afraid to erase to get it just right. :) keep it up.

eunuchbot

12-16-2002, 06:33 PM

Awesome!!! the highlight on the right part of her chin, shouldn't be there (the hair is covering it right?) and maybe some more shadow under the nose and chin

Mille5

12-17-2002, 02:43 PM

oka,I tried making some improvements on the hair and I've added more shadows to her face..

http://anime.no/galleri/show.php?id=1777

eunuchbot

12-17-2002, 05:44 PM

the chin still has too much highlight, and the nose needs more shadow underneith it, the shirt and shoulders look a lot better!!! much better flow!

Mille5

12-17-2002, 07:18 PM

http://anime.no/galleri/show.php?id=1780

this probably should've been posted in the "work in progress" section :hmm:

Ill add a back ground later=)

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