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Commiekeebler
12-15-2002, 12:08 AM
This is a character for an upcoming short. You can see more of him on my website (link in the signature). Please comment! First post for critique here.

Commiekeebler
12-15-2002, 12:13 AM
here he is in his environment (guess what he does for a living?)

Oh yeah, this is done in Animation Master, 9.51e

Commiekeebler
12-15-2002, 12:17 AM
a close up of his "on the job" face

sorry about quality of images, had to 'degrade' them to fit under 40kbytes

surreal
12-15-2002, 12:37 AM
hey man, thats looking pretty sweet.. hehe tiny what a great name, one thing though, shouldn't a bouncer be garding the entrance.. and not the exit,

other then that very nice

Commiekeebler
12-15-2002, 12:39 AM
He's the guy watching the dance floor, making sure the kids play nice. There's another guy outside, making sure bad kids don't come in.

surreal
12-15-2002, 12:47 AM
oh i c! my bad lol
btw i just noticed he has a button on his shirt, whats it say???

surreal
12-15-2002, 12:47 AM
nm

Ben nice to animals, kiss a bouncer lol :)

Commiekeebler
12-15-2002, 12:48 AM
You can read it if you squint really hard...

Be nice to animals, kiss a bouncer.

Shade01
12-15-2002, 03:16 AM
I don't think he's wearing enough flair :)

psilipsycho
12-15-2002, 03:22 AM
You might want to add some sort of influence object on the biceps and shoulders to help out with deformations. The pic with his arms up make the muscles to defined and non flexible.

Looks cool!

Commiekeebler
12-15-2002, 03:35 AM
sorry about breaking the rules. I just read those, my bad.

In any case, the other images can be found on the website,
http://www.commiekeebler.com/3dart.html

Commiekeebler
12-15-2002, 03:39 AM
Yeah, there's a lot of deformations going on in that area, but I'm still not happy with the final result... maybe I'll come back to it, but at this point I think he's fit for an animation in NTSC resolution...

His rig is bloody mess, though. Never quite got the shoulders to deform right, too many things going on... :(

Lukashi
12-17-2002, 12:00 AM
Nice going commie, id say my crit would be to try some different type of lighting. the lighting is taking away from the picture

Commiekeebler
12-17-2002, 05:37 PM
How do you mean?

In the final movie, there'll be dancing colorful lights on the walls, from a 'disco ball' of sorts. But I wasn't planning on changing the lighting other than that. Can you explain what you mean? :)

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