Danger Girl Abbey Chase WIP

[Scandell]

here are some more shots

[stuf123]

Not bad. Nat bad at all. Love the hair. It works very well on that model. The nose needs to be a little sharper to me. The lips need to be a lot more fuller and defined. And the hands need to be a little more defined.

But so far a AWSOME piece of work. Can't wait to see an update.

[ill_logic]

hey there!
very nice start! it's pretty proportionate to j. scott campbell's style. the only complaint is that he draws her lips a lot bigger, especially wider & higher than what you have at the moment. the hair is really nice, did you use nurbs?
:surprised -ill

[karabo]

WOW!! I love the boobs and the ass. You are good! Great style. What software and modeling technique are you using?

[LordShaitan]

Very nice, Only crit is on the face. But thats probably because it looks like she is mid expression and not the usual closed mouth model. Looks great

[Nicool]

Hello,
Very good modeling. The caracter is very expressiv. Right done for the hair! Not you should work on the lips edges!! I'm waiting for animation (a strip... ;)

Regards:scream:

[multifrog]

Abby's lips are fuller than what you've done. There something wrong with the eyes, she needs some lids or something...The body looks pretty sweet though.

[lerpiedood]

Very nice! She is very original. Only crits are that her hips look just slightly a little odd, the ear lopes look to skinny in width, as mentioned the lips need to be more defined. The hair is awesome, the boobs are well done, and overall she is a great model.

[lerpiedood]

Woah, awesome! This is slightly off topic, but I just noticed that you live in salt lake city Utah, so do I, I live in Sandy. Do you live actually in SLC or in the county, if so what city are you in?

[psilipsycho]

I like the overall shape, and you have definitely captured Cambell's style. I would suggest that more be done on the face and especially the eyes. His characters have a lot of life in their eyes and help to make his cartoony style work. The arms look a little bit thick as well.

good job! can't wait to see the final product:buttrock:

[Commiekeebler]

Yes the eyes are off: either the irises are too small, or perhaps the eyes need to be cartoonish (i.e. not perfect spheres but squeezed to fit the shape of the stylized skull), either way, because of the size of her irises and their relation to the eyelashes she looks really scared/surprised. Changing that relation (rebuilding eyelashes or resizing the eyeball) will fix that.

The other things of note: the tip of the nose is too large. I don't think you got the nose right.

Bare midrif could use more anatomical detail - pelvis shape more obvious on the sides, navel, the surrounding area, and in the small of the back, where thin women have a couple symmetrical dimples.

[Commiekeebler]

Last but not least, the distance between the nose and the mouth is too great (compared to the distance between the mouth and the end of the chin). This contributes to the 'scared' look.

[Scandell]

thanks for all of the great comments.

(i live in midvale utah)

the overall reaction seems to be that the lips need to be fuller

ok...i will get on it


i am not concerned with the eyeballs....they are just some generic ones i tossed in at the last minute. Some say the nose....needs fixing.

I need to think about that before i change it.

Well...thanks for welcoming me to CGTALK. this was my first post.

and i will update the model this week.

Later

[sfx]

very good whith a beatifull expression
i like it

[CarlCampbell]

I really like the proportions of everything! Now crits from me so far. How about posting a good ol' wireframe?

Carl :beer:

[sumpm1]

very nice work

The mesh looks great, one obvious thing is the seam at the hips and the legs, looks good for a crease for the buttocks and the croch, but not on the outside of the leg.

Think the eyes are open too wide, and the expression(everyone already said the lips) looks like she is disgusted with something. These things could be adjusted when you rig her.

Keep up the good work and definetely keep the updates coming

P.S. The BOOBS LOOK KIND OF SMALL, YOU MIGHT WANNA MAKE THEM ABOUT 2X AS BIG

[CarlCampbell]

Originally posted by sumpm1
very nice work

1. The mesh looks great, one obvious thing is the seam at the hips and the legs, looks good for a crease for the buttocks and the croch, but not on the outside of the leg.

2. he BOOBS LOOK KIND OF SMALL, YOU MIGHT WANNA MAKE THEM ABOUT 2X AS BIG

1. Unless thats a pretty obvious VPL...

2. :thumbsup: I'm all for that idea ;)

Carl :beer:

[Ech0]

only thing is that i belive her face is a little fat other then that it looksgreat

[CarlCampbell]

Something I missed earlier... where is her belly button??? I can see the crease, but no dip...

Carl :beer:

[doo]

Great work! How about an update? Would really like to see where this is heading...

[caulfield]

hey, nice work. I haven't really read the rest of the posts, so I might be repeating, but you can work with that.

I think the ears are too high up, and they're a bit flat. try pulling them out just a bit, they don't need to be perfectly perpendicular to the head.

You could probably add some definition around the lips. make them a bit fuller. And try adding some definition to the eyes aswell. Add a few creases, and maybe just play around with making her look a little less shellshocked.

Her nipples need to be fully erect, and then you'll be sound.

[coCoKNIght]

Hehe, Abbey was my second attempt to model a face in 3d, keep it up! :thumbsup: (there is something 'bout the nose I don't like)

[minimi13]

...now this is a very nice model....

can't wait to see some updates


Keep it going



minimi13

[king of tartine]

wow, she's very good, :bounce: i likeDanger Girl, the next please...

[StoneR]

the only thing i have to say about this model is that i don't think that the shirt section between her tits should be pulled down on to the left(her left), they should go straight across, it makes it seem like the breasts are hanging uneven

[oracle]

Yeah StoneR, her tits must be lob-sided because her shirt always does that :D

http://homepages.ihug.com.au/~joshua.y/forumpic/abbey.jpg

Edit: Had to rename image file

[pigwater]

great model....love the hair...

[colt]

Great. I love her, I mean it. The picture ... you know. :love:

Update, update, update !!!

Just wondering. Doesn't Abbey have some nipples. Regarding the last pic, her shirt is so tight, they really should show through. Anyway, just wondering. :argh:

[eddy-3ddy]

I was busy with her too (ha). Not to competite with you, this will be also my only post here. I didn't start yet with the face.

Can you make a wireframe render, I have a problem with her bud.

[Scandell]

I actually emailed you a couple of months ago in reggards to you abbey chase model....but i got no reply.

Sorry guys i won tbe able to update her this week.

OK OK...i think there are too many comments about the tits.

Not all women have there nipples jutting out like some kind of whore. She is supposed to be sexy...and because i am modeling this model...i can interperate her to look like whatever i want. So...in my opinion...the tits dont need to be bigger...and the nipples dont have to show. Thanks though.
I intend to fix the lips, ears, hair, hands, and eyes.

No wireframes will be posted until i am done with the model.

[arashikage]

I concur that there is something about the face... looks a little "young" in the face, something about the eyes......

[FusionDG]

Bod & face look spot on compared to the ref pics far as i can tell 1st glance.

And you don't need to show any nipple, the cartoon doesn't show this either. Besides, everyday women manage to wear tight swim suits, spandex mixed tops and even light fabric shirts without their nipples showing through. It's the girls who are pumped full of silcone this happens to.

Looking FWD to seeing different sexy facial expressions to bring her to life :thumbsup:

[eddy-3ddy]

Was it done???

Or will there be a new update

:bounce: I wanna see :bounce: I wanna see:bounce: I wanna see:bounce:

[SPIDER2544]

looking good dude

id love to see a wire frame though

and your texturing seems to be comming along nicely

[eddy-3ddy]

Uhm, texturing...

That's my image, I think I delete that image from this topic, only if Scandell agrees with it...

Sorry for confusing your topic.

[Scandell]

yeah maybe that is a good idea 3ddy

You know your model is a great inspiration to me during the creation of my model. I even emailed you about it...but you never responded. THis is still a WIP i will put someposts....but i am busy with something else right now.

[eddy-3ddy]

Done...

The funny thing is, I never saw your e-mail...

And normally I e-mail back, sorry for that too


I really mest up here...:insane:

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