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holle
03-02-2006, 11:48 AM
Hi,

I choose script #2 for my image.
Still some things to do, but post here the actual wip.

Rendered with Cinema 4D and FinalRender2.

http://www.schoemann-unna.de/preview/fr_pub/Kitchen05_p.jpg

Sciortino
03-03-2006, 04:32 AM
Hey Holle,
I like what you did with the fan, but I especially like the walls--kind of like old plaster wall you might find in a villa in Tuscany. The wood also adds to that feel. The wood works for me on the table, but I'm not sure it does on the cabinets. Maybe it's the scale of the texture on them? Also, for such a brightly lit room, maybe the shadows on the right side (under the cabinets and near the trash can) could be lighter? Yeah, I can see Nick squinting in that kitchen!
-Paul

kary
03-03-2006, 07:44 PM
Nice feel there, photographic really. It is a nice texture on the table, but I'm thinking splinters? ;)

That desaturated with the deep shadows works for me, if I were hungover I'd feel some stabbing pain from those bright whites :)

holle
03-04-2006, 04:01 AM
Thanks for your comments.

Yes Im also not so happy with the wood of the cabines .....
...but still working on it.

niEt0
03-04-2006, 11:19 AM
Very nice image in general!... but remember tha the bottle is our "starring", now looks flat and there is no focus on it, so better position, textures on it ... I think an extra light on the left of the room will add more volumen on bottle and also to the chair on the left.

holle
03-04-2006, 08:53 PM
Very nice image in general!... but remember tha the bottle is our "starring", now looks flat and there is no focus on it, so better position, textures on it ... I think an extra light on the left of the room will add more volumen on bottle and also to the chair on the left.

Hi niEt0,

also thanks for your comment.

Here an update ...
http://www.schoemann-unna.de/preview/fr_pub/Kitchen06_p.jpg

MikeBracken
03-04-2006, 09:35 PM
Looking great! Wood textures are very nice.
-MmikeE

jeremybirn
03-05-2006, 03:10 PM
Looking good! I wonder if the bottle could have a more solid contact shadow with the table. And the composition, putting the top of the bottle right on the window frame doesn't make it very strong. Maybe it could come over the window a little?

-jeremy

holle
03-05-2006, 06:24 PM
Looking good! I wonder if the bottle could have a more solid contact shadow with the table. And the composition, putting the top of the bottle right on the window frame doesn't make it very strong. Maybe it could come over the window a little?

-jeremy

Hi Jeremy.

Yes, you are right. Will have a look at it ...

holle
03-05-2006, 07:14 PM
Ok, here a new update .....

http://www.schoemann-unna.de/preview/fr_pub/Kitchen07_p.jpg

holle
03-06-2006, 06:11 AM
... and the first wip for script 1.

http://www.schoemann-unna.de/preview/fr_pub/meg_Kitchen01.jpg

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