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GC
03-02-2006, 09:10 AM
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Title: Small Colony
Name: Gaurav Chaudhary
Country: India
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop

Hi Everyone:) This is my First Post in CGTalk, here i have tried to create a small colony of buildings in 3Ds max 6. C&C are welcome.

Jet-Black
03-04-2006, 05:54 PM
hey dude nice rendering ....but there seems to be some problem with the sky n the wall at the end.....chk out some nice reference n get it corrected

GC
03-05-2006, 04:10 AM
i m trying to give it a more natural look but through compositing in photoshop, and thnks for suggestion, i'll sure work on that.

Jackel

davezak
03-05-2006, 04:18 AM
wonderful start.

play around with the camera angles. try rendering from all over the place till you hit something dynamic.

when you look at a room. notice light sources. notice light and dark, shadows, reflections...

The back image of the sky could be nicer man.

The human eye is really good at finding patterns. you immediately notice repeating textures. (floor)

maybe muck it up? would a 'small colony' have some garbage on the floor? a little puddle, a sign on the wall, shubs. make it your world.

good beginnings!

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