The Journey Begins Challenge (2D) Entry: Rachid Jadir

[Jadir]

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[Jadir]

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sketch 2 for the intelligent voyager

[Naisart]

Ha ha, great idea! Very nice sketch and wonderfull expressions. Especially like the donkeys expression, like he´s thinking "got you sucker" :D

Cant really understand what´s going on with the apes mouth and also, the left arm of the donkey looks kind of strange, but then again, donkeys don´t ride motorbikes :) The body of the donkey also looks kind of small.

[Dutchman]

Cool stuff Rachid! :) I like the characterdesign and expressions and the 'cartoony look' is really great! Also you did a very nice shading yet, unless its just 'a sketch'! :) I reminds me a bit of the 'Monkeygirl' artwork of Jonny Duddle (only his style is quite different: more manga-like).

The only critique for now would be that the design of the upper body of the donkey is a bit 'weird', but I'm sure it'll look 'more cartoony and less 'stiff'' in your final! :)

Good luck! I'll be watching! ;)
-Gijs

[erilaz]

Wahaha! Awesome expression on that guys face! :D

[Jadir]

thanks for yours coments

[lanternkid]

crazy, crazy idea :thumbsup: this looks like a very hectic journey beginning. hope to see it finished~!

[Jadir]

thanks:)this is nice.

[Jadir]

thanks:)this is nice.

[kidster]

Great sketch !!! keep it this way !

Good luck ! I'll keep an eye on ya !:scream:

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