The Journey Begins Challenge (2D) Entry: Adam Harnett

[aharnett]

Hi guys, I'm new here so I'd like to say hello. I noticed this challenge and decided to take a stab at it. I've had a lot of fun already and I'm anxious to see everybody's progress! Please feel free to post your comments and constructive criticism, I'd really appreciate that.

[PSych]

Hi! Welcome to the challenge!
Nice sart, good luck and have fun :thumbsup:

[W-I-L]

great satrt mate.... keep em coming

[aharnett]

Thanks guys,

Do you see any potential in this particular direction?
Should I rework it, change the perspective, throw it away or start fresh?

I normally do realistic landscape paintings so this is definitely a good challenge for me. Is
there enough depth presented in my drawing? I'm wondering if it's too crowded.

I'd appreciate some direction on this one.
All the best,
-Adam

[Pawlack]

Nice start. I'm not sure about the nose. It looks like trollish one, and rest of face is rather elven. I wish you luck ;)

[R-K]

I'd recommend you to start with what you do best, that is landscape matte painting. I think they gave directions to have a massive backdrop (landscape matte painting), and then work the characters into that sketch. You don't need line art at all.

[JTD]

Pencil work is fine but it's hard to know what's going on in this picture because there is no depth. I can't be sure if these are little figures or people that are off in the distance compared to the character on the left. It's a good start that needs more of your personal touch.

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