CGTalk - low-mid poly female

soneone

03-01-2006, 07:36 PM

hi,

this is a character im working on currently ... it started for cg chat challenge 30 and ended up in a drawer for about 1/2 a year. started to rework a lot in the past days off times.

http://members.chello.at/sone-one/cgc30-01-wire05.jpg

input and crit is greatly appreciated as allways :).

cheers

ps: 3125 tris now

jfalconer

03-02-2006, 12:55 PM

the chick from Aeon Flux (just a guess)? the topology looks pretty clean, lets see her without the wires and maybe some lights...

kirouac

03-02-2006, 01:26 PM

I have some comment about the prop

- The bicep look smaller then the forearm( maybe too big for the forearm ?)

-Why there is eadgeloop for the shoulder and not for the belly and the back part. In the front view she look a little bit (squared?).

-too much space between the too leg in the pubis region ?

IMO :) sometime im wrong ...

Let see when it's will be update :thumbsup:

mindrot

03-02-2006, 03:35 PM

Nice mesh.

you might want to make the legs less straight in the profile (side view). Add a bit of bend to them and perhaps a bit more defintion in the shape. As they are at the moment they look very stiff.

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