The Journey Begins Challenge (3D) Entry: Bartosz Białek

[fgdf]

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HI - Nice to see you again and participate in another challenge... Here is my concept
Some creatures - fish-ship and 2 conected worlds one upside down...
-beer

[Nomad]

Witam,


Nice start, I`m looking forward to see more...

Good luck :bounce:

[pluMmet]

Very cool and nice idea!

[fgdf]

pluMmet : Nice to hear it thanks
Nomad : I bet you will .Cheers!
I think that lionfish (http://www.goals.com/WorldDiveQuest/Pics/Maldives/lionfish.jpg) will be a nice reference fr my fishyship :D (http://www.goals.com/WorldDiveQuest/Pics/Maldives/lionfish.jpg)

[fgdf]

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Hello - here's my start. This is primary a composition test but I made a test water shader also.

[Tirjasdyn]

Hello - here's my start. This is primary a composition test but I made a test water shader also.

I love that plum in the background...it gives nice depth to the image. I'm not to sure about the foreground though...seems very fish-like.

[dobermunk]

This looks promising!
I wonder what they must bring with them to survive inside the fish!

[Climax]

Looks fantastic Bartosz! waiting to see it comming into the third dimmension!

[fgdf]

@Tirjasdyn - thanks this plum will become a part of "the reversed world" - big city in the sky
it's just a composition test so it will change it's shape i think ;)

@dobermunk - I'm thinking of noseplugs for passagers and some gastric drops for the fish but still wip...

@Climax thanks you will later today

Ok here's the schedule

stage 1 :
front layer ground and plants

stage 2
fish-ship

stage 3
heros

stage 4
sky cities & foreground buildings

stage 5
tweaks & fixes

stage 6
clouds, rendering ,post effects ,composition

-cheers!!

[fgdf]

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Hello : I modeled a few plants They are supposed to be medium size ones .I'll model bigger and smaller species next - cheers

[fgdf]

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Hello! here's the second part of the floral work. It was basically a taxture work so i put it to shading section. I painted 19 textures and modyfied 5 photos from my flower photo album - cheers.

[thebest]

cool flowers keep going :thumbsup:

[fgdf]

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hello thanks for the comments I'm keepn' going strong ;)...anyway another few nature entities cheers ;)

[thebest]

you are nature lover aren`t you ?
cool updates keep rocking

[makaron]

this is great... lovely flower and nice and fun colors... :bounce:

[funkymunkey90]

Very nice plants, just need to do a little bit of edge working with eh texture, there is a small white outline that looks like something was miss sized in the UVs. Anyways they look great

[fgdf]

@ the best : yes I am
@makaron ::bounce::bounce::buttrock::bounce::bounce:
@funkymunkey90 : Thanks man. I put this outline with premeditation . When i spread this flowers on surface It will help me recognise whether the certain leafes are visible or not. But I it may change in future :beer:

[thebest]

@ the best : yes I am

I knew that lol :bounce:

[fgdf]

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...hehe ....To show you how much I love nature I give you another few plants. I think it is the last part now I'll spread it all around- cheers

N.L. ;)

[thebest]

...hehe ....To show you how much I love nature I give you another few plants. I think it is the last part now I'll spread it all around- cheers

N.L. ;)

keep going can`t wait for this part

[fgdf]

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As I mentioned - spreading stage is in progress. The first is grass .This is crazy work but need to be done :crazy:.
-cheers

[FlaminGlow]

this is realy going crazy the thread is also full of text colors, You have so many kinds of plants i wish you have nice way to fit them in the field the idea is not so clear to me but looks promicing keep the good work and good luck,

:D

[fgdf]

@FlaminGlow: thank's. The worst is now behind me. To me idea is very clear but the other problem may occur. To many colors may disturb focal points and whole composition I'd have to try to fix it by light and some post effects but now...

[fgdf]

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Hi - Here you can see the first attempt to floral layer composition. It need some tweaks still. Remember that lighting isn't final.
-cheers

[thebest]

hehehe nice garden u are having here :scream:

[varma]

Beautiful and poetic! Lots of great modeling!
Good luck!
:)

[Tirjasdyn]

Those colors are wonderful!! Really they shine. I love the pale green grass especially.

However they could really outshine the rest of the image.

[ChewyPixels]

I think that the flowers could end up being a bit too much. Too early to say right now. Don't know if it's the coloring or just the large amount of flowers.

Looking forward to seeing more. :)

[fgdf]

@the best : Thanks dude
@varma : Thank you very much :love:
@Tirjasdyn : I'm glad you like it . I'll try to keep my pic balanced . It will be hard but I'll do my best
@Jedi-Juice: Thank's . I'm aware that I may be forced to cut down some of the flowers I just need to have a "broader horizon" to do it.

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I fixed composition and colors I think I'm done with the flora for a while -cheers

[makaron]

ohhh soo nice with all these flowers :) and happy colors... me like it a lot... can I pick a few and take home :P

[thebest]

hey that`s pretty cool "nature lover" :twisted:

[fgdf]

@the best : I hope ;) thank's!!!
@makaron :which one would you like to get?? :>

[fgdf]

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Hello I modeled my little hero's face.
I hope you can easiy read emotional massage. I decided to keep this model simple just to focus on emotions. Now I'll model rest of his body -beer

[makaron]

thanks and I pick the one up in the left corner, with all those little white flowers on :)

and I think you have a good start on your hero´s face...

[thebest]

you have agreat start keep going :thumbsup:

[ThierryS]

Nice flower wor buddy, keep it up and good luck for the next steps!;)

[fgdf]

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HI I started modeling hero's body. I also started baby model. I think the eyes aren't perfect (nobody wants to have an ugly baby heh ) If you have any comments on it I'd be very grateful thanks.

[fgdf]

@makaron: haha I'll see what ican do ;) thanks.
@the best: :thumbsup:
@thierry2005: :buttrock:

[Womball]

Your flowers are absolutely stunning! Especially combined! Your character could use some work in terms of anatomy though. They feel stiff and formed out of a box still. A bit more detail in the face, arms and legs would help.

[fgdf]

Your flowers are absolutely stunning! Especially combined!
->Thanks !! ;)

Your character could use some work in terms of anatomy though.
-> I will defenatly ;)

They feel stiff and formed out of a box still. A bit more detail in the face, arms and legs would help
->You're right at this stage yes I need to put them in right figure first then I'll start working on details. the problem is baby face seem to plumpy I mean it's more plumpy than baby's/child's like I'm not sure where to place eyes maybe modify eye shape or it is all just my imagination??
-cheers

[Womball]

That's a baby? If so the eyes need to be a quite a bit larger. You might want to look at some of the Gerber Baby ads. Those would be a good reference.

[fgdf]

...suposed to be heh I don't want it to be a human baby little elfish i think..
I've got some references but.. or I will try somethink like this lolhttp://www.bongonews.com/StoryImages/gerber_picante.jpg
It'll fit perfectly...
bigger eyes you say I'll try any other suggestions?
thanks

[makaron]

I think that bigger eyes might do the trick on the elfbaby... :)

and a funny referens you got there... :bounce:

[fgdf]

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Hello I fixed face shape eye size etc I can see it looks much better already. I hope you like it too.
-SC

[thebest]

the mouth needs working and the jaws also keep going :beer:

[fgdf]

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Hello! I unwraped models and put in right figures (close to final)
-cheers

[thebest]

cool idea but the look as if they were flying :hmm:

[fgdf]

Thanks yes They will fly ... oh I changed my mind. ;) I just don't want to render whole scene every time . Time is money!!

[Womball]

I dunno, I think you should render them in the scene. You could render in layers or passes. As it is the look pasted on. They do have a lot of expression though!

[fgdf]

:D:D:D: ok I'll render whole scene for the next update. I'am working on dress atm -thanks&cheers

[fgdf]

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Hello - just want to share with you with my latest piece. Dress for elf-mommy.
On the left some sample coloration (and 1 sample texture map)on the other shaded model - cheers!

[makaron]

that dress will be lovely among all those flowers :bounce:

[Womball]

What a dress! The modelling is spectacular! Now all you needs is a really nice bump map for it and some color variation , the colors are a little flat right now.

[thebest]

hahaha lol cooool dress

[FlaminGlow]

i agree with friends modeling dress is great, garden is full of bright colors where i didn't see same in other works, the colors are unique and gives your work a musical Rhythm, realy nice work til now. keep it up buddy.:eek:

[fgdf]

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Hello i made some textures and modeled hair (which will be improvved soon) . I hope you like it cheers

[fgdf]

@makaron : THX I hope so :bounce:
@Womball : haha I hope you like what you can see now!! cheers!!
@thebest: fanks i'd dig to ave a one too :)
@FlaminGlow: Thanks so much nice to hear it!!

[thebest]

cool keep going :thumbsup:

[fgdf]

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Hello - I painted some textures for the male. I also remade whole model -cheers

[Nomad]

Nice progress fgdf :thumbsup:


The dress modeling and texturing are great. Good work :applause:

[thebest]

cool keep going

[fgdf]

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Hello. I want to show you guards I made. They are original size on a image. -cheers

[fgdf]

Nomad & thebest BIG THX for support :bounce::bounce::bounce:

[Womball]

I'm not sure how the knight fits into the scene. Seems kind of out of place. A rusty knight in a beautiful meadow. The hands need a lot of work they are too small and don't have much definition. The dress is a bit too shiny the shiniess would be spread out. Also you might want to play with a diffuse shader on the dress. Try and see if getting parts of the dress dark and parts light works. Otherwise its coming along nicely.

[thebest]

cool guards keep going nature lover

[fgdf]

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Hello I modeled some new heros. I fixed other like baby's face , made a sample rendering and put it all together to let you have a better view of what's going on
-cheers

[makaron]

I see you been busy :) a lot of things happens here... :bounce:

[fgdf]

@Womball : Thank's!! @ knights I hope you know how they fit now^^^. They are quite important for the story background &staff. I have other version more shiny I'll post some render soon but the "dark" version fits better... @ the hand if we're talking about males left fand it's my pain in the... neck I'm still working on it. ...i want her dress to be shiny I hope you can see this much clearer now I'm working on shader still but it's rather a matter of lighting setup As I say it's all stil WIP. I'm not planing darker colors I made a lot of tests to chose the color I got now I may add some details but color itselfe is IMO ok . thanks for comment mate:beer:

@makaron : THX i hope you enjoy a new supply of nature

-cheers!!

[fgdf]

I see you been busy :) a lot of things happens here... :bounce:

Workin' afterhours!!!:arteest: Nice to see you btw :beer:

[Womball]

The males hand isn't that bad. Its the females hand, its really tiny! Hands are about the size of the head.

[fgdf]

oh Thanks!! what a miss!! I forgot to fix it ;/ ...;) but thanks for reminder - god job!!:wise::buttrock:

[thebest]

nice but the flowers are too tall :D

[fgdf]

@thebest: and that's the way it should be!!:bounce:

[ThierryS]

Hi bartosz, nice work and mood on your picture! Good design on the soldiers too. I think the main male figure still needs some fixing, but it's probably a WIP, so I'll come back later! Good continuation man:thumbsup:

[fgdf]

Thank you very much! personally I don't like his skin shader it's still just a raw blinn one with diffusion and bump maps I'll work on it later to make it fit the whole scene coloration lighting etc. You must remamber that lighting isn't final so it may appear as different in the end. Now I'm skipping to the next stage : fish-ship. I can't be up to date with your crtqs all the time so I reserved last 30 days for tweaks & fixes so I'll take all your sugestion under consideration than. THX
-bb

p.s. If anyone has other objections please don't hesitate to share it!! It's very important to me THX to Evryone:beer:

[fgdf]

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Hi -I been besy for a while but now I'm back on track. I started modeling fish ship. There's still a lot of work needed but you can see the start.
- cheers

[makaron]

what a wonderful start on your fish ship... :wip: is it gonna be, i think the name is dragonfish? a red/orange and white striped fish...

[fgdf]

:bounce::cool::D thank you this fish is called lionfish (you was close ;) )

[elmasfeo]

the fish is looking good, and the whole idea is very original...
the dress modelling was amazing, my crit regarding the image would be that it's like full of very saturated colours.... maybe the flowers are too bright and distracting, it's difficult to see the baby...
anyway, good job, keep it up! :thumbsup:

[thebest]

hahaha lol hahaha I almost fell of my chair very funny fish keep going

[fgdf]

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HEllo - I've been quiet for a while but the work continues. I painted body textures and started working on shader . I'm still not sure whether current color setup is final or not. In future I'll work on he rest of the model I still need to add some details and tweak others.
-cheers

[fgdf]

@elmasfeo; thank's i'll keep your opinion in mind. (p.s. child should came as a surprise when watching this image so what you are sying is a good sign !! thanks)
@thebest: As always keep it real!!

[makaron]

haha.. that lionfish is funny... well done :thumbsup:

[theWOODman]

Love your wild color scheme on your neat fish. Those would have made some great teenywink colors......Ah well, too late now.

[thebest]

wow this texture makes me laught more than the first time lol
keep going

[fgdf]

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Another coloration test- what do you think?

[fgdf]

@makaron , WOODY, thebest; :beer::beer::beer:

[fgdf]

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HI - hello I started working on background worlds. I'm not quite sure where to put this image.. anyway. - here's the start I'll add some trees and buildings next. I'll fix the water make some traffic on it and figure out better lighting. Whole planet doesn't need to be too detailed becouse of those DOF issues so keep it in mind !!
-cheers

[thebest]

cool work dude keep going nature lover

[fgdf]

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Hello I added some details as mentioned. Still a wip.
Thanks

[fgdf]

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Hello I finished the planet I painted sky and sarted working on background. You can see a sample compilation here just to let you know where am I atm.
-cheers

[makaron]

I like that big crazy fish... and the planet looks nice... :wip:

[fgdf]

Thank you Mona ;):bounce:

[Womball]

This is really coming together nicely! The arms on the human characters are still a tad small. Just a quick scale should fix it. Those hands haven't been fixed yet! A hand is about the size of a face.

[fgdf]

@Womball: Thank's I haven't fixed it yet you got me :D:D I'm going to do it next:D:D I was working on Background ATM ^^ cheers !!

[fgdf]

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Hello I rendered Fish and fixed some other things Background is now ready. This is how it's going to look like when final. I'll post some closeups later
SC

[fgdf]

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Hello! I'm very close to the final. Only minor changes are possible. I hope you like it!!
-cheers

[fgdf]

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Hello ! I fixed all things you mentioned during WIP. I sized down main characters to better fit the contest instructions.
I'm almost done

[JurajMolcak]

Love this image! Wonderful style and personality you´ve achieved here :applause: Keep going and Keep it up :thumbsup: Good luck!

[fgdf]

Thank you Oweron :wavey: I'm glad to hear it. I've been away for a while .I'm writing a story atm
-cheers

[makaron]

I´m gonna sit here and look at these wonderful flowers and wait for your story...:bounce:

[fgdf]

here it is!! I hope you like it and..tell me if you find some errors&mistakes...
Cheers!!

Once upon a time in acient world of Agot there lived a Beautiful princess .Her father King Rubin was an old and tired ruler. He's last wish and goal was to find a royal fiance for his only begoten doughter. He sent his emissaries to many of the Outside worlds but none of a potential fiances was accepted by the Princess. Her heart had already been owned by a men.
Becouse the chosen wasn't born royal she had to keep it in a secret.
One day the king asked her doughter
"Please tell me sunshine is there any men in all the worlds that could gain your love?"
"Yes father I'm sure there is the one" said Princess
"Have you found him among these I searched for you"
"No father maybe you was looking in a wrong places" Said Princess
"Nonsense! how could you tell.. Who can find a better housband for you my sunshine If not your father!?" Said angry king.
"Maybe I coud?" -Asked Princess
So the king sent his doughter in a journey. She should visit inner and outside kingdoms looking for a Prince but instead she secretly settled down with her only beloved.
Months and years passed but there was still no answer from Princess. The king in anger ordered to find out where the Proncess is. Is she missing or hiding.
When king found out his doughter her chosen and a baby he asked.
"Is he the one? I gave you a choice I let you find a men from the best royal families and what? a peasant? Do you wan't my successor to be a peasant. And baby is it yours what a disaster. We're doomed!"
"But you wanted me to find out the men I could love, I did it " - bagged Princess
"I wanted you to find someone worth beeing queen's housband" he Answered and continued
"You... how can you... unclean and my doughter and a baby"
The old king didn't have much choice. The baby was useful in sustaining the dynasty.. but without the peasant. The king ordered:
"Youmy princess shall rule this kingdom alone. I'm sending this men in a journey the same I sent you some time ago. He should seek for his new love alone ,away from ones who used to love him here . "
So did the king...

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Once upon a time in acient world of Agot there lived a beautiful princess .Her father King Rubin was old and tired . He's last wish and goal was to find a royal fiance for his only begoten daughter . He sent his emissaries to many of the Outside Worlds but none of candidates was accepted by the Princess. Her heart had already been owned by a men.
Becouse the chosen wasn't born royal she had to keep it in a secret.
One day the king asked her daughter
"Please tell me sunshine is there any men in all of the worlds that is worth your love?"
"Yes father I'm sure there is the one" said Princess
"Have you found him among these I searched for you?"
"Not yet father, maybe are looking in a wrong places" Said Princess
"Nonsense! how could you tell.. Who could find a better husband for you my sunshine If not your father!?" Said angry king.
"Maybe I my selfe could do that?" -Asked Princess
So the king sent his daughter in a journey.
She should visit inner and outside kingdoms looking for a Prince but instead she secretly settled down with her only beloved.
Months and years passed but there was still no answer from the Princess. The king in anger ordered to find out where is his daughter . Is she missing or hiding.
When king found out his doughter her chosen and a baby he asked.
"Is he the one? I gave you a choice I let you find a men from the best royal families and what? a peasant? Do you want my successor to be a peasant. And baby is it yours? What a disaster. We're doomed!" Said King almost crying
"But you wanted me to find the men I could love, I did it " - bagged the Princess
"I wanted you to find someone worth beeing queen's husband" he Answered and continued:
"You.. how can you.. unclean .. my daughter and a baby"
The old king didn't have much choice. The baby was useful in sustaining the dynasty.. but without the peasant. The King ordered:
"You my dear shall rule this kingdom alone. I'm sending this men in a journey the same I sent you some time ago. He should seek for his new love alone ,away from ones who used to love him in here . "
So did the king...

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Once upon a time in acient world of Agot there lived a beautiful princess .Her father King Rubin was old and tired . He's last wish and goal was to find a royal fiance for his only begoten daughter . He sent his emissaries to many of the Outside Worlds but none of candidates was accepted by the Princess. Her heart had already been owned by a men.
Becouse the chosen wasn't born royal she had to keep it in a secret.
One day the king asked her daughter
"Please tell me sunshine is there any men in all of the worlds that is worth your love?"
"Yes father I'm sure there is the one" said Princess
"Have you found him among these I searched for you?"
"Not yet father, maybe are looking in a wrong places" Said Princess
"Nonsense! how could you tell.. Who could find a better husband for you my sunshine If not your father!?" Said angry king.
"Maybe I my selfe could do that?" -Asked Princess
So the king sent his daughter in a journey.
She should visit inner and outside kingdoms looking for a Prince but instead she secretly settled down with her only beloved.
Months and years passed but there was still no answer from the Princess. The king in anger ordered to find out where is his daughter . Is she missing or hiding.
When king found out his doughter her chosen and a baby he asked.
"Is he the one? I gave you a choice I let you find a men from the best royal families and what? a peasant? Do you want my successor to be a peasant. And baby is it yours? What a disaster. We're doomed!" Said King almost crying
"But you wanted me to find the men I could love, I did it " - bagged the Princess
"I wanted you to find someone worth beeing queen's husband" he Answered and continued:
"You.. how can you.. unclean .. my daughter and a baby"
The old king didn't have much choice. The baby was useful in sustaining the dynasty.. but without the peasant. The King ordered:
"You my dear shall rule this kingdom alone. I'm sending this men in a journey the same I sent you some time ago. He should seek for his new love alone ,away from ones who used to love him in here . "
So did the king..
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[fgdf]

That's all folks!! I hope you enjoy my part of this challange. This was for me a real pleasure to participate in this one. I'd like to thank for all your help and support. My thank's especially goes to:
makaron
Womball
thebest
Oweron
-WOODY-
thierry2005
elmasfeo
Nomad
FlaminGlow
funkymunkey90
varma
Tirjasdyn
Jedi-Juice
pluMmet
dobermunk
Climax
Now the rest is in jury's hands!!

[JurajMolcak]

YOU HAVE GOT MY COMPLIMENTS! NICE WORK! Truly love it :love: This goes stright into my inspirational folder if you don´t mind. Good luck with jury!

[thebest]

congrats "nature lover :scream: "

[fgdf]

YOU HAVE GOT MY COMPLIMENTS! NICE WORK! Truly love it :love: This goes stright into my inspirational folder if you don´t mind. Good luck with jury!

You're welcome!!

@thebest: thanks for the best support !!

[makaron]

congrats :) I :love: this one... makes me happy... and I like the story too...
well done Bartosz... :applause:

[fgdf]

congrats :) I :love: this one... makes me happy... and I like the story too...
well done Bartosz... :applause:

Thank you! Now you can finally pick up one of the flowers !

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