The Journey Begins Challenge (3D) Entry: Laeticia Freger

[flaeticia]

OK ! now its time to work :D ahahah

Good luck to everyone ! :bounce:

[Lemog]

Yeah... keep the power with you... best of luck pretty miss :thumbsup:

Already an idea maybe ? I can't wait to discover your new way for this challenge... GO GO GO... :bounce:

[Elendil_le_Grand]

Thanks and good luck to you ;)

[gpepper]

Welcome !

But where are the ants ?

[flaeticia]

Welcome !

But where are the ants ?

still on the wacom :P

thanks for the support ;)

[flaeticia]

Thanks and good luck to you ;)

Thanks mannnnnnn ! :D

[Zapan]

... Finally the beauty is here !! :scream:
Let's have some fun now !

Ants ? what ? where ? Did I miss a post where ants are mentionned ? *scrolls the page*

Have a lots of fun and best of luck !

cheers ,

-Steph

[Squibbit]

have fun girl :thumbsup:


.

[Lemog]

I'm waiting for ant too... :p

[flaeticia]

Yeah... keep the power with you... best of luck pretty miss :thumbsup:

Already an idea maybe ? I can't wait to discover your new way for this challenge... GO GO GO... :bounce:

héhé !!

thanks for the support Mr Lemog :P (i think to anything but i dont said :P)

[flaeticia]

... Finally the beauty is here !! :scream:
Let's have some fun now !

Ants ? what ? where ? Did I miss a post where ants are mentionned ? *scrolls the page*

Have a lots of fun and best of luck !

cheers ,

-Steph

Thanks boy !!
Yes ants its one part of my concept Still on the wacom now as i said to gillou le fou :P

so i try to post the picture (bad picture because im bad in drawing :P)

[flaeticia]

have fun girl :thumbsup:


.

Thanks Squibbit :)

[flaeticia]

I'm waiting for ant too... :p

Yes i know this :D
u still have to wait :P

[Crin]

Mmmmmmmmmm Wacom, can't beat it! I look forward to seeing your sketch! :wip:

[Lemog]

héhé !!
thanks for the support Mr Lemog :P

Stop now the "Mr"... that make me feel old...:banghead:



(i think to anything but i dont said :P)

mmmh ? gné ?

[flaeticia]

Stop now the "Mr"... that make me feel old...:banghead:



mmmh ? gné ?

mmmmh ? gné . :p et nianiania :p

old old
no just ure imagination :p

[Larsen]

Cool to see you in laeticia, can't wait to see your ideas, good luck :)

[beelow]

Welcome back, good luck, hope to see u finish this to the end!:thumbsup:

[gpepper]

... Finally the beauty is here !!

Who is the beauty ? :blush:

[Gunilla]

Hi Laeticia, bonne chance! :thumbsup:

[Lemog]

Who is the beauty ? :blush:
Hahahaha... certainly your last sentence here... :scream: hahahaha... good luck... Gilles ? MOHAHAHAHA... and take care... MSN eat your Life... Laeticia eat your Heart... and Lemog eat your Thread :p huhuhu

[BobbEr]

Good luck! :)

[gpepper]

Hahahaha... certainly your last sentence here... :scream: hahahaha... good luck... Gilles ? MOHAHAHAHA... and take care... MSN eat your Life... Laeticia eat your Heart... and Lemog eat your Thread :p huhuhu

I think I couldn't laugh very long, Blondinette is gonna kill me... :surprised

[flaeticia]

Cool to see you in laeticia, can't wait to see your ideas, good luck :)

Thanks to you boy ;)

For my ideas, i try to draw :D thats so hard :p h

[flaeticia]

Welcome back, good luck, hope to see u finish this to the end!:thumbsup:

hope too :)

Thanks for the support :p

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1141237519_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1141237519_large.jpg)

All right here is the concept sketch.
The first :p

[holycause]

GOOD LUCK Lady... :thumbsup:

[Crin]

I think a clearing in the grass leading off into the distance is needed to show where he might be trying to get to.

[flaeticia]

Who is the beauty ? :blush:

tu vas voir "where is the beauty" ptite b....igornette :p

[flaeticia]

Hi Laeticia, bonne chance! :thumbsup:

Thanks !! Good Luck to you Too !!! :)

[flaeticia]

Hahahaha... certainly your last sentence here... :scream: hahahaha... good luck... Gilles ? MOHAHAHAHA... and take care... MSN eat your Life... Laeticia eat your Heart... and Lemog eat your Thread :p huhuhu

what ???
Me ?
eat the heart of this old boy ? mE ?
are you crazy laurent antoine le dit Lemog (called Mister :p)

[flaeticia]

Good luck! :)

Thank you roman !!! :)

[flaeticia]

I think I couldn't laugh very long, Blondinette is gonna kill me... :surprised

rooo desuite les gros mots :p

remarque tant que c'est pas en dessous de la jupe :D

:thumbsup:

[flaeticia]

GOOD LUCK Lady... :thumbsup:

Thanks you holy !!! Very happy that u have the notch of participating to the challenge :p ;)

Good luck to you too !!

[Zapan]

Ouh , organic as well ! :D :thumbsup:

You're gonna have fun with all the grass ... I surely like grass tho :scream: ...
Great concept Laeticia (apparently I should not say beauty )

cheers ,

-Steph

[flaeticia]

Ouh , organic as well ! :D :thumbsup:

You're gonna have fun with all the grass ... I surely like grass tho :scream: ...
Great concept Laeticia (apparently I should not say beauty )

cheers ,

-Steph
Yes ! so organicccc :(

for the grass i dont know exactly how i proceed ! lol

(sisi tu peux dire beauty, c'est juste l'artiste Gpepper il déraille :p

Thanks friend ;)

[glenn23]

Cool! Your thumbnail appears lifesized.

[Dravenfr]

Good luck flaeticia !

Have fun with your ant :)

And you'r right Mister Lemog is not so old ... he have a really child spirit :thumbsup:

[kingfish3d]

hello
nice concept, you can really give a jungle dangerous feeling to this grass, but maybe can bring some more element fro a better understanding of what the story of this picture is about...
:thumbsup:

[flaeticia]

Cool! Your thumbnail appears lifesized.

what do you want to say exactly :shrug:

[flaeticia]

Good luck flaeticia !

Have fun with your ant :)

And you'r right Mister Lemog is not so old ... he have a really child spirit :thumbsup:

Thanks Dravenfr !!!
No Mister lLemog is not old :p juste the artiste Gpepper (gillou le fou) ahahahah :bounce:

[flaeticia]

hello
nice concept, you can really give a jungle dangerous feeling to this grass, but maybe can bring some more element fro a better understanding of what the story of this picture is about...
:thumbsup:

Yes i think in the future ill add more elements if i select this concept !

Thanks for the support ! ! !

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1141288520_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1141288520_large.jpg)

Ok so my second Concept sketch

[Elendil_le_Grand]

I think i'm more interst for the second but it's more hard to realize ...

[flaeticia]

SO yes !!!
thats my second concept :p

i love this one but yes im totaly crazy :D

so so so so (sophie ? :D) hard to create the people and texturing them, but i dont have all of the body to realize, so i think if im fight with myself i can make this picture !
An aged boy said : "when you participate to a challenge you must surpass yourself"

i think its true :p :thumbsup:

[flaeticia]

I think i'm more interst for the second but it's more hard to realize ...


yessss
i know :D :bounce:

[Lemog]

An aged boy said : "when you participate to a challenge you must surpass yourself"
tssssssss tssssssss tssssssss... young... very young :scream:

[Bikod]

Helo there. the 1st concept is really nice :) Good luck!

[Zapan]

Hi Beaut... oops !

IMHO !! I think I prefer the first one ... don't know why , maybe more fantasy , more friendly , more cartoony ... more cute~y !
Don't want to disappoint you , but I'm sure you could have way more fun in the first one ... your call !

cheers ,

-Steph

[Larsen]

Cool sketches so far laeticia, what's disturbing me with the first idea is that it looks so close from the challenge picture (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/journey_begins/images/journey_cgtalk_large.jpg), it's the same idea i mean no ?

The 2nd one looks interesting, i want to see more from this :p

a+

[oronox]

bon, ben mon post ne va pas etre super constructif, mais bonne chance!!
j'ai hate de voir ton oeuvre x)

[gpepper]

An aged boy said : "when you participate to a challenge you must surpass yourself"

C'est qui ? Who is it ?

[flaeticia]

C'est qui ? Who is it ?

Un mec que tu connais pas :p mais un vrai mec quoi pas comme certains hein ... :p

A guy whom you dont know :p but a Real guy whont as some :p

[Lemog]

The first is always the one which works more... the second is interesting, but more difficult to realize... and also more as an "interpretation" of the topic... as precised in the rules... that must be understandable easily... at the first view... not so much second degree :scream: (et c'est moi qui dis ça... nimportenawak... pas grave, vu que je vais me contenter de Pierredecoubertiniser sur ce challenge...)

[Lemog]

Un mec que tu connais pas :p mais un vrai mec quoi pas comme certains hein ... :p

A guy whom you dont know :p but a Real guy whont as some :p
Hahaha... it's really the war with this guy :scream:

[gpepper]

Hahaha... it's really the war with this guy :scream:

Ahahahah.
Did someone say that I'm spamming all the time ?

[flaeticia]

Ahahahah.
Did someone say that I'm spamming all the time ?

u can spam, that doesnt disturb me, Im not as someone... (the gpepper artist :p)

[larsgehrt]

Hi there,

i must say i like the first one better. I cant really visualize the sceond and or the idea behind it. The other i can more relate to and the idea comes over very good.

Also i like gras and landscapes, its pretty fun to model and to visualize. so number 1...

Cheers

[XenObuS]

Hi Laetitia,

good luck :thumbsup:


bonne chance à toi.

[flaeticia]

tssssssss tssssssss tssssssss... young... very young :scream:
looool
Are you sure ?:D

[flaeticia]

Helo there. the 1st concept is really nice :) Good luck!

Hello Bikod !!

Ok for the firt concept ;)

thanks :)

[flaeticia]

Hi Beaut... oops !

IMHO !! I think I prefer the first one ... don't know why , maybe more fantasy , more friendly , more cartoony ... more cute~y !
Don't want to disappoint you , but I'm sure you could have way more fun in the first one ... your call !

cheers ,

-Steph

Hello bichon :p

I know every body love the first and just me love the second i know i know :p
more cute-y cutee bee ? :D

(trop laide cette réponse :p if u dont understand ! tell me :p)

[flaeticia]

Cool sketches so far laeticia, what's disturbing me with the first idea is that it looks so close from the challenge picture (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/journey_begins/images/journey_cgtalk_large.jpg), it's the same idea i mean no ?

The 2nd one looks interesting, i want to see more from this :p

a+

hmm no i dont think :p

u dont know my 3d as what i see :D

[flaeticia]

bon, ben mon post ne va pas etre super constructif, mais bonne chance!!
j'ai hate de voir ton oeuvre x)

pas besoin d'être très constructif ;)

l'efficacité paye toujours :)

merci du soutien !!

[flaeticia]

The first is always the one which works more... the second is interesting, but more difficult to realize... and also more as an "interpretation" of the topic... as precised in the rules... that must be understandable easily... at the first view... not so much second degree :scream: (et c'est moi qui dis ça... nimportenawak... pas grave, vu que je vais me contenter de Pierredecoubertiniser sur ce challenge...)

hmm ok
ill print your answer and ... :D:D:D

LOL


tu dis vraiment n'importe quoi :p
j'ai l'impression que l'artiste gpepper déteint sur toi MDR :p
(je me sauve, sinon il risque de vouloir me casser la jupe :p gilou le fou :p)

[flaeticia]

Hi there,

i must say i like the first one better. I cant really visualize the sceond and or the idea behind it. The other i can more relate to and the idea comes over very good.

Also i like gras and landscapes, its pretty fun to model and to visualize. so number 1...

Cheers

ok ok :)

everybody for the number one :p

but what can i adddddd into this concept ... except grass ? :D

[flaeticia]

Hi Laetitia,

good luck :thumbsup:


bonne chance à toi.

Thanks bilou :)

[glenn23]

Never go with art by committee. If you like the second, that's definitely the better choice.

[flaeticia]

Never go with art by committee. If you like the second, that's definitely the better choice.

Yes i know :p

And youre right ;)

[flaeticia]

Even if it appears more complex to me, I think that Ill choose the second concept, especially because in my humble opinion, its more difficult to carry out ants (less references) and to emphasize to it emotions.
You dont think so ? :scream:

[Lemog]

The good choice is the one where you feel good... I prefer the first... but the second seem to be more important to your eyes... then... what can I say... final decision is yours... :)

[grundgedanke]

Really love the idea of the second one ...

[Schun]

I prefer the 1st one too (not with the ant, the other) ...
the normality and the basically of this sketch is so good and verry beautiful I think ...
only a girl can have this kind of idea !

Even a good journey with a beginning like that :D

good luck to you Miss flaeticia !

[Zapan]

Then you're doing the right choice ...
What will be your project if you are not comfortable with ?
If you think the second one fits you the most , then run for it !

Looking forward for the human modeling ... Yay :bounce:

cheers ,

-Steph

[BobbEr]

Nice concepts! :) I like the 2ond more! This is hard to realize so its cool!:) Waiting for 3d!


-Roman

[Genesisa]

hey.. how are you.. i really like your concept seems like is going to be an amazing journey :) i allways liked romantic storyes.

well you have a cool concept now you have to make it look great too.. ill bee looking at this thread, see you later and have fun.. thats what really matters . see you.

[gpepper]

T'as décidé de spammer ton propre thread ou quoi ? plus de 8 posts pour répondre à tous le monde ! tu sais, on peux éditer les posts et tout mettre dans 1 seul...

[flaeticia]

T'as décidé de spammer ton propre thread ou quoi ? plus de 8 posts pour répondre à tous le monde ! tu sais, on peux éditer les posts et tout mettre dans 1 seul...

ouè :p

et toute façon j'aime pas éditer :p
et pis oh hein non mais :p je fais ce que je veux non :D
:bounce:

non mais vilain va :p
men vé te casser le jean moi tu vas voir :D mdr :bounce:

(comme je pars dimanche je prend de l'avance sur les réponses etc etc .... MDR :D lLOLl)

[Ludal]

bonne chance la miss ;)

[rawwad]

Good luck girl! I look foward to see another great working from you :thumbsup:

[raultabajara]

I Like of you Idea!
But you scene are vere clean. You can put more objects in the scene!
(you say to me that love much objects, but you no have this objects...)

-sorry my english-

good Luck!

[flaeticia]

The good choice is the one where you feel good... I prefer the first... but the second seem to be more important to your eyes... then... what can I say... final decision is yours... :)

Yes I know Ill benefit from the next week to set the idea.
Then the advantage its like I inevitably dont hope to win, I think that Ill have a challenge against me even :p organic modeling for example :p

:bounce:

[flaeticia]

Really love the idea of the second one ...

Goooooooooood :D

Thats nice nice nice :p ;)

Thanks for the support ;)

[flaeticia]

I prefer the 1st one too (not with the ant, the other) ...
the normality and the basically of this sketch is so good and verry beautiful I think ...
only a girl can have this kind of idea !

Even a good journey with a beginning like that :D

good luck to you Miss flaeticia !

Thanks Shun ! Thanks for the support :)

Everybody prefer the first :p :bounce:

your vote was taken into account Ill deliberate later :p

[flaeticia]

Then you're doing the right choice ...
What will be your project if you are not comfortable with ?
If you think the second one fits you the most , then run for it !

Looking forward for the human modeling ... Yay :bounce:

cheers ,

-Steph

Hmmm :p humain modeling :p hmmmmmmmmmmm i like that :D :bounce:

Its a very good exercice ! human modelin' riggin' skinnin' texturin' renderin' smok.. oups :D

sorry :D

so very good exercice :p

[flaeticia]

Nice concepts! :) I like the 2ond more! This is hard to realize so its cool!:)


-Roman

Yeah its cool :D

LOL

thanks for the support and youre opinion
Waiting for 3d!

[flaeticia]

hey.. how are you.. i really like your concept seems like is going to be an amazing journey :) i allways liked romantic storyes.

well you have a cool concept now you have to make it look great too.. ill bee looking at this thread, see you later and have fun.. thats what really matters . see you.

Thanks ure nice :)

[flaeticia]

bonne chance la miss ;)

Merci ludo :)

Bonne chance à toi aussi alors :p

[flaeticia]

Good luck girl! I look foward to see another great working from you :thumbsup:

Thanks Thanks Thanks !!
another great working from me :wise::eek: that touches me much :p

[flaeticia]

I Like of you Idea!
But you scene are vere clean. You can put more objects in the scene!
(you say to me that love much objects, but you no have this objects...)

-sorry my english-

good Luck!

Its a very good & very judicious remark.
I let my imagination create full small objects progressively with the advance of the scene, because for the moment, I acknowledge you that I dont have an really idea "to furnish" the two concepts as well as possible ! Thanks for the support ;)

[flaeticia]

My friends I leave you one week !
I leave a little more than one week on holiday which is well good :p
Thus I find you soon, with possible modeling :)
Dont forget To spam my thread :p

Laeticia


:bounce::love::love::love::love::love::love:

[Lemog]

Hahahaha... Gilles can be happy... elle a recommencé avec ses multi-posts... :scream: huhuhu... anyway... best holidays for you little baby...

Laeti-dallas-multiposts... :scream: moahahahah...

[Zapan]

Have great holidays pretty one !

cheers ,

-Steph

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1141765983_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1141765983_large.jpg)

Yeah ! Ive find an internet connexion ;)

Just the start of the nose of the man :)

Hope you like :p

I like that :D

See you soon !!

[dannyfalch]

Spam, Spam, Spam, Spam, Spam, Spam, Spam,...

Hope you had a nice hollyday..

Thats one challenging concept to come home to,
it will have to be very real to work out!

Good luck...

[osgii]

Keep it up! Ne laisse pas tombé jeune demoiselle.
Good luck :)

[Zapan]

Hi there ,

Hope you have great time !
Great nose , seems neat ... hoping tosee more soon .

cheers ,

-Steph

[Elendil_le_Grand]

That's a pretty nose :scream:

[Lemog]

Damn... you work during your holidays... well... maybe you can profit more of your travel... but it's always a good news to see more of your work... the nose seem pretty started... always difficult for this part to give a good advice without is side environment... without the face... is a manner to lose our reference... just the nostrils wich appear to smooth... but I prefer to wait the following...

...nice continuation for your holidays "la miss" :bounce: :wavey:

[cgoz]

keep going! good luck

[gpepper]

Organic modeling is on the way !

[alshakno]

i will wait and c what will be happend in your thread!!!

[holycause]

you're working with maya?????????

Is that new????

[beelow]

Last sketch seems more interesting! Nice start on the model still unclear what u are going for in this challenge anywho, good luck! I am sure u will come up with something nice in the end!:thumbsup:

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1141931039_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1141931039_large.jpg)

All right ! Im not happy with this version, but i show you that.
If i can i post a wire tomorrow !
I answer another time :)

Thanks For the support !

[flaeticia]

Nobodys there ? :o

so bad modeling ? :p

hope some like my mod :p

[][ndy]

Hey Laeticia,

I really like your idea for this challenge.
I have seen some of your indoor renders and they are really good.
So I bet you won't have much trouble with that!

The organic modeling is quite good. But for the moment I am afraid, it will not look convincing if you keep up your quality on indoors... I know how organic modeling can be a pain in the... well, can be very difficult! I have my problems with this, too.

However, except of the eye area the mesh is really coming along nicely! I bet if you fix this and do a nice texturing it'll be as good as the rest of your work!

Maybe if you can show some wires the guys and gals around can help you with this area of the mesh!

[Cgkoko]

as ][ndy said the modeling looks ok. Nice and clean it seems but we would love to see some wires. I'm sure you'll fix the eye so i don't comment on that ....and good luck with the challenge!!:thumbsup:

[High3d]

Hi laeticia. Show more sketches and modeling process of your idea. Good luck for you.

[Elendil_le_Grand]

Waiting for more to critic ...

[Zapan]

Hey Pretty one !

Great start , really like the mouth area ! Seems overall pretty clean and well executed ... So now my advice would that you need to focus on proportions ... easier now you got the wire in place ! From there I would say you need to redefine the nose ... and bigger cheekbones ...
Of course some wireframes could help us to lead you on corrections ...
Looking for more ,
Hope you have great time on holidays ,

cheers ,

-Steph

[alshakno]

hi
sorry but baaaaaaaaad modelling:D
wish it be better after edit but plz make it againe and pay more attention on side of the nose
make it more smooth and at the outer corner of the eye it is a little getting at the back of the head and ...
use more refrences
gl

[maxspider3000]

nice sketch ...
for the modeling ... i guess i agree with ][ndy ...
you can try again with that one ... try to model it more than one time ...
maybe you will find that you make someone you proude with :D

good luck in your journey :)

[flaeticia]

Im back :p

Now its time to read your replies :p

Thanks to all for replin' !

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1142442264_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1142442264_large.jpg)

Ok here is the Wire :)
another will follow

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1142447912_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1142447912_large.jpg)

Wire II

[Dodgeas3d]

Hey nice work! Maybe topology seems strange... but everything looks not that bad... u just lost his cheeks and chin ;)

Some tips for u:
http://img147.imagevenue.com/loc80/th_49130_9993_1142447912_medium.jpg (http://img147.imagevenue.com/img.php?loc=loc80&image=49130_9993_1142447912_medium.jpg)

[Zapan]

Hey Laeticia !

I pretty much agree with the whole Dodgeas3d's correction pic ... so I won't bother you with same crits here ...

Just some personal tips :
-Try to find face muscles sketches ... look at the main muscles and match your lineflow to it ...
-Try to not modelise with a smooth proxy ... I mean try to work and find the right shape as much as possible with low poly version . If it looks good in lowpolys, it obviously will with Hires.
-Don't be afraid to put polys where it needs ... I mean I think it's better to add 2 edges than pulling a vertex like a nut ! .
-Don't hesitate to erase a part you're not satisfy with !

That's it ... I'm sure you're gonna make it !

Looking forward for your corrected version ! :)

cheers ,

-Steph

[Lemog]

Good progress "la miss"... I agree with previous remarks... but one thing is sure... you can continue in this way... some tweaks... et ça repart... Go Girl :thumbsup:

[alshakno]

Good
but still anatomy problems!

[alancamara]

Hey Laeticia, how are you mate? Nice progress, there are somethings to fix, but it's fast frien. I'm sure that will be great. Keep it up

cheers,

Alan

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1142696577_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1142696577_large.jpg)

The head :p not too bad not too good :p

[flaeticia]

Hey Laeticia, how are you mate? Nice progress, there are somethings to fix, but it's fast frien. I'm sure that will be great. Keep it up

cheers,

Alan

I hope this version will have positive projections !! :thumbsup:

[sathe]

It is starting to look good :)

Here are some things i noticed..

There is not much brow so try and push that out a bit.
The eyes should maybe have another edgeloop around the inside and be modified to fit the eyeball.
The lips should be a little bit rounder areound the corners. (possibly)
Finally the neck looks a little small and there is no muscle in it.
Its going well, keep it up and good luck :)

[flaeticia]

viIt is starting to look good :)

Here are some things i noticed..

There is not much brow so try and push that out a bit.
The eyes should maybe have another edgeloop around the inside and be modified to fit the eyeball.
The lips should be a little bit rounder areound the corners. (possibly)
Finally the neck looks a little small and there is no muscle in it.
Its going well, keep it up and good luck :)

I try to give best of me but its difficult !!

[flaeticia]

Good
but still anatomy problems!

Thanks :)
Yeah i know ! i try to fix it ! but its so hardddddddddddddd ! but but but i do this challenge to learn organic modeling ;)

[flaeticia]

nice sketch ...
for the modeling ... i guess i agree with ][ndy ...
you can try again with that one ... try to model it more than one time ...
maybe you will find that you make someone you proude with :D

good luck in your journey :)

hope that Ill manage to model correctly one day :p !!

I learn every day about organic modeling !! Thank you for the support !
:buttrock:

[gpepper]

You have done great progress until the first time I saw you modeling. Be patient, you are in the good way ! Don't hesitate to use some image reference in the back of your geometry.

[Cleveland]

don't worry, laeticia, organic modeling is hard but you are doing a great job for a start. and remember, humans are the hardest to do because everybody knows what they should look like...
i'm not sure whether you were going for a stylized human or a realistic proportions one. if it's stylized then only you know whether things are okay. but if you want realistic proportions then there are some basic things you should consider. eyes sit right in the middle of the head vertically, it's hard to tell from yours because you haven't finished the forehead, but bear it in mind. heads are five eyes widths across. a nose is one eye width across at the base (nostrils) etc. if that is at all helpful then you can get some free help from www.fineart.sk and look for drawing the head and hands.

well, all the best, you're gonna do fine.

cleveland

[Womball]

Cool design! I like that its not a plain head. It has character. Some crits on topology, there are 2 triangles near the nose that could be combined into a quad. Also the mouth seems to not have many edge loops around it. This can help with creating expressions, but its a necessity.

[flaeticia]

You have done great progress until the first time I saw you modeling. Be patient, you are in the good way ! Don't hesitate to use some image reference in the back of your geometry.

ok !!!

If you say to me that I have make progress then I believe you ;)
Thank you for the support !
:thumbsup:

[SONIC-X]

Hi there flaeticia,

Nice progress,I'm dawenned by the idea that I have to model human character for my scene,because I've not been able to do it siccesfull yet,I usualy stick to mech things.

I see you are doing well and every one is helping you,so goodluck and lets model!

[Schun]

Yes ! You have already do a good travel since the beginning !

So, there is few things to change (for exemple the area beetween the mouth & tne nose
which verry tall I think) ...

At the begining when i see your last render, i have got the feeling that you have choose
caricatural style (plz don't beat me ^^ ) ... but I realize that the neck is not finish for
exemple ... so I think for the moment it's hard to have a really good idea of the
proportion here ... perhaps a good way to quickly finish the head volume, then detailling
after (I know it's not the only solution but, perhaps easier to help you)

[Lemog]

I hope you will have your server ok soon, to see more of your work laeticia... hop hop hop... :thumbsup:

[][ndy]

Hey Laeticia,
may I aks at what focal length you are modeling? Your model seems a bit distorted. I have heard that a value between 75 and 80 would be good for face modeling.

[nemirc]

so we meet again... good luck :thumbsup:

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1143127330_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1143127330_large.jpg)

After modification :) I like this one ! Ok the eyes are bad but i thing the global head is better !!

[DimitrisLiatsos]

Yup..it's better, but maybe make it a bit wider...or there is a focal issue on camera...make a render with a 60-80mm camera...

Keep going French lady ... :)

[flaeticia]

Yup..it's better, but maybe make it a bit wider...or there is a focal issue on camera...make a render with a 60-80mm camera...

Keep going French lady ... :)

All right dimi Thats all right now ? :p


http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/6163/thejourneybeginsmod521wk.jpg

[alancamara]

Yes, overall the head is better now, for sure. Just little adjustments on the eyes and he will be good. I agree with Dimitris, try to do a render with 60-80mm Keep it up dude

cheers,
Alan

[flaeticia]

Yes, overall the head is better now, for sure. Just little adjustments on the eyes and he will be good. I agree with Dimitris, try to do a render with 60-80mm Keep it up dude

cheers,
Alan

Thats ive just done :D

Ill try make the adjustments on the eyes :)

Thanks alan ;)

[flaeticia]

so we meet again... good luck :thumbsup:

Thanks !! good luck to u too :)

[Vedic-kings]

Looking good:)

I think if you work on the eye area, more so define the eyelid more, and that should look much better.

Keep it up:thumbsup:

[Zapan]

Looking better each time !

Just the cheekbones are still missing in my opinions and also a wider face and there you are ...

Keep going Laeticia , definitely on the right track !

cheers ,

-Zapan

[DimitrisLiatsos]

All right dimi Thats all right now ? :p


http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/6163/thejourneybeginsmod521wk.jpg


My bad...i always mess the meaning in this...u need to change the angle of view from 28 to 60 - 70 at least...i explained wrongly before...my stupid Engrish is to blame..lol....

again a bit wider face too... :)

[flaeticia]

ok ok :D

if i zoom on the character its more deformed isnt it ? :p

i dont like this angle of view :D

[SergioSantos]

There is something wrong around the lips...
you need to refine the lips and be very focused in this area, try to look for references, always try to catch as much references as you can.

[flaeticia]

There is something wrong around the lips...
you need to refine the lips and be very focused in this area, try to look for references, always try to catch as much references as you can.

Im always a little bit afraid to modify the geometry of the lips because for me its the most complex part to realize : Ive can be wrong !
I nevertheless will try to look at that more closely.
how can i make to widen the face ? :p

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1143238103_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1143238103_large.jpg)

little corrections ...

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1143442663_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1143442663_large.jpg)

ok :p

here is the ear, no still attach to the head ! Hope you like it ! thanks to the support !

[flaeticia]

Spam, Spam, Spam, Spam, Spam, Spam, Spam,...

Hope you had a nice hollyday..

Thats one challenging concept to come home to,
it will have to be very real to work out!

Good luck...

I delayed a little to answer but I answer !
I had good holidays thank you :)
good luck to U too :)

[sathe]

Hi again flaeticia, try to down the sss, with the sss fast skin shader. Real human skin only scatters light like that in the most extreme of situations like having a torch shine through the skin.
Also, i think your model is coming along nicely now. I hae one last crit for it. try and raise the cheek bones a bit up and outwards. I beleive this will correct the long aperance of the face.

FINNaannlly...look up some nice mental ray lighting tutorials for maya as it is almost always the case that lighting is what brings out the materials true power.
Good luck, and keep going :)

http://lamrug.org/resources/skintips.html

Here is a useful site for you.

[Rayraz]

SO yes !!!
thats my second concept :p

i love this one but yes im totaly crazy :D

so so so so (sophie ? :D) hard to create the people and texturing them, but i dont have all of the body to realize, so i think if im fight with myself i can make this picture !
An aged boy said : "when you participate to a challenge you must surpass yourself"

i think its true :p :thumbsup:


Do i sense the prescence of a young artist eager to learn and improve and reach for that empty chair that's waiting there right next to the big names in the CG world? :D Well then i gotta warn ya ;) Blonde and pretty u may be, but im feedin for that very same spot.. hehehe just messin' 'round ofcourse ;) looking forward to see what u come up with!

Anyways, love that 2nd sketch, i think that could really be a great concept. However... what im thinking immediately after seeing it (im not sure if this was ur idea already?) is the journey to the astral planes? its perfect with the couply lying in the bed. It is when the spirit leaves the body in our sleep and travels to magical places in alternate universes where we live out our dreams.
If you might find the idea interesting.. you could possibly look into stuff about otherkin. Ok, so u gotta be a little silly to believe in otherkin, but one gots to admit.. it sounds so friggen cool!!

ok i'll stop actin like a nerd now and continue browsin ur thread ;) good luck with ur entry girl!

[Lemog]

Yeah... great progress girl... I really like the ear... just the shader is quiete strange to read the picture... maybe too much between plastic and candle... but the shape seem very good... good work Laeticia... keep your hand on :thumbsup:

[Zapan]

Yep I agree , nothing to crit on the shape of that ear !
Can't wait to see the complete face with it !:)

Come on miss ! you're doing great ! :bounce:

cheers ,

-Steph

[ThomasWest]

Hi Laeticia...

I saw the ear but... where should be put the ants... ??? ;)


Go ahead, good luck for contest.

[SONIC-X]

Hey Laeticia,

Your model is comming along great,keep up the great work and have fun.

[flaeticia]

Hi again flaeticia, try to down the sss, with the sss fast skin shader. Real human skin only scatters light like that in the most extreme of situations like having a torch shine through the skin.
Also, i think your model is coming along nicely now. I hae one last crit for it. try and raise the cheek bones a bit up and outwards. I beleive this will correct the long aperance of the face.

FINNaannlly...look up some nice mental ray lighting tutorials for maya as it is almost always the case that lighting is what brings out the materials true power.
Good luck, and keep going :)

http://lamrug.org/resources/skintips.html

Here is a useful site for you.

yes I know that I have a pb with the sss but thats not a big problem !
Ill solve that rather quickly I think.
Its right only one problem of shader and Im only with modeling !
Thank you for the link, I knew it :thumbsup:

[flaeticia]

Do i sense the prescence of a young artist eager to learn and improve and reach for that empty chair that's waiting there right next to the big names in the CG world? :D Well then i gotta warn ya ;) Blonde and pretty u may be, but im feedin for that very same spot.. hehehe just messin' 'round ofcourse ;) looking forward to see what u come up with!

Anyways, love that 2nd sketch, i think that could really be a great concept. However... what im thinking immediately after seeing it (im not sure if this was ur idea already?) is the journey to the astral planes? its perfect with the couply lying in the bed. It is when the spirit leaves the body in our sleep and travels to magical places in alternate universes where we live out our dreams.
If you might find the idea interesting.. you could possibly look into stuff about otherkin. Ok, so u gotta be a little silly to believe in otherkin, but one gots to admit.. it sounds so friggen cool!!

ok i'll stop actin like a nerd now and continue browsin ur thread ;) good luck with ur entry girl!

no soucy ;)

thanks for the support and the ideas :bounce::thumbsup::buttrock::applause:

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1143663721_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1143663721_large.jpg)

Ok

a very special thanks to the cadet :)

so so so cool :D

kiss to you :)

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1143664413_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1143664413_large.jpg)

ok another angle of view for the head !
im happy with this result !

hope u like it too :)

[dannyfalch]

Hi Laeticia

Very nice face modeling!

I have one input, normaly the distance from the chin to the middle of the eye is the same as the distance from the middle of the eye to the top of the head.

[flaeticia]

Hi Laeticia

Very nice face modeling!

I have one input, normaly the distance from the chin to the middle of the eye is the same as the distance from the middle of the eye to the top of the head.

:shrug: thats not the same ? :cry::cry::cry::cry::cry::cry::cry::cry:

[Lemog]

Maybe it's due to the focal ? but that seem to long for the low part... the forehead is not anough high... (pas taper...:scream: )
and maybe you can reduce a little the big space just under the nose... that can contribute to save size for this part...

[flaeticia]

Maybe it's due to the focal ? but that seem to long for the low part... the forehead is not anough high... (pas taper...:scream: )
si si :D taper :D :wip: pan pan qq :p

and maybe you can reduce a little the big space just under the nose... that can contribute to save size for this part...

never I will leave myself with this sh*t heaaaaaad :D


-


jamais je vais m'en sortir avec cette tete de meeeeerde :D

[XenObuS]

jamais je vais m'en sortir avec cette tete de meeeeerde :D


mais ou tu va t'en sortir, fonce championne... :p

[Lemog]

Hey toutounette... it's not so much to tweak... 5 or 10 mn to have something better... it's really nothing... go go go... you can do it... you must do it :thumbsup:

[dannyfalch]

:shrug: thats not the same ? :cry::cry::cry::cry::cry::cry::cry::cry:



He he,. sorry.:)
it does not seam the same, maybe (as Lemog says) make the space under the nose smaller, and add a bit to the top of the head,.
But he has a nice roman emperor style now.

Here is a facial proportion image i googled,.
http://www.arteducationstudio.com/face.jpg

[gpepper]

Bah la, c'est mieux, sans aucune comparaison !

[dannyfalch]

Bah la, c'est mieux, sans aucune comparaison !

yeah, you might be right, but it just caught my eye..

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1143718956_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1143718956_large.jpg)

Final retouchs :)

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1143722200_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1143722200_large.jpg)

Final retouch

[Lemog]

Better... more better... your modifications are good... but timid... the forehead is always little... and the part under the node very high... but at this step... it's especially a question of taste... you can choose to keep him like that if you want... of course, there's some guys like that :scream:

good work Toutounette :thumbsup:

[Crin]

I think the face is excellent but the rest of the head is an odd shape, although this may be intentional and also won't be as obvious once you have hair on the model. Good work! :)

[][ndy]

Hey Laeticia,

very nice improvement on the face.
I think, however, that the eye area still looks unnatural. But I know that this is the hardest part of the whole face.
Maybe this can help you to improve this. Clickie! (http://www.okita.com/humanFace/index.html)

[FDPC]

the 2nd sketch is realy a girl's idea: when I have say to my girlfriend that I'll do this challenge, she gaves me this idea, of the marriage, in 3 seconds lol... maybe she wants to marry... marry.... with me??! OMG!!! AHHHHH!!! Help... lol :p

Good luck.

-

Bon debut de modélisation en tout cas. bonne chance. :)

[flaeticia]

mais ou tu va t'en sortir, fonce championne... :p


J'espèreeeeeeeeeeee !

Mais je ne suis pas une championne :D

[flaeticia]

Bah la, c'est mieux, sans aucune comparaison !

cool alors :)

ça me fait plaisir ;)

[rattlesnake]

Hello..well this head had a good evolutioni from the first try..i like it much more now! u are doing very good details, ears folds looks very cool, keep going!!:wip::bounce::bounce::bounce:
cant wait to see the textures on it

[][ndy]

J'espèreeeeeeeeeeee !

Mais je ne suis pas une championne :D


As far as my french knowledge goes (5 years in school) this means something like:
"I hopeeeeeeeeeeee!
But I am no champione."

Oh pretty girl, do not underestimate your skills with a 3D-program!
I think everything someone could imagine, he/she can achieve!
You are very good in modeling interiors.
So you can do organic easily!

Just believe in yourself!


p.s.: I wish, my French would be better!

[flaeticia]

Thanks for the support !

i answer in one week because lots of work ;)
but u can spammmmmmmmmmm :p

see u ;)

good luck to all :)

[Rayraz]

I think the shape of the back of the head needs some work, but the face is like so much better right now! really good progress there girl! *thumbs up*

[SuperXCM]

Really good progression for the head, keep this way, i think he will look really cool, the space bettween mouth and nose, doesn't disturb me, some guys look like that, it give him a nice look, waiting to see the next update. Good job! :thumbsup:

[beelow]

Keep at it as the human form is the hardest thing to get right, just keep at it u'll get it right, just observe what u are doing, meaning have referenced pics, ur measuring but guessing at the same time! Good work so far I would say he needs some cranium in the back!:thumbsup:

[GonzaloGolpe]

Agree with the cranium =) But now he looks like those old pharaoh sculptures without the mask,hehe.

Good luck to you,neighbor:cool:


Zalo

[gpepper]

Bon, on attend...

[flaeticia]

Bon, on attend...

ca va je peux arriver tranquille :D non mais :p

ok im there ! lets go to work ;)

[flaeticia]

so, I began the modeling of the girl, but its much more difficult !
Ill probably show u an update before this evening, but the level is however very low :D
Well Im look at myself in the mirror of the bathroom...:D

[Zapan]

so, I began the modeling of the girl, but its much more difficult !


just change the music you're hearing !! :twisted: ... you can't do great things when someone's yelling wesh wesh in your ears :scream: ...

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1144860273_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1144860273_large.jpg)

yessss the girl now !

[][ndy]

Hey Laetica!

When using your mirror picture then nothing can go wrong!

As for your modeling:
Very nice. But I guess somehow you got it with big noses! But there is nothing wrong with this!
As for the mouth: Since I have no wireframe picture of it I guess you used two lines close together to form the "sharp edge" between mouth and face. I would suggest to move those two line more apart towards the corners of the mouth. So the sharp edge will disapear more towards the end and it will blend in nicely!

Well, just my two cents, or euro cents!

Keep it up!

[gpepper]

[ndy']But I guess somehow you got it with big noses!

She have a big nose...
oups...

[][ndy]

She have a big nose...
oups...

:D I thought the nose relation was only for men...

[thedirtypaw]

i think you shoul consider how detailed and smoothed these faces and actually all the details of these two characters because in your composition they'll be pretty small . so.. you might want to try a test render with some boxes instead of all the furniture or something from the sketch, add the faces , the put it over the sketch and see how big it shoul be for the final render, for the quality of the textures , for the antialiasing options and so on..
good luck and keep it up !
:thumbsup:

[Zapan]

aaaarf ... almost have missed that last update :scream: ... wesh !

cheers ,

-Zapan

[flaeticia]

[ndy']Hey Laetica!

When using your mirror picture then nothing can go wrong!

As for your modeling:
Very nice. But I guess somehow you got it with big noses! But there is nothing wrong with this!
As for the mouth: Since I have no wireframe picture of it I guess you used two lines close together to form the "sharp edge" between mouth and face. I would suggest to move those two line more apart towards the corners of the mouth. So the sharp edge will disapear more towards the end and it will blend in nicely!

Well, just my two cents, or euro cents!

Keep it up!

fortunately this girl doesnt look like to me :D
I trouce thats more difficult to model a girl than a boy ... most probably because them guys, dont have our class :D

[flaeticia]

just change the music you're hearing !! :twisted: ... you can't do great things when someone's yelling wesh wesh in your ears :scream: ...


no no :D
the music is good :D

wesh wesh yOooooooooooooooooo

HH :D

:bounce:

[flaeticia]

She have a big nose...
oups...

no :twisted:

its a good little buty nose :D :thumbsup::scream::bounce::buttrock:

[flaeticia]

i think you shoul consider how detailed and smoothed these faces and actually all the details of these two characters because in your composition they'll be pretty small . so.. you might want to try a test render with some boxes instead of all the furniture or something from the sketch, add the faces , the put it over the sketch and see how big it shoul be for the final render, for the quality of the textures , for the antialiasing options and so on..
good luck and keep it up !
:thumbsup:


youre right :D
completely but between us, just between us then, Ill not finish this challenge which is completely except subject :D
I learns organic modeling. I dont know if I learns well and quickly, or the reverse, but I learns and its the essential :p !

[flaeticia]

aaaarf ... almost have missed that last update :scream: ... wesh !


cheers ,

-Zapan

oué c'est clair wesh wesh relou ça :D

thats true :D

impossible to translate all of my sentences :D

[flaeticia]

I think the shape of the back of the head needs some work, but the face is like so much better right now! really good progress there girl! *thumbs up*

ThaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaankS ;)

[flaeticia]

Really good progression for the head, keep this way, i think he will look really cool, the space bettween mouth and nose, doesn't disturb me, some guys look like that, it give him a nice look, waiting to see the next update. Good job! :thumbsup:

Yes this space is not disturbing :D
Ive see an movie with an american actor, harrison ford, wich have a big space between mouth and nose :D
I dont remember any more of the title of film, Im concentrated on this space between the nose and the mouth :D

[flaeticia]

Keep at it as the human form is the hardest thing to get right, just keep at it u'll get it right, just observe what u are doing, meaning have referenced pics, ur measuring but guessing at the same time! Good work so far I would say he needs some cranium in the back!:thumbsup:

ok !!!
thanks ! i try to fix it after but hard :p i detest tweaking :D

[flaeticia]

Agree with the cranium =) But now he looks like those old pharaoh sculptures without the mask,hehe.

Good luck to you,neighbor:cool:


Zalo

LOL :D

thanks for the support

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1145016143_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1145016143_large.jpg)

Adding details :D

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1145016611_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9993/9993_1145016611_large.jpg)

The Wire Frame Here :p

[flaeticia]

Hope the modeling isnt too bad :blush::blush::blush::blush::blush::blush::blush::blush::blush:

[JohnnyFreeman]

In my humble opinion, you should stop those renders, remove the glowy text and concentrate on the important parts!
Clearly your model is far from finished. I can't spot one area that looks finished. Looks like a man to me..

If you want constructive critics you should not hide your mistakes behind glowy text and perspective views. Lets see the same view as you see in the viewport and I'm sure you will get more constructive comments to improve your modeling.

[flaeticia]

In my humble opinion, you should stop those renders, remove the glowy text and concentrate on the important parts!
Clearly your model is far from finished. I can't spot one area that looks finished. Looks like a man to me..

If you want constructive critics you should not hide your mistakes behind glowy text and perspective views. Lets see the same view as you see in the viewport and I'm sure you will get more constructive comments to improve your modeling.

I never said that it was finished ok ?
I dont hide anything whole ... the viewport is as I show to you... if you arent happy, doesnt post your unpleasant mood thanks
bye

[scootermaya]

I never said that it was finished ok ?
I dont hide anything whole ... the viewport is as I show to you... if you arent happy, doesnt post your unpleasant mood thanks
bye

Il l'a cherché :scream: !
Anyway, I like the wire Laeticia :bounce: . If I may, 3 points comes to me on this vue
1° the mouth is a big unscaled frome the rest of the head (maybe just te lower lip?)
2° the nose is nice but the connection nose/face, is a bit too sharp I think.
3° The eyes are in a bit big as well

Bon courage ! :thumbsup:

(putain je vais me faire jeter aussi :D )

[flaeticia]

Il l'a cherché :scream: !

putain tu la dit .. quel fils d'encdzoi hgùbno :D
ROLF



Anyway, I like the wire Laeticia :bounce: . If I may, 3 points comes to me on this vue
1° the mouth is a big unscaled frome the rest of the head (maybe just te lower lip?)
2° the nose is nice but the connection nose/face, is a bit too sharp I think.
3° The eyes are in a bit big as well

Bon courage ! :thumbsup:

(putain je vais me faire jeter aussi :D )

non non tu vas pas te faire jeter :p
tu as raison mais le problème c'est que je ne sais pas comment résoudre :( ;)

mais merci !!

Thanks for ure remark :)

[JohnnyFreeman]

OK. Let me get back to you when you have finished your model then

:applause:

[scootermaya]

putain tu la dit .. quel fils d'encdzoi hgùbno :D
ROLF




non non tu vas pas te faire jeter :p
tu as raison mais le problème c'est que je ne sais pas comment résoudre :( ;)

mais merci !!

Thanks for ure remark :)


Je t'envoie un tut rapido soon (je suis en plein ds l'aprentissage des visages lol)

[Womgoose]

Nice work on the model so far - Very feminine features.

The mouth looks great but there appears to be some pinching in the corner.
I can't quite see close enough to work out why - Topology looks fine from this distance hmm.

Do you have front/side wires too and maybe a closeup of the corner of the mouth? :)

[flaeticia]

Je t'envoie un tut rapido soon (je suis en plein ds l'aprentissage des visages lol)

Cool :D merci ;)

[flaeticia]

Nice work on the model so far - Very feminine features.

The mouth looks great but there appears to be some pinching in the corner.
I can't quite see close enough to work out why - Topology looks fine from this distance hmm.

Do you have front/side wires too and maybe a closeup of the corner of the mouth? :)


Thankkkksssss !!
Ill post the Front and side view soon :)

For the mouth, its very probable that there is a problem, little problem but problem !
The mouth, and the procedure to attach the ear, are very complex task for me :shrug:
And to find the good human shapes too :p

Thanks for the support !

[flaeticia]

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Here is the Viewport ;)

[Gunilla]

Hey - nice work on the modeling! Are you using yourself as reference? She looks a bit like you I think. Great progress :thumbsup:

[Zapan]

AAAAhhhahahahaha Gunilla you're the best !! ... yes Laeticia put on her a cap to see ... riprisente ....

[Lemog]

Yes... I must agree... pretty wire so far :thumbsup:

why the bloody letters for "maya viewport" ? it's not a crime to used Maya... it's even an honor :scream: hahahaha...

[gpepper]

Mieux encore...
Et en rendu lissé, ça donne quoi ?

[flaeticia]

Hey - nice work on the modeling! Are you using yourself as reference? She looks a bit like you I think. Great progress :thumbsup:


Yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Thanks Gunie :)
that really pleases to me, to see you here !:thumbsup:
Thank you for your support !
And to answer your question, no I Dont caught in reference, although Im often observed in the mirror to try to understand :scream: :bounce:! kisses :thumbsup:

[flaeticia]

AAAAhhhahahahaha Gunilla you're the best !! ... yes Laeticia put on her a cap to see ... riprisente ....

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Bordel :D :scream::bounce:

No thats false :scream:This guy is totally crazy :scream: He learns special songs usin" mens which cry every time :D with my cut professor, I named LoLo we prefer other good song :D wesh Lo http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/7076/lol26ij.jpg riprisente :D

[flaeticia]

Yes... I must agree... pretty wire so far

why the bloody letters for "maya viewport" ? it's not a crime to used Maya... it's even an honor hahahaha...

ah un peu de sagesse dans ce monde de fou :D
les lettres de sang pour wire sanguinaire :D ou wire pas beau, mais tu as l'air de l'apprécier le fameux wire :D
c'est plutot cool alors :)

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ah:D a little wisdom in this insane world :D
sanguinary letters for wire:D or wire not beautiful, but you seem to appreciate it, the famous wire:D thats rather cool then :)

[flaeticia]

Mieux encore...
Et en rendu lissé, ça donne quoi ?

cool merci :)
ben en lissé ça donne un truc pas top voir plus avant :D
je refine la shape :D les oreilles et compagnie et je reposte mais pas avant ce soir à mon avis :(
busy busy pour faire du maya :(

[flaeticia]

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So now, after modeling, tweaking, there is the first part of the texturing ! Hope you like it !

[gpepper]

Franchement ça le fait ! Il y a vraiment du mieux !
Les cils ne sont pas encore au point mais le reste du visage passe vraiment bien ! Les lèvres sont pas mal.
Par contre, je crois ne pas trop me tromper en disant qu'il ui manque des oreilles...

Great, she is better now !
The eye Lashes are not perfect but the face is nice. texture's Lip is cool !
Anyway I think I couldn't be very wrong if I say taht some ears are missed...

[scootermaya]

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So now, after modeling, tweaking, there is the first part of the texturing ! Hope you like it !

Ooooowwwwww ! Much progress here :love: ! And she's cute too ! Hey, She even look like you! Did you take you as model? Give her some long blond hair and we'll see:bounce:

I think the eyes are a bit big, maybe that's what emplifies the lashes... Good job girl !:thumbsup:

[gpepper]

And she's cute too ! Hey, She even look like you! Did you take you as model? Give her some long blond hair and we'll see

rooh, la technique d'approche Michel. ;)

[scootermaya]

ok ok , essaie avec une casquette blanche alors !

Try with a wite cap then !:scream:

[Rayraz]

wow, tons of progress! great job on the head model! It's beginning to look far more real. Only thing that kinda bugs me is the lips.. not the shape, but the texture. there's something about the texture that makes it look like theres something wrong but i cant put my finger on it what it is....

[flaeticia]

Franchement ça le fait ! Il y a vraiment du mieux !
Les cils ne sont pas encore au point mais le reste du visage passe vraiment bien ! Les lèvres sont pas mal.
Par contre, je crois ne pas trop me tromper en disant qu'il ui manque des oreilles...

Great, she is better now !
The eye Lashes are not perfect but the face is nice. texture's Lip is cool !
Anyway I think I couldn't be very wrong if I say taht some ears are missed...

Oui les oreilles c'est vraiment la ou je bloque ( en fait elles sont faites, mais c'est la soudure qui me chagrine, j'arrive pas :( mais je vais y arriver :D).

Yes the ears its really where I block (they are made, but its the welding which grains me, I dont arrive to do that :( but Ill arrive there :D)

Thanks for the support !

[SONIC-X]

Hi there flaeticia ,I see you are comming along nicely now.

I battle with this type of modelling but have found that the joan of arc tutorial to be one of the best and and most comprehensive tut's that I have seen so far.It is for max so I don't know what software you are using.Have a look at it ,maybe there is something in there you can use.

Here is the url. (http://www.3dtotal.com/ffa/tutorials/max/joanofarc/joanmenu.asp)
Good luck.

[Schun]

nice update
the nose and mouth shape are really good now, I think !
I'm not sure, but something is disturbing me into the eyes ... not the size
(some girls have really big eyes in this world) but the shape ... perhaps
we could better see with a front view if you do it !


For the ear, I have the solution :
put her a bonnet ... not really realistic (quoique...:buttrock: ) at bed, but ...
(yes, sorry i'm only joking :D )




http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/7076/lol26ij.jpg


:eek: :eek: pure lolo style ^^

and keep the faith (like bon jovi)

[DimitrisLiatsos]

:cool: Bonjour Laeticia. Vous allez mieux en cela que je suis heureux de voir. Si vous ne vous occupez pas d'une petite idée... sont plus loin assortis à la nuance/aux couleurs autour d'elle des yeux - des lèvres et des paumettes. Vous êtes très près de rendez son visage plus doux. Heureux de vous revoir.

Votre ami Dimi.

I am speaking French all the way today...lol..God help us...:p

[gpepper]

:cool: Bonjour Laeticia. Vous allez mieux en cela que je suis heureux de voir. Si vous ne vous occupez pas d'une petite idée... sont plus loin assortis à la nuance/aux couleurs autour d'elle des yeux - des lèvres et des paumettes. Vous êtes très près de rendez son visage plus doux. Heureux de vous revoir.

Votre ami Dimi.

I am speaking French all the way today...lol..God help us...:p

Ahahah Funny to read you writing french ! you can say "tu" instead of "vous". You can be polite with Laeticia but know know her since a long so you can say "tu". That's what we use when we were buddys...

[alshakno]

Oh my God
that is so tokhmakh!

[gpepper]

Oh my God
that is so tokhmakh!

What do you mean by "tokhmakh" ?

[flaeticia]

What do you mean by "tokhmakh" ?

Yes exactly ! what do you want to say ? :eek:

[flaeticia]

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Now the girl with hair !
I think its not too bad ! I post others hair test soon !
Hope u like it :)

[coochaki]

Oh my God
that is so tokhmakh!
oh yes i agree with you asshkano!:D
hey flaeticia
he means that the eyeball of your characters do not looks good!( the left eyeball) :D

[Gunilla]

Hey, nice update! And now she looks even more like you, you only have to add the hat :)

[Lemog]

Whaouw... latest update are really good... much progress here... First hair test is already very good, a good starting point... I'm sure you can obtain something better and perfect...
Maybe with this kind of hairs, you will not oblige to add ears ? :scream: hahaha...

Now, Sincerely, the part wich need more work is the eye's shape... each eye appear too much symetrical... very large... and eyelids too much uniform...

In any case, it's nice to discover much progress here... continue like that "whitecapgirl"... wesh :thumbsup:

[glenn23]

The hair looks very nice. And the mouth is perfect! I agree that the eyes aren't finished yet but if you can make the mouth look so incredible I'm sure you can tweak the eyes.

Great update.

[ChewyPixels]

Good progress Laeticia. Perhaps you can add some more around the hairline. She looks a little bald in one spot. :)

I too will need to play with some hair soon once I finish modeling my character.

Keep going! :wip:

[flaeticia]

Good progress Laeticia. Perhaps you can add some more around the hairline. She looks a little bald in one spot. :)

I too will need to play with some hair soon once I finish modeling my character.

Keep going! :wip:

Yes i know ;)
Its the first step for the hair. Ill try too add more hair in the front.
Ill try to change the hair cut too :)
Thanks for the support !

[nemirc]

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Now the girl with hair !
I think its not too bad ! I post others hair test soon !
Hope u like it :)

Oh my! she looks just like you!!! :eek:

[gpepper]

Oh my! she looks just like you!!! :eek:

Maybe in the morning after she woke up...

[MT-Cup]

Nice character, and I agree with nemirc; looks like you! :thumbsup: