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EliAbramovitch
02-28-2006, 12:38 PM
Eli Abramovitch is entered in the "The Journey Begins Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/journey_begins/view_entries.php?challenger=9762)

Latest Update: Post Effects and Compositing: The Leprecons Travel
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1147033361_medium.jpg (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=3523240#post3523240)

EliAbramovitch
02-28-2006, 12:41 PM
i'm really excited about this challange and hope to complete it in time...

EliAbramovitch
02-28-2006, 12:43 PM
this will be my main character...
i'm working on a concept also....
http://d152564.u33.1host.co.il/fileupload/store/leprecon.jpg

EliAbramovitch
03-01-2006, 05:58 AM
i had the body ready but i wanted first to get comments on the head since i think this redner dipicts the best way of how it looks.
here is a full shot:
http://grm.m.walla.co.il/briefcase/00f3/e/l/i/m/i/c/k/y/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/r/200602221352201600/200602260018161749/finish15.jpg

Joblh
03-03-2006, 06:05 PM
really nice model so far :)
the only crit i've got is that the ear could be put a little more backwards.
And for texturing, don't forget to add durt :)
Keep up! :thumbsup:

EliAbramovitch
03-10-2006, 10:20 AM
hi- thnx for the comments.
i've beeing working on one of the trees- and i cant decide if the center of the log is better with or without the circles in the middle.
http://d152564.u33.1host.co.il/fileupload/store/tree1.jpghttp://d152564.u33.1host.co.il/fileupload/store/tree2.jpg

EliAbramovitch
03-12-2006, 07:00 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1142193655_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1142193655_large.jpg)

EliAbramovitch
03-12-2006, 07:57 PM
here is a general 3d concept. no lighting or textures or positions(skins)
http://d152564.u33.1host.co.il/fileupload/store/concep.jpg
and a new crit i've add
http://d152564.u33.1host.co.il/fileupload/store/crit.jpg

FreakyDude
03-12-2006, 08:30 PM
well it looks allright soo far, but i don't see a lot of journey in it soo far. where and why is he going?

EliAbramovitch
03-13-2006, 06:03 AM
as leprecons do... he craves for gold, even at the expence of his saftey. like i said before, he packed up tons of stuff leaving his town (the real treasure) behind and out to the darken forest. more details will come up soon...

MVDB
03-13-2006, 06:27 AM
I like the look of this head model!
:thumbsup:

EliAbramovitch
03-13-2006, 12:34 PM
no idea where the concept is gone. here it is again
http://3dfaculty.com/fileupload/store/concept.jpg

sekopasa
03-15-2006, 08:07 AM
its better you do not use a frontal view its better you use your perspective some depth in the scene and also do not use symetrical gestures, and you can use some props for breaking the symetries in design. For example use a pose that the elf trying to control the donkey, elf in a panicked stance and the donkey in a angry stance.

EliAbramovitch
03-17-2006, 03:02 PM
a little progress. i figured i'll put the leprecons town on the hills in the back. also a little camera changes...
http://3dfaculty.com/fileupload/store/new.jpg

EliAbramovitch
03-17-2006, 03:05 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1142611507_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1142611507_large.jpg)

a little progress...

EliAbramovitch
03-18-2006, 07:43 PM
i got a chance this saturday to sit on the mule...
http://d152564.u33.1host.co.il/fileupload/store/mule.jpg
http://d152564.u33.1host.co.il/fileupload/store/mule2.jpg

EliAbramovitch
03-19-2006, 07:06 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1142798783_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1142798783_large.jpg)

Womgoose
03-19-2006, 07:55 PM
That's one annoyed looking Mule, nice work ;)

EliAbramovitch
03-20-2006, 07:10 AM
lol, thnx.
wouldnt you be annoyed if u had 10,000 items on your back?
im thinking of adding a little bump down look like he is depressed.

EliAbramovitch
03-24-2006, 05:53 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1143226398_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1143226398_large.jpg)

i've been working on a new concept since i got many reactions about my original one. this is it i'll also add a giant bagpack on the leprecons back

EliAbramovitch
03-25-2006, 12:57 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1143295069_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1143295069_large.jpg)

i tried going for the sureal look (sorry for misspells).

EliAbramovitch
03-28-2006, 06:16 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1143573404_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1143573404_large.jpg)

*trees changes.
*stones texture.
*lighting changes.
*mental ray render.

EliAbramovitch
04-01-2006, 12:49 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1143899377_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1143899377_large.jpg)

beyond the back pack and the map some texture corrections were added.
also format changed.

Womgoose
04-01-2006, 02:13 PM
Looking good :)
can't wait for more updates.

EliAbramovitch
04-08-2006, 06:34 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1144521274_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1144521274_large.jpg)

lighting adjusment and lantern added

Russel-Nash
04-11-2006, 07:38 AM
Hi,

I really like the textures of the trees. Very original design. :thumbsup:

May be you should alter the layout a bit more. Right now the image doesn’t really show a starting journey.

I would change the camera angle a bit more so you can show the way he has to go. And may be his home on the right side of the pic to show that his journey has just started.

But that are just my 2 ct.



Russel

EliAbramovitch
04-11-2006, 03:58 PM
thanks for the crit.i tought of the idea of home, i'll probabaly add it.

EliAbramovitch
04-16-2006, 02:55 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1145199316_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1145199316_large.jpg)

*composition changes.
*house added
*white crit added
*mushrooms added
*additional light testings..

EliAbramovitch
05-05-2006, 06:00 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1146852035_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1146852035_large.jpg)

sorry for not posting so long.
i've been caught up in work way over my head.
i spent some time changing the scene to be more like sunset/sunrise like.
worked most of the time on photoshop.
still more work to come:)

rasamaya
05-05-2006, 08:17 PM
Hi,
Looks like you have a family saying good bye aswell. Great touch, waving goodbye may be nice. I kinda liked seeing the mule, are you placing it in the scene or has it been x'ed? I like details, a window in the door may look good?

Any how, seems like your style is developing, good luck.

See ya.

EliAbramovitch
05-06-2006, 06:11 PM
thanks for comment.
a window for the door is a great idea, i'll add it on later.
unfourtanetly i had to pass on the mule. no place to put him in the composition.
about the family saying goodbye.-lol- it took me sometime to understand.
i've put dwarves statues in the front enterance.-lol-

EliAbramovitch
05-07-2006, 08:21 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1147033314_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1147033314_large.jpg)

changes added:
-light source moved
-tree bump texture added
-house window added
-house doorbell mechanisem added
-sparkling lights

so... what do ya think?
(espcialy about the sparkling lights)

EliAbramovitch
05-07-2006, 08:22 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1147033361_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/13/9762/9762_1147033361_large.jpg)

changes added:
-light source moved
-tree bump texture added
-house window added
-house doorbell mechanisem added
-sparkling lights

so... what do ya think?
(espcialy about the sparkling lights)

EliAbramovitch
05-12-2006, 08:17 AM
another large update
http://photos.walla.co.il/ts.cgi?tsscript=file.view&path=200602221352201600&id=200605121114583104

Russel-Nash
05-29-2006, 11:58 AM
Hey, what happened to your picture. Where is the final?

Russel

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