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AlyFell
02-28-2006, 07:14 AM
Aly Fell is entered in the "The Journey Begins Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/journey_begins/view_entries.php?challenger=9653)

Latest Update: Concept Sketch: Flipped and a doodle
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/12/9653/9653_1141496858_medium.jpg (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=3303532#post3303532)

beelow
02-28-2006, 07:16 AM
Welcome Aly, it will be time for u to fall..er.. Fell. ha. hahaha! Best of Luck dude, I expect something great from u!:thumbsup:

MVDB
02-28-2006, 07:38 AM
Seen your work, so.. can't wait!

Good luck!

duddlebug
02-28-2006, 07:42 AM
Good luck ALy!!!

Let's hope you get to your destination this time, eh? :)

Squibbit
02-28-2006, 07:42 AM
ey aly ! ave fun!

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MichaelZHsee
02-28-2006, 08:07 AM
yay~aly,so good to see u here~have fun and enjoy the ride mate~goodluck:thumbsup:

paperclip
02-28-2006, 08:09 AM
Hey! I'm glad you entered, I was curious as to when we'd next see something from you!

Good luck & have fun! :bounce:

AndyH
02-28-2006, 08:22 AM
Woo-yay! More Aly goodness.


Better be some purdy ladies in this one!

And make sure you finish it!

ozhaver
02-28-2006, 08:41 AM
w00t! BEST OF LUCKS!!!

and yet another stalkative thread! *___* *subscribes*

mv
02-28-2006, 09:20 AM
Good to see you here Posh. I'll be watching this thread!

Ego
02-28-2006, 09:23 AM
Best of luck Aly :D

crowley
02-28-2006, 09:35 AM
Hop, subscription. Good luck Posh!

Ramitxon
02-28-2006, 09:54 AM
Glad to see you here Posh, good luck!

Elsie
02-28-2006, 09:56 AM
Best of luck Aly :thumbsup: your Daisy the Driller piece was awesome - can't wait to see what you come up with here!

Mythmaker
02-28-2006, 10:04 AM
Good luck Aly! And work early - I want to see a finished entry this time! :thumbsup:

sergioKomic
02-28-2006, 10:52 AM
Lets see dem Ladies now...



Allright?


good.

AlyFell
02-28-2006, 12:38 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/12/9653/9653_1141133881_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/12/9653/9653_1141133881_large.jpg)

Cheers guys! This should be fun! I hope I can finish this one, as I had other things I needed to do at the end of the 'Spectacular' challenge and never completed it.

My first thoughts on 'The Journey Begins' was something Pre-Raphaelity, and I don't really mean the knights in shining armour Waterhouse pre-raphaelite stuff. I mean the artists like Millais and Ford Madox Brown, who were as much social commentators as romantics. Some of their works showing real people in real settings are incredible character studies. So I was thinking a Victorian or Edwardian family on the deck of a ship or a train station huddled together, their lives in suitcases about them. On their faces struggle and pain as they go to a new life somewhere, leaving behind something they don't want to. Perhaps two children, oblivious of the heartache running enthusiastically around their feet, with the steam of the train or the smoke of the ships funnel atmospherically swirling around them, perhaps on the Titanic.... My other alternative was a couple of hot girls in short skirts and backpacks, hitchhiking. Hmm.... what to do eh!? ;)

beelow
02-28-2006, 12:41 PM
If not, u will recieve a personal slapping from me! Cocks hand in the ready position*:D

W-I-L
02-28-2006, 12:44 PM
mate i love the first one already... although the hitchhyking femme fatales doesnt sound too bad. (woof woof, -pant- hooooooooooooowl!!!) cant wait to see what you bring.. good luck!!!

xric7
02-28-2006, 12:44 PM
wow.so fast.nice to see you enter.i like your titanic.look great composition.can't wait to see more.good luck.:bounce:

sergioKomic
02-28-2006, 12:47 PM
Whaaaa no "chics in boots"

:eek::sad:

AlyFell
02-28-2006, 12:47 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/12/9653/9653_1141134460_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/12/9653/9653_1141134460_large.jpg)

The train idea.... Back to work now! Lunchtime over. All I want to do is look at the challenge page... oh well, tonight... :)

W-I-L
02-28-2006, 12:49 PM
yeah i really like where your headed... i assume most people will be doing elves and fairies.. nic start... keep e coming!

AndyH
02-28-2006, 12:52 PM
My other alternative was a couple of hot girls in short skirts and backpacks, hitchhiking. Hmm.... what to do eh!? ;)

Lol!
Choices, choices!
I really like the concepts so far - its strange too, cos ive never seen you draw children.
I guess this is gonna be a non-sexy piece for a change, eh?

Keep up the goodness.

mv
02-28-2006, 01:02 PM
My other alternative was a couple of hot girls in short skirts and backpacks, hitchhiking.

depends on the camera angle !

nah, your concept sound great so far. Keep it ^p!

JTD
02-28-2006, 01:08 PM
Your work is always so impressive and inspiring. Canít wait to see some of these concepts fleshed out.

MVDB
02-28-2006, 02:24 PM
Nice looking concepts.. Don't go to quick, k? :D

walrus
02-28-2006, 04:01 PM
Hey, Aly! Good to see you back again. Look forward to seeing what you come up with...

An' I'm just going to sit here patiently and wait to see how long you can resist doing sketches of the hitchhiking women. :twisted:
(Just the sketches, mind you, you don't have to stick with them if you don't want to...)

:)

-mike

MDN67
02-28-2006, 04:06 PM
Nice to see you for this new challenge , i'm sure to see a great pic

ArtisticVisions
02-28-2006, 04:47 PM
Great start so far, Ally. Even in these early sketches, I'm really digging the expressiveness of the characters (particularly playfulness the girl). I'll definately be keeping an eye on this thread. :)

NinjaA55N
02-28-2006, 04:58 PM
I wish a good luck and lots of creative energy to all of my buddies from previous challenges :D Dont be mad coz I'll post the same first reply to all of u, but wishes r sincere.. I just wanna to sign up to ur thread. Once again best of luck!

melkao
02-28-2006, 05:11 PM
hey...welcome......the idea is very cute i like it:thumbsup:

AlyFell
02-28-2006, 06:42 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/12/9653/9653_1141155729_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/12/9653/9653_1141155729_large.jpg)

Getting these out of my system! I'm sure I've seen this kind of composition before. A bit Norman Rockwelly, but I mifght change it. Make it the past with a coach, or at a spaceport....hmmm...

nebezial
02-28-2006, 06:47 PM
hahaa i love this last concept, composition is calm and tells the story wery well, good luck ally:thumbsup:

W-I-L
02-28-2006, 06:56 PM
recokon u will bring something special to this... love your concepts so far... last one is clear and teels story.. excellent

Agamemnwn
02-28-2006, 07:17 PM
great concept Aly . very romantic journey. Good luck with the challenge and have fun :D

W-I-L
02-28-2006, 07:22 PM
go yorkshire? hell no,,,, i be a foriegner here,... i'm a suvna! Go Hampshire! my home of old.

sergioKomic
02-28-2006, 07:26 PM
Ahhh the plot thikens...

Looking good so far... (all jokes aside):thumbsup:

rblitz7
02-28-2006, 07:32 PM
Love it! love it! love it!:scream:

hzoppetti
02-28-2006, 07:32 PM
These are great concepts so far! I cant wait to see where you take this :)

TheFirstAngel
02-28-2006, 10:28 PM
Best wishes and have a happy journey mate, glad to have u here too! Best wishes and enjoy :)

Lync
03-01-2006, 12:23 AM
I particularly like the feel of your latest sketch. :)

Good luck with the Journey

Nikolay
03-01-2006, 12:49 AM
Hi , Aly!
Good idea with bus!)
and good Luck in Journey)

rickycox
03-01-2006, 01:53 AM
Nice concept, it's got a good feel. I think it just needs some indication of where the journey will lead.

MichaelZHsee
03-01-2006, 02:33 AM
nice sketches going on aly~i kinda like the last one~it has a sense of emotion to it and the compo clicks either:)keep them coming mate

erilaz
03-01-2006, 03:43 AM
Didn't see you join Posh! This is going to be tense... love your work! :D

marcoracer
03-01-2006, 03:52 AM
Fantastic little ideation sketches. They all have potential to me....:shrug:

AlyFell
03-01-2006, 12:46 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/12/9653/9653_1141220763_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/12/9653/9653_1141220763_large.jpg)

I thought I'd put a bit of detail on the couple in my last rough to see how I felt with it. I'm still thinking of changing the time period to the future or the past, but I quite like the idea of doing an old 1950's British bus like in a Miss Marple story. I'll try and sketch up a couple of other ideas as well.

MichaelZHsee
03-01-2006, 12:59 PM
wow~looks good even in the early color sketch,i like their reddish cheek.oldschool pin up kinda style.keep them coming my friend:)

Kyena
03-01-2006, 01:01 PM
awwwwwwwwwwwwww - omg her expression is ssssssso cute :D
All the luck in the world aly :)

MVDB
03-01-2006, 01:03 PM
Yes, good expression indeed!
Love her lips, very good.!
Keep going! ;)

BluePulse
03-01-2006, 01:04 PM
I like your rendering! This has a real greeting card/ Rockwell feel to it.

OniricCreative
03-01-2006, 01:24 PM
Very nice color sketch. I like the expressions and emotions how turning out. I'll be keeping an eye on the progress of this!! ;) keep it up.

KangarooMan
03-01-2006, 02:30 PM
Hi there, sweet concept, can't wait to see more!

Matt :)

TheFirstAngel
03-01-2006, 02:35 PM
awwweee cute! cant tope the sweetness of Aly's pieces, sugarsweet eyecandy. :) great start mate, looks like you're havin more fun with that topic :)

W-I-L
03-01-2006, 04:17 PM
i like this mate.. think it willm work really well

melkao
03-01-2006, 04:29 PM
Yes, good expression indeed!
Love her lips, very good.!
Keep going! ;)

Yeah i'm agree...the expresions are great and the colors too...keep going!:scream:

Xillion
03-01-2006, 04:32 PM
Yahooo!!! a new challenge, I was quite missing it...when did it start ?
Uh and by the way Aly:good luck with your entry! I love your style.

R-K
03-01-2006, 05:30 PM
very nice emotion in that sketch.

My suggestion would be to make this WW2 era - make that guy to be going to war and.. yeah.. I think that would work pretty nice as the context (massive WW2) would make the piece go to pretty tragic direction (which might be nice thinking of impressing the judges)

calisto-lynn
03-01-2006, 05:46 PM
hiyaaaa aly!! :D :D nice sketches and idea!! n:D good luck on the challenge, great to see you again :D

xric7
03-01-2006, 06:36 PM
another nice idea and sketch.:applause: this will be great to see your lovely characters stun the challenge again.can't wait for more :bounce: :thumbsup: :bounce:

Miyagu
03-01-2006, 06:59 PM
hi aly! welcome! and that is sugarsweet eyecandy indeed! *subscriiiiibing* :bounce::bounce::bounce:
best luck to you!

penartist26
03-02-2006, 02:32 AM
i remember sound of music characters' gudluck posh!

schaal
03-02-2006, 05:12 AM
Hey Aly, great stuff as always! Nice concept and sketch. Good luck!

DimitrisLiatsos
03-02-2006, 05:34 AM
Jaaaaaa!!!....subscribed :bounce: :bounce: :love:

Agamemnwn
03-02-2006, 07:32 AM
i love the colors on the couple and the feeling of goodbye :D great job Aly :D

paperclip
03-02-2006, 07:36 AM
I agree!! Tis very Rockwellish....I like it!

I would love to see this fully rendered, it has so much promise. I'd love to see them on their own with just the lamppost, actually, a la rockwell...

Vahn
03-02-2006, 08:36 AM
hiho aly :wip: very promising sketches .. the 1950's style is really cool :D

DoInferno
03-02-2006, 03:03 PM
Poh! Gotta watch this!

Chupacabra
03-02-2006, 03:05 PM
Ooooohhh, you're breaking my heart. Beautifull man!

Cheers,

Khan

Journey Begins Challenge by Khan (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=323929)

MichaelCTY
03-02-2006, 05:07 PM
Lovely journey
i like it
so glad to see u in challenge again
cheers

AlyFell
03-02-2006, 09:23 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/12/9653/9653_1141338198_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/12/9653/9653_1141338198_large.jpg)

The composition is too broad, but it's got some of the elements in that I'd go with if this is what I settle on. The idea is this is set in the 1950's, with Ted and Rockers, and when British kids had to do National Service. The Bus driver is going to be looking at his watch...

Thankyou for all the hello's!

AlyFell
03-02-2006, 09:23 PM
A BIG HELLO to everyone! I'll try and respond to each post in the future! I can't believe how quickly people are posting stuff up this time. It's buzzing!! And there's loads of colour stuff coming through already....

This time I want to get my idea sorted quickly, rather than faff around with loads of ideas over the first month, as I'm determined to finish this one... Unlike last time where I was a big wet non-finishererer...

DeeVad
03-02-2006, 09:28 PM
Hi Poshspice, A really great aproach of this subject, I really like your way to skech characters, there is a lot of life in them. I will follow your thread with attention. Good luck !

AndyH
03-02-2006, 09:46 PM
Dammit!


You can take any time period, any fashion, and any style and incorporate it into your work seamlessly!

This is looking mighty fine! Great idea and handled really well. Maybe put some kind of indication that hes going to war or something to add to the drama? I dunno....

(Actually, scrub that - i just read that its set in the 50s, so that rules out any big war he could be going to)

makaron
03-02-2006, 10:01 PM
well... I can just type... great... it says it all... :thumbsup:

urgaffel
03-02-2006, 10:04 PM
Really like all your concepts heh... Anyway, that last one is really good but at the moment it lacks a certain epicness somehow. However t's an emoitional goodbye scene, a start of a journey and I'm sure that you'll add the details and touches that will take it into epic territory :D Will keep an eye on this (damnit, running out of eyes :sad: )

paperclip
03-02-2006, 10:05 PM
Posh!

I love the way it's going with the bus in there- it sets the scene off perfectly. Go with it, man! I repeat: I love it!

p.s- there is now a zeppelin in my thread, thanks for the idea. :D

beelow
03-02-2006, 11:44 PM
I already told duddle, what I would do if I were to not see u finish, I already have my ticket on reserve, hehe! Gets brass knuckles, shotgun, pistol, nail bat, nicca beata, puts it in the bag*:p :D

Climax
03-02-2006, 11:56 PM
Nice work Ali! I like how the line flows cleanly in your sketches, u have the gift :) c ya later!

melkao
03-03-2006, 03:33 AM
yeah mate ....cool progress now this have more life... when do you will show more?:twisted:

AlyFell
03-03-2006, 07:51 AM
I'll try and keep up with the individual responses, now. Left it a bit late before...

Deevad - Thankyou! I try to get a bit of life in them. I'll check you thread out too!
Andy H - Hi Andy! Thanks maytee. I would set it in the 40's and have him going off to war, but I kind of like the fifties setting. This may well all change next week though! :)
Makaron - Thanks! :)
urgaffel - Cheers! I'm not going for epic with this. I kind of figure that a parting, going on a journey and travelling is all about personal experience. And you could be going to the moon, or down to the shops. It's all about a story. So I know what you mean, but no explosions here! :)
Paperclip - I've just seen your signature, and I can't stop chuckling to myself like a loon! :D
beelow - Hi Bryce! Hehheh! Thankyou.
Climax - Thanks for that comment! :)
Melkao - More soon, I hope!


Ta ta fer now... back to work!

OniricCreative
03-03-2006, 08:36 AM
i like how the composition is turning out. Very 1950s feeling... I like the kids in the right loughing and is a good idea that the bus driver will be looking his watch. I have no comments or any suggestions at this point. I want to see more!! :) Just keep it up Aly!! :thumbsup:

W-I-L
03-03-2006, 12:30 PM
really adds to it this new take on the idea... lot of emotion and story in it... more more more..

Elsie
03-03-2006, 12:33 PM
Yow Aly - really looking incredible. I am in awe of your sketches! You've captured a great deal of emotion already :bounce: knew this thread was going to be great...really enjoying watching it develop.

umbrellasky
03-03-2006, 01:52 PM
Great sketches! I really like your ideas so far!

:thumbsup: good luck with the challenge

urgaffel
03-03-2006, 02:57 PM
urgaffel - Cheers! I'm not going for epic with this. I kind of figure that a parting, going on a journey and travelling is all about personal experience. And you could be going to the moon, or down to the shops. It's all about a story. So I know what you mean, but no explosions here! :)

Aww... Why not? :p Seriously though, doesn't need to be epic, I'm convinced it will look great regardless. And with this setting you can squeeze in a few scantily clad girls somewhere ;)

MVDB
03-03-2006, 03:00 PM
Jeeesss.. Your characters rock..
so little lines and so much personality's already.. impressive.. ;)

Zycho
03-03-2006, 03:09 PM
Looking very good so far!!! I like your style!!

Kyena
03-03-2006, 03:40 PM
that style just complements the area and idea so much Aly.
Besides the character work is impressive. Each of those figures has so much personality it almost hurts.

rawwad
03-03-2006, 03:51 PM
Good luck! Well, we see Another great working from you :D First concept is great

calisto-lynn
03-03-2006, 08:37 PM
great stuff!! nice update! i love it! the idea is great!! :D

AlyFell
03-03-2006, 08:58 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/12/9653/9653_1141423132_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/12/9653/9653_1141423132_large.jpg)

Phew... I've spent quite a bit of time playing with the composition tonight. Decided to set it in the 40's after all. Thanks Andy H! I think the idea that he's going off to war is a bit more dramatic, rather than just National Service. So the Teds are out! However I might put the 50's girl I started colouring in the back of the bus, as I kind of liked her! I also might bring the composition up a bit, but I don't want to lose the couple in the other stuff, as they are the focal point.

I'm doing it again, and giving myself lots of work.... I'm going to have to research a bus, correct uniform, haircuts... eek! However, this one is growing on me I think! :)

beelow
03-03-2006, 09:11 PM
Yeah, I am rather fond of this idea. Seems to have more emotion in it, and I am interested to see how u will handle this piece. U should give a 40's look to this piece as well, Paint it in the style of the era, if ur up to the challenge dude, I see that u may have to make changes compositionally, as well, keep it up dude, I will be lurking!:thumbsup:

walrus
03-03-2006, 09:52 PM
Looking good, Aly!

I have one suggestion on composition: What if the entire image (except for the couple) were flipped, so that the motion in the piece is from left to right, with the would-be soldier closer to the bus and the exit (right) side of the page.

That might also entail showing the front of the car that's currently screen-right. It does look a little weird that both vehicles are parked but facing away from each other right now. It's like one vehicle was driven by someone British and the other someone American. And we can't have that, now, can we? Flipping the image will also make the bus look more British and not parked on the wrong side of the street! :)

To answer your question in my thread, yes, blue col-erase pencils, all the way!
Hey, and just out of curiousity, what happened to Mr. Dixon this time around?

-mike

umbrellasky
03-03-2006, 09:55 PM
Looking good Aly. I really like the idea!! I wish I could come up something more original but alas a fairytale it is!

Haha, I can't wait to see some colours :thumbsup:

paperclip
03-04-2006, 12:00 AM
Must say I agree with walrus- having it flipped would make it flow better.


And I did wonder what happened to dixon...looks like it's a lonely crowd now, just walrus, poshspice and jonnyduddle left....the cute/funny crowd...

sob. :'(

KOryH
03-04-2006, 12:04 AM
Great drawing.
I noticed in your work you seem to avoid BG's a bit or atleast flatten them a lot.
My suggestion is to add some more depth. If you are put off by perspective then bust out a REAL simple setup in 3D( no more than primitives ) and fly around the scene with the camera until you get a comosition with all the things you want in it, but is more dynamic and interesting. Right now the flatness is doing the concept a disservis. Also watch out for some scale issues. Thoes 40's cars and busses are a lot bigger that you would expect.

Great start, I love where this is going.

monsitj
03-04-2006, 05:44 AM
very nice drawing! I follow your work for long time here and at ca , do you have any suggestion about human drawing?
I agree with walrus about the direction of car , and perspective , but I think your work will shine when you coloring! wait for more !:thumbsup:

Ego
03-04-2006, 06:11 AM
This is a very emotional scene Aly and you are capturing it so well. And as you've said, we must not loose our main focus on the couple.

MichaelZHsee
03-04-2006, 06:42 AM
i'd agreed what koryh mentioned about playing with the angle,it could look better than having it profile shot.this concept is great so far:)

AlyFell
03-04-2006, 05:24 PM
Hmm, some food for thought here...

Loris - Thankyou, but it looks unlikely to be 50's now, unless I change my
mind yet again!
Wil - I hope to get some in there... I'm trying because the brief says to
concentrate on 'character'. :)
Elsie - Hehheh! Cheers!
enialadam - :)
urgaffel - There will definitely be girls, but no scantily clad ones! :)
Michael Motion - Thankyou Michael! I think you're the master of persoanlity
though!
Zycho - Thankyou! :)
Kyena - Thanks Tascha... at the moment they're doodles, I hope to not lose
the character when I render them up. It can happen sometimes.
rawwad - Cheers.. I might come back to the first concept yet, if this
doesn't go well!
Calisto - Thankyou Linda.
Beelow - Cheers, I'm trying for some depth in the emotion and the
characters. So I'm concenterating on them. :)
Walrus - I'd tried flipping the whole pic, but wasn't happy with it.
However, I didn't try what you suggested, and avoid flipping the couple, so
I'll do that. Very valuable thoughts! I haven't settled on a final layout
yet though.
enialadam - Thankyou Madelaine. This isn't very original, I guess it's all
in the way you do something... I just hope I can tell a little story.
paperclip - Mr Dixon is keeping a low profile isn't he. I'm sure he'll join
in! :)
KOryH - I'm not put off by BG's, but I get bored with them really quickly. I
like concentrating on character, so I tend to put them against minimalist
backgrounds. I'll do what you suggest and build something pretty basic in 3D
to get an idea. BTW, this is Britain! Our cars have always been diddy! ;)
The bus is pretty much to scale; I had a look at a few quickly online. The
car needs work as I've only sketched in a rough position, not a final
drawing. Thankyou!
monsitj - Hi Monsit! I'm hardly the person to ask about human anatomy! ;)
What is it you're wanting to know? :\
Queensoul - Thankyou! If I end up playing with the perspective a bit, their
position could change, but they'll always be central.
sh@ke - Will do! Thanks Michael.

I do kind of like the straight on view though. I've been looking a lot at Rockwell and he uses that particular viewpoint quite frequently. So I dunno... long way to go still! :)

AlyFell
03-04-2006, 05:27 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/12/9653/9653_1141496858_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/12/9653/9653_1141496858_large.jpg)

I flipped the whole thing as Walrus suggested, and I kind of like it. I also thought I'd put up another real quick doodle, which I like but doesn't suggest 'The Journey Begins' quite as much. He's jumped on the back of a double decker bus and she just can't let go... sniff...

makaron
03-04-2006, 05:34 PM
I do like the straight on view too... suit this image perfect..the flipped version works better for me... I see the couple more in "focus"... :)

FrozZT
03-04-2006, 05:42 PM
Emotional concept.. Its lovely! Really nice sketches! Love your previous work.. Good luck and have fun.. See you around! :)

beelow
03-04-2006, 10:04 PM
Glad to hear that ur a fan of Norman Rockwell, illustrations dude! He has some lovely compos dude. Ur work is somewhat remant of his, I see the influence of his work on yours. good luck with this again, I am sure that u will figure it out, u have till May to solve and finish things, pending on ur schedule.:thumbsup:

jsn
03-04-2006, 11:45 PM
G' day Poshspice, love your work!

The top sketch looks good, easy to read! Can't wait to see your next few milestones!

Keep up the great work!

jas

bandro
03-05-2006, 06:24 AM
mmm tasty, i want some more:)

Agamemnwn
03-05-2006, 08:25 AM
the flipped composition is looking better Aly. but i loved the close up with the "plz dont go" feeling of it . more dramatic and dynamic image and more emotional and personal from the one above. Amazing job on the characters :D will be following your work . have a good day :D

ragdoll
03-05-2006, 03:16 PM
I like the first concept more! The characters in the bus can be a bit distracting tho, probably taking away from the mood you want to depict. Just a thought. Love to see this finished! good luck! :thumbsup:

-rj

umbrellasky
03-05-2006, 03:24 PM
I really like this new sketch, much more emotion and expression :thumbsup:

calisto-lynn
03-05-2006, 03:49 PM
i cant see it...;_; it opened the upper one half way...

melkao
03-06-2006, 02:15 PM
Emotional concept.. Its lovely! Really nice sketches! Love your previous work.. Good luck and have fun.. See you around! :)

i'm agree the emotional sence is great, this is one of the most deep that i have seen...good work!:twisted:

ArtisticVisions
03-06-2006, 05:32 PM
I love the Rockwell-feel of the piece (I have 4 books of his work at my home); a very emotional and expressive piece. :thumbsup:

My only thought for improving the image is maybe (and I say maybe) increase the size of the top and right sides of the comp to include more of the enviroment. Maybe if you include some type of background scene that has to do with the soldiers leaving for war (like a sea port with the ships preparing to leave), that might highten the emotional impact of the 2 lovers? :shrug:

All the best, Aly. :)

jpedro
03-06-2006, 09:36 PM
love your work! wish you all the best in this one. i'd agree that it reads a little easier in this flipped version. as you pointed out though, there's some danger in losing the focal point a bit with this much information gong on on both sides, and your other quick doodle again nicely points out whats really touching in this concept...the moment of saying goodbye and the emotion of the two. anyways, just my two cents. 'ave fun and look forward to more.

Ducklator
03-07-2006, 12:36 AM
hey Posh... look very classical sketch, but your style is great... good luck and have fun:thumbsup: show very pretty women :twisted:

rblitz7
03-07-2006, 01:32 AM
Again, amazing personality and composition! but I think the romantic feeling of the couple conflict with the humorous girl in the bus. So maby decide on what feeling your going for IMO. Keep it up!!:thumbsup:

schaal
03-07-2006, 01:49 AM
Aly,
Im loving the Norman Rockwell feelling of your layout.

:thumbsup:

erilaz
03-07-2006, 11:08 AM
You capture moments so well Aly. Can wait to see the next stages.

Elsie
03-09-2006, 08:36 AM
*pokes Aly* Pik-chures!

I really am adoring this scene, it fits together so well. And as many others have said here, have loved the recent Rockwell influence I've been seeing in your work. Eagerly waiting for more ;)

Sundance5000
03-09-2006, 06:11 PM
Nice sketches Aly. I agree with some of the others the first is a better comp...but it seems to have a bit too much "bus". I don't know...I'm sure its going to light my fire!

AndyH
03-14-2006, 06:49 AM
Any more updates?


You GOTSTA get this un finished!

Screenblind
03-14-2006, 11:15 AM
I very much like the fact that the backstories of your characters fuel your work so much. It gives most of your work that I've seen a very comfortable feel - even in very rough stages. The sketches are very direct and clean... here the Rockwell comparison (for me at least) ends. I like your stuff much better.... saw a Rockwell exhibition in the flesh a couple a years ago and was deeply disappointed!

Most of his brushwork f******* *********.

I shall of course be stopping back - especially if you somehow manage to incorporate all those personalities in your original 'lover leaving' sketches - I was enjoying how all the characters stories were about to fragment.... how you keep the focus on the couple in a single frame, would indeed be interesting to find out - maybe a combo of the dynmaic bus leap and the crowd scene?

lots of love (to incorporate into the image :)
Beno

AlyFell
03-14-2006, 08:18 PM
Sorry I've not been around, but I've had a couple of other jobs on, which took up all my time! And things have been very sTrAnGe at work this past week. Ask Duddlebug, he'll tell you how strange! Anyway, nearly done now, so I can get back on with this next week... and I can't wait! :)

Makaron - Thanks Mona! Of these compositions, this way round does work best, but I think it would need simplifying a bit.
FrozZT - Thankyou very much!
Beelow - Definitely a fan! Really getting into the classical American illustrators at the moment.
jsn - Thankyou! :)
bandro - You can have some.... very soon I hope!
Agamemnwn - Thankyou! I'm stiill in a bit a flux with this challenge. Going away last week and coming back to it has made me want to do something a bit tighter, and more intimate. So it may end up going the way of a closer in sketch.
ragdoll - Thyanks for that comment! :)
enialadam - Cheers Madelaine. Could go that way...
Calisto - It's there now! ;)
melkao - There has to be emotion in there, even if it's cheesy! :) Heh heh!
Artistic Visions - It's deciding where to go at the moment... bigger and more expansive or tighter and more intimate. Thankyou!
jpedro - Thankyou for that!
Ducklator - Heh! I got a girlie in somehow! ;)
rblitz7 - Decisions still to be made. Cheers!
schaal - To be honest, I don't want it to look to like Rockwell. He's part of the inspiration, but I haven't picked up oils in years! Thankyou!
erilaz - I gotta get moving. Most people are well past the concept stage now!
Elsie - comin' soon!
Sundance5000 - Hi Dan! Good to see another CA'er over here! You going to join?
Andy H - I've done some other doodles, and might post them before the end of the week, but I'm thinking other stuff as well at the moment. Cheers!
Avatarist - I envy you. I'd love to see his work up close, but I's sad to hear you weren't impressed by his brushstrokes. I guess Rockwell was a commercial artist so his work was designed for the printed page, and it's what suited at the time. They weren't really gallery art. I'd still love to see it! Thankyou for your support! :)

Thankyou for stopping by even when I'm not here! :)

Sundance5000
03-16-2006, 02:07 PM
Howdy Aly, yeah I've signed up...it's a bit mind numbingly intense with the quality of artwork on this site, but it's all about pushing the limits. :shrug: So we'll see how it goes!

TheFirstAngel
03-17-2006, 05:48 AM
so you were a week off as well :) last week was sorta strange for you too? hehe hope you find time to get back to this soon relaxed and full of energy. see you soon my friend :D

beelow
03-17-2006, 05:51 AM
so you were a week off as well :) last week was sorta strange for you too? hehe hope you find time to get back to this soon relaxed and full of energy. see you soon my friend :D


Yeah me too, I had to cut my reel, it was crap and now I have to recut again, some files were crap...sigh*

Hope to see something soon Aly!:D

adonihs
03-27-2006, 08:30 PM
wow, definetly now one of my favs. Didnt even see this one while looking around. WWII or any old school war is such a interesting subject, especially 40's era..and this just nabbed it. Great job :) I love it so far, please finish!

Kyena
03-27-2006, 08:42 PM
awww - Aly I can't wait for an update..sooo emotional :)

Oh and I got your interview from 3DSomething (asian Magazine) as PDF the other day. It was a great read!
And what happend at work?!

Zephyri
03-28-2006, 07:18 PM
Hey Aly, glad to hear you'll be back about soon, this piece is defintely worth carrying on with, but I know how life can get in the way of things...

And do I read you're thinking of other things too? Either way, it'll be great to see some updates!

abourabe
04-09-2006, 05:52 PM
hi Aly .. I'm waiting the update man !!
good luck :thumbsup:

beelow
05-14-2006, 06:20 PM
Sorry to hear that ur not going to finish ur entry dude, good luck with the project with Matt, peace!:thumbsup:

AlyFell
05-14-2006, 07:00 PM
Thanks Beelow! It's the second one I'm not going to finish... I don't want to get a reputation or anything! :) I know I'm not alone, but it's just been a bit bonkers. No excuses. but there was a family crisis in the middle of the Challenge and I've had to find time for other priorities, which means this has had to suffer. Hopefully the next one will be pretty soon anyway!

Aly.

beelow
05-15-2006, 05:25 PM
See u at thunderdome! It will be great to compete against you dude, hehe!:twisted: :D

kevinhyshen
05-15-2006, 06:23 PM
damn the gesture is pro.

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