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Kamjar
02-28-2006, 07:47 AM
Kamjar Fadai is entered in the "The Journey Begins Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/journey_begins/view_entries.php?challenger=9648)

Latest Update: Concept Sketch: Concept Sketch 1
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/12/9648/9648_1141122100_medium.jpg (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=3283870#post3283870)

MVDB
02-28-2006, 08:01 AM
Let's see some magic brushes! Good luck! :thumbsup:

beelow
02-28-2006, 08:08 AM
Wassup, youngsta with the hands, I hope to see u finish this time around, Peace dude!:thumbsup:

Kamjar
02-28-2006, 10:21 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/12/9648/9648_1141122100_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/12/9648/9648_1141122100_large.jpg)

First concept sketch here :)

A spacepilot has crashed with his spaceship on a desert planet.. thats when he starts on a journey to find a way to get home.

;p

tell me what u think? :) cheers Kam

Squibbit
02-28-2006, 10:25 AM
Good luck Kamjar!



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MichaelZHsee
02-28-2006, 12:39 PM
wow~great start kamjar~dropping by and wish ya luck!:thumbsup:

metalpiss
02-28-2006, 01:49 PM
Hey, dude! I wish you all goods & stuff and kick some ass.

xric7
02-28-2006, 01:56 PM
hey mate,nice to see u enter.great sketch.love the color choice.keep it up.:thumbsup:

Kamjar
02-28-2006, 03:22 PM
thx guys :)

here is the sketch with minor changes:
http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/4341/sketch130sq.jpg

SteveNewport
02-28-2006, 04:17 PM
I liked the first sketch better. good start!

Kamjar
02-28-2006, 04:23 PM
I liked the first sketch better. good start!

yes i agree the first one is better at some points.

Gonna do some more concepts :)
ideas are welcome! :scream:

cheers.

GrM
02-28-2006, 04:43 PM
looks fun; somewhat reminiscient of older sci-fi stuff.

melkao
02-28-2006, 06:21 PM
great idea...i like the enviroment....good work.

Lync
03-01-2006, 01:43 AM
You wowed me in the last challenge and it looks like you are wowing me in this challenge already as well.

Good luck with your journey :)

flamingbs
03-01-2006, 01:48 AM
Wow, great start! I really like the colors you used.

Good luck!

beelow
03-01-2006, 04:29 AM
Great start Kamjar!

marcoracer
03-01-2006, 04:55 AM
Put his spaceship closer to him. Less wrecked, but obviously not going anywhere maybe footprints from it? Like those are the first of a very long walk......

I do like the atmosphere and feel of what you've done so far.... :thumbsup:

W-I-L
03-01-2006, 05:21 AM
hi mate good luck and have fun.. 1st concpet loking realy nice.. atmospheric

ozhaver
03-01-2006, 05:32 AM
oi, lovely beginning! the mood is entrancing! good luck, keep having fun!

CreativeKid84
03-01-2006, 06:35 AM
very cool i like what ya got so far good colors choice. best of luck to ya

Kamjar
03-01-2006, 08:31 AM
thx guys :)

right now, i am working on another painting wich i need to finnish soon. But after that i have all the time i need to work on this. And hopefully i wont mess it up like the other challenges :P

seccad
03-01-2006, 08:36 AM
good luck mate:thumbsup:

MichaelZHsee
03-01-2006, 08:56 AM
very nice sketch mate~makes me wanna do something with colors in sketches stage:thumbsup:

Kamjar
03-01-2006, 10:08 AM
very nice sketch mate~makes me wanna do something with colors in sketches stage:thumbsup:

heh, actually i was thinking of doing the sketches with pencils instead from now on... :p

mindofka
03-02-2006, 11:13 PM
The light mood is great, the particular colours also, I'll give some more life to the character, maybe with the environment around him...like his passage is devastating, or giving birth, or something ;)
Enjoy the ride, beautiful idea and good luck! XD

splinterD
03-02-2006, 11:20 PM
that looks really good man ! good luck !

Mordalles
03-02-2006, 11:53 PM
this looks so promising! good luck!

amz23
03-03-2006, 02:45 AM
Nice idea! I'm particularly fond of this theme hehe, from an anime series when I was a kid ^_^. The sketch is great, at its basic state it portrays very well the vastness and solitude of that planet.

Good luck buddy!

R-K
03-03-2006, 10:04 AM
nice atmosphere so far, don't see the journey yet though

Matellis
03-03-2006, 11:53 AM
its looking really good! keep it up

Nord
03-03-2006, 11:55 AM
Looks really great so far. I like the overall atmosphere and colors. One thing that strikes me though is the smoke and grass showing a heavy wind, maybe the character should show this too in some way(?).

rawwad
03-03-2006, 04:47 PM
Good luck, Kamjar! I like first idea, keep your great working again :thumbsup:

TheFirstAngel
03-03-2006, 05:10 PM
wow, great mood. really beautifull start, best of luck have a great journey and lots of fun!:D

walrus
03-03-2006, 05:24 PM
Those are just beautiful colors and atmosphere. Very exciting.

Also, marcoracer mentioned:

Put his spaceship closer to him. Less wrecked, but obviously not going anywhere maybe footprints from it? Like those are the first of a very long walk......

Quoted for agreement. Right now he looks liike he's in the middle of a Journey. Associating him more with his downed ship might help convey the "Beginning" part of the mission statement more :)

Good luck!

-mike

bandro
03-03-2006, 11:22 PM
look good :thumbsup: !!

Dutchman
03-04-2006, 04:32 PM
Very nice stuff, Kam! :cool: You're (one of ;) ) the best! :bounce: That first sketch(es) look very interesting and moody (as we are used of your work)! I'm really looking forward for other concepts and progression on your entry!

Good luck and all the best! :D
-Gijs

ragdoll
03-05-2006, 04:21 PM
Lovely setting! Maybe add some companions or a ship that he came out from? Just feels empty at the moment... Just a thought... good luck! :thumbsup:

-rj

triumphant
03-06-2006, 01:42 AM
great start kamjar, nice sketch, nice color pallette Good luck :thumbsup:

kacorkiraly
03-09-2006, 09:45 AM
like a strategy game! a solder inthe middle of the deserted land! LIKE IT! go on!:thumbsup:

Dominus
03-16-2006, 09:38 PM
very nice color scheme... love it!

yAdam
03-16-2006, 10:06 PM
Hey man, I really enjoy this concept.. I think adding something like a vast land laying before this guy would relate it more to the title of the challenge. It would at least make the viewer think that he's in for a bigger journey than he is now...I'll be checking back, i remember some of your work from last time!

kidster
03-17-2006, 08:52 PM
Great concept and painting !!! keep it this way !!!
Good luck ! i'll keep an eye on ya !:scream:

Dutchman
05-25-2006, 11:52 AM
Kam, mate :beer:, where are you?! As I haven't seen you here on the forums for a while, I guess you cancelled this challenge? That would be very sad, as I really like your concept, and as you can see lots of other people do too! :scream: :twisted:

All the best to you, and I hope to see you soon on the forums! :)
-Gijs

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