Character: Lizzy Revised

[Spirit2029]

no reply's huh?

[Dirk_P_Ho]

I think it's looking great. I don't suppose you're goin for realistic ears though, correct?

The detail in the abdomen and ribcage are is great. The cheekbones may be a little too emphasized and the bottom lip doesnt look as full as your ref pic.

I suppose those eyebrows are just placeholders for now.

Looking good, keep it up :thumbsup:

[Remi]

Whoa...she's going to have a really long neck huh? that's my only crit...her neck looks to be a bit long....good work though:thumbsup:

[Spirit2029]

thanx for the comments...

Dirk-nothing is finalized on the head, especially the ear. Im was just trying to get the general shape and position of everything down. The tweaking starts now.

Remi- the neck isn't even there yet...but yah your right the positioning is a little long and I will correct that when everything is connected up

More to come...

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[Remi]

The eyes look a little to far apart too...keep it up...updates requested....:thumbsup:

[Spirit2029]

Yah Remi good pointer, I was just looking at that actually. Im gone for the weekend but ill update monday night. Later

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[shoey]

i replied to the post b4 it got deleted but i'll say again, the eyes are too far apart and they look a little small, if your going for realism then a good rule of thumb is fot the head to be 5 eyes wide, good work though, keep it up:bounce:

[Spirit2029]

Hey everyone im back from my moving break now. Ill have an update up tonight of some changes, and a few other things. till then, thanx for all the replies so far....

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[Spirit2029]

Hey all small update again, still trying to nail down the proportions... Anyways suggestions, comments welcomed...

http://img.ranchoweb.com/images/spirit2029/angel.jpg

I am starting to finish up detailing and cleaning up the face mesh tonight, so hopefully ill be able to nail the final look after that...

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[Spirit2029]

that good ehh, oh well. Maybey ill get alot more work done on her before I update. Maybey then ill get some input...

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[unsped]

her nose is big, not that big though.

[bored alien]

Looking good, i posted before but I don't know if you saw it. I think the features seem maybe too sharp, and also imo a little too big in comparison to the rest of her head. Your ref's face is quite a bit wider, making it seem round rather than tall like your model, if that makes any sense. Anyway, those are just some things that occur to me, might have more later. Looking forward to updates! Cheers :)

[Kalasfixaren]

The nose and lips aren't very true to the concept, you should make the nose alot smaller and the lips, well... You figure that one out yourself ;)

And it looks a bit like man too... Make a more feminine shape of the whole head and It'll look great!

It looks great allready though but it can look even better! :)

Keep working on it

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