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xzacto
02-27-2006, 04:50 AM
hey, this is for a friend I have who does Geocaching (http://www.geocaching.com) basically it's hide and seek on a global scale (but you find ammo boxes) using GPS.

I think I am done with this, I might need to go back in and fix sloppy lines but I have not really looked closer since I completed the coloring. I am still learning more about lighting because I am terrible with it. It's just a fun personal project I guess. Crits are GREATLY appreciated as well as comments.

http://digitalarts.bgsu.edu/portfolios/mkirk/images/digital/beaver_color.jpg
SylvanMist
02-27-2006, 03:52 PM
Looks pretty cute, not much to say on it really. Just fill in the lines a bit more like you said, mainly in the thick parts like the nose and the eyes..but that's really not even that noticeable or bad looking.
paperclip
02-27-2006, 04:36 PM
If I were you I'd add shadows to the box, a bit of a cast shadow and also texture the fur!
Have fun! It's going well so far!
xzacto
03-01-2006, 05:31 AM
hey thanks guys, Yeah I posted on a few forums, and I have been told my line-art is pretty weak. so I am going to practice on that, maybe get the ole pen tool out. I have also been told to ditch the white highlights and use a color such as yellow. Shrug me=noob so I am gonna try that and post in a few days (work means no time)
Peace and blessings
SylvanMist
03-01-2006, 06:43 PM
Personally I don't think those white highlights look bad at all. A cast shadow might add a nice touch, but even that really isn't needed imo.
Don't over work something unless you really want to :)
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