a ride - final animation

[dtek]

Hey nice animation, if I could offer some critique it would be that some of the acting of the lighter character (ecspecially the two-hands-on-hip pose) seems a bit cliche... but life-like nonetheless....

[Junerahe]

As a whole I think its really good animation with good strong thought out poses but I think some of your moving holds need work. Like the first time the slim character says "go for a ride" his fingers move a tad much for my taste. And when he asks "what does that mean" I feel that from the weight of his hands he would bring his arms closer to himself to keep his hands up instead of slowly going down. I think an action like that would require a lot of bicep control.

You could dismiss what I think and it would still be good animation or you could look at your poses and see how much strenght they have without a lot of polish.

[sublow]

Hey Junerahe and dtek,

thanks allot for the critiques, im fixing a bit the moving holds, thanks for the suggestions...,
it was a fun piece to work on, and you allways learn from your mistakes, what works and what doesnt and how to improve it more, push the poses etc...

Thanks allot

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