Samurai

[decoy]

The only thing I can suggest is extend the thick outline around the rest of the sword blade...To help bring it forward away from the character.

Other than that I wouldn't touch a thing. :thumbsup:

IT'S GRRRREAT! (to paraphraze tony the tiger) :)


QUACK QUACK

[eunuchbot]

the upper right arm (his left) is alot longer than the left upper arm (his right)... and the sword thing, but I like it alot... are you going to color it?

[Sketch23]

thanks for the kind comments. His right arm is foreshortened... it still might be a bit off.

[eunuchbot]

if it is foreshortened, it should also be thicker than the left one (his right), as of right now they look like they're one the same plane

[Sketch23]

I've looked at it again... and your right. I'll try and fix it. thanks

[LordEzzat]

I love the picture very much, This thick black outline just doesn't suit it ...IMO..but its up to you....I think it slows the characters look down...its just not made for this stle of drawing...I agree with EUNU...other then that cool picture a little color some backgroud and oh-yeahh:cool:

[Sketch23]

Yeah LordEzzat... you're prob right about the thick outline. I might redo this piece and fix the problems. If I do I'll be colouring it. Thanks for the comments!

[art7sayan]

Cool character design Sketch23,
maybe another size of stroke will do the trick... you got a thin stroke and a bigger for the outline, a middle size will be good to merge the two others...
and yes, I agree with Decoy for the blade. ;)

Maybe color now? :p :D

[Sketch23]

Thanks for the tips, art7sayan. Yeah, a middle stroke is a good idea.

[online_monkey]

word up Matthew

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