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calebros
02-23-2006, 12:04 AM
Hey,

This is my 2 quarter (20 week) film. It was a partnered project where my partner was responsible for the characters model, rig, and texture. He is also responsible for the last half of the animation. I am responsible for the sets modeling and texturing, lighting, rendering, and the first half of the films animation. His Animated shots aren't finished, but I wanted to post mine and see what you thought. In otherwords, this is only half the film, but it is complete for its half.

Anyways the link:

http://www.rit.edu/~skg9554/2quarter.mov (%0Ahttp://www.rit.edu/%7Eskg9554/2quarter.mov%0A)

Well, tell me what you think.

Thanks,

-steven
veggeloo
02-23-2006, 04:18 AM
hi, the link is not workin..
calebros
02-23-2006, 04:29 AM
Hmmm, it should. Copy and pasting it worked for me, maybe the hyperlink was broken. Try this.

http://www.rit.edu/~skg9554/2quarter.mov (http://www.rit.edu/%7Eskg9554/2quarter.mov)

If that doesn't work, pasting will definately work.

Sorry about that.
KevinKraeer
02-23-2006, 05:45 AM
Pretty sweet. I like the concept, I think the mouth shapes and gestures could be a bit more pronounced in the first half. The voice acting there has slightly more enthusiasm than the animation itself.

For the second half, I thought maybe the sound could be bit louder. The gesturing and animation was really nice there, though I would still suggest more exaggerated mouth shapes.

Of course, some kind of ending would be nice, but what you have so far is very good.
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