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saftan
02-21-2006, 06:45 AM
Hey y'all!

I've recently taken up my matte painting classes (concists of me, a box of noodles and and empty appartment furnished with computer equipment.. hehe) and I would like some c&c on my current piece in progress. The original photo was abruptly ripped from a google pic-search.
Note that this is by no means finished!

Criticism is just like love: give some - get some!


Original:

http://www.bonetweb.com/ragno/art/Officebuilding_small.jpg

and so far:

http://www.bonetweb.com/ragno/art/Officebuilding_matte_small.jpg

ndstill
02-21-2006, 07:26 AM
very good, looks professional.

maybe put a crater or something in the street to explain the damaged car and knocked over light pole. looks great though

dEDa
02-21-2006, 04:35 PM
wow great work!! the crashed car is very nice. Only the hole seems to mee to much red...
:thumbsup:
dEDa

kirouac
02-21-2006, 04:51 PM
yeah maybe too much red, and a more contrast in the scene could be interesting. Its seem flat to me when i look at the whole image, we need area that bring our attention !

I hope it will help !

nicework! dude

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