Maclaren F1 "My First Car"

[hitch24]

hehe thanks for the comment on my post..your car has the potential to be really good, its hard to crit at the moment because there is not much detail..yet:thumbsup:

keep up the good work
Hitch

[M-Saber]

Here's a small update, started learning how to split the car body into parts.:D

Its my first car, & I'm so happy !! :bounce:



http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/4934/testcarmatt028ls.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[M-Saber]

Helloo o o o , I've decided to go back to this project & finish it, or die trying !:buttrock:

I've remodeled the whole car trying to fix some probs that I had in that old model of mine. I'm changing the color to red to have a different look at the whole car & have more excitment to finish it.


here's a 3 days work, 1-2 hrs everyday.
[/url][URL=http://img155.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newmaclaren02lq0.jpg]http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/5337/newmaclaren02lq0.th.jpg (http://forums.cgsociety.org/)

[M-Saber]

This is my work for another day....

http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/1775/newmaclaren05ex8.th.jpg (http://img95.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newmaclaren05ex8.jpg)

[M-Saber]

& thats my work for yesterday.....

http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/7092/newmaclaren08rq8.th.jpg (http://img95.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newmaclaren08rq8.jpg) http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/2867/newmaclaren07dg4.th.jpg (http://img95.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newmaclaren07dg4.jpg)

[M-Saber]

Please post your replys regarding the model & material. I've also started trying to use HDRI lighting, any help about using it with VRay would be appreciated.

Thanks to all

[FastForward]

Hi MSaber !
You're doing a very nice work so far, but the lower part of the front bumper seems very bumpy. Could you post a wire, please ?

[M-Saber]

.... Ooh, I noticed that now. I'll fix it as soon as I get back home. & I'll post the wire after that. Thanks for your comment. I'm really having tough time trying to make it look good, & I absolutly need your advice.

[M-Saber]

This is my new work. I think it looks better now, a little, may be. I need some help as things like these seem to take so much time.

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/5567/newmaclaren010gq4.th.jpg (http://img132.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newmaclaren010gq4.jpg)[img=http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/5567/newmaclaren010gq4.th.jpg] ("http://

[M-Saber]

http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/5369/newmaclaren012lo8.th.jpg (http://img392.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newmaclaren012lo8.jpg)
http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/2087/newmaclaren011zz7.th.jpg (http://img392.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newmaclaren011zz7.jpg)
This is a wire trial rendered with VRay Toon. If anyone knows how to render a better & clear wire in VRay, please tell me. Thanks to all

[sherman2020]

great looking car as for the first time:eek:

[wizardskills]

Nice first car. However there are a lot of bumps over the body. Best way to get rid of these is to use square polys the most as triangles cause smoothing problems.

[M-Saber]

Thanks Sherman , my skills are still growing & I've read some tutorials before starting. Not enough yet to get the best model I want.:scream:

Wizardskills, I like your name. Thanks for your advice. I've seen that it really gives me hard times when I make it triangles. I'll fix what I can & make more rectangular instead of those bumpy triangls. I really appreciate your comment! :buttrock:

[wizardskills]

:) no problem. If you look at my thread for my ford focus i have put up some wireframes of it. Try to aim for something similar. Mine are no way perfect tho.

http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=396449

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