CGTalk - Human Head WIP

flamedevil

12-11-2002, 10:14 AM

I'm still beginner in head modeling, this is my 1st real human head, i still have to work a bit on it, make the ear...

Please, I really needs critics.
Thanks.

http://www.powerofvisual.com/wip/wip_head.jpg

ThirdEye

12-11-2002, 11:38 AM

you have a lot of ngons to get rid of. You've also to make a lot more edgeloops around the mouth and the eyes. Good work tho!

r0bal

12-11-2002, 01:58 PM

It's sure to be an early WIP. I think that it will look ok with a little bit of work. The eye and mouth corners shouldn't end in one point because you will be unable to anymate and it will not look good when smoothed. The second thing is that the noce is cerainly not finshed. I can imagine it'll look very flat. But keep working and send updates, also smoothed. :wip:

flamedevil

12-12-2002, 06:23 PM

New update :
?? :thumbsdow :thumbsup: ??

flamedevil

12-13-2002, 05:41 PM

Another update :
Some improvements on the nose, the mouth, the eyes and the globally form of the head.

flamedevil

12-17-2002, 02:15 PM

Here is the finished model, i'm now going to make textures.

Nobody want to criticize ?? :cool: ...

ckaos@om

12-17-2002, 02:39 PM

Pretty good for an early wip ! as pointed out before, you should correct those eye and mouth edges. You should also try to improve your edge loops : no big deal .
The Joan of ark tutorial is great for all this.
Did you start from a sphere ? box ? edge modelling ?

Edit: could you post a wire of the update version ?
Those ears are not bad either : can you post a close up ?
I don't want to polute you post but i have a similar head i need feedback on :
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=32763

flamedevil

12-18-2002, 07:57 AM

Hey ckaos i i can't view your works for some governmental reason :(... but thanks for the critics, here a new update, i think i will not change anything on this verion.

WARING BIG FILE ( 160 ko )

http://www.powerofvisual.com/images/works/3d/humhead_wip/wire_wip66.jpg

Here is the link of this pics :
http://www.powerofvisual.com/images/works/3d/humhead_wip/wire_wip66.jpg

Come on guys c&c are welcome !

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