Audi A3 SportsBack

[aranha3d]

Perfect modelling man!

I know you still gonna adjust, but the chrome details and the rims are too bright and reflexive. I guess is lightning, cus in the front view its perfect, but the side perspective it's kinda weird.

The material of the tire is also too bright.

For now its just that.

You're gonna make an studio photo or put it on a scene?

That's it.
Waiting for updates!

[AlexC]

Thanks Guihermeab,

Erm I will proberbly do a studio render, but I might put it into a scene - not sure yet. I've done some updates ( Less reflective chrome and tyres - and also re-modeled the mirrors )

http://www.thecube.zeeder.com/3D/Transport/Audi_A3/WIP17.jpg

[XCNuse]

can you post a high res. wireframe, i can see a ton of errors in the mesh, most of them being sucked in bumps and things that need to be chamfered

[AlexC]

XCNuse, those errors are because I have the GI on very low. When I put the GI detail up the errors are fixed. I know where you mean, around the doors/skirting area is the worst yes? Shall I still post wires?

[Evan Grant]

3d palace tutorial perhaps?

Very nice vray renders.

I also started this tutorial (if that is what you worked from)

[AlexC]

I used the first few tuts to get the main shape, then the rest I did on my own :)

[Evan Grant]

']I used the first few tuts to get the main shape, then the rest I did on my own :)


Good stuff. I havnt touched max since september =/, plus, I am trying to take in as much as possible (still beginner-ish) so I will follow it though.

[shivesh]

awesome . i like the model . want to c wireframe . gud job . keep it up .

[AlexC]

Thanks for the comments, here are some rendered wires for you:

http://www.thecube.zeeder.com/3D/Transport/Audi_A3/Wire_Front.jpg

http://www.thecube.zeeder.com/3D/Transport/Audi_A3/Wire_Back.jpg

http://www.thecube.zeeder.com/3D/Transport/Audi_A3/Wire_Side.jpg

Please crit as I want to make this as realistic as possible.

[daytona]

Way better than i could do, but there is something a bit funny about the flow of the bodywork just under the headlamps, noticeable in the 3/4 view.

[AlexC]

Thanks Daytona - Where do you mean, could you draw on my image to show me please?

[AlexC]

Been playing around with renders:

http://www.thecube.zeeder.com/3D/Transport/Audi_A3/FT_5.jpg

Do you prefer the Light Blue or Dark blue background?

[daytona]

It might just be the angle. Front view looks sweet. Here's what i meant though.

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