Lighting Challenge #2 : Opelfruits

[jeremybirn]

So this is supposed to be for script #2? I don't really see the emphasis on the bottle or the squinting into the morning light. Blur is nice, tilting the camera is of course very nice for drunkenness, but without the composition or lighting it doesn't really drive home the point.

-jeremy

[Opelfruits]

script 2, FR2 + C4D, first try kinda sucked, hopefully this one is more with the theme

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/9621/script24qo.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[jeremybirn]

The fan could be a lot darker and less reflective. It looks like a spaceship landing in the scene now.

Maybe the bottle darker too, or at least its shadow could be more solid?

-jeremy

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