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shoey
12-10-2002, 07:40 PM
This is the little girl, Mable, that will be starring in my short animnation 'Kids'.

(edited, updated image)
http://www.cookercare.demon.co.uk/Art/split.jpg

Original pic is HERE (http://www.cookercare.demon.co.uk/Art/13.jpg)
WIP is HERE (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=31339)

Remi
12-10-2002, 08:03 PM
I like it....maybe size the head down just a tad...the body looks a little thick to me too........Looks really good though...want to see her in the scene you have modeled....:thumbsup: :surprised

Titank
12-10-2002, 09:06 PM
This is a nice model and i like it, but the head is too sharp to be the one of a kid really, you should smooth it a lill' .

robmuska
12-10-2002, 09:29 PM
anyone here see the movie "kids"?
i own it. great movie.

Joviex
12-10-2002, 09:40 PM
Nice work. Looks like a female elf/gnome. Maybe the head could do with a tiny shrink.

mushroomgod
12-10-2002, 09:45 PM
looks pretty cool...good work :applause:

stephen2002
12-11-2002, 02:03 AM
yes...head is a bit too large and adult looking. Just need a little bit of tweaking.

nice job overall.

E.Z. Schwartz
12-11-2002, 02:58 AM
I like her big head, but I agree that her nose is too sharp. I hope your movie isn't like the other movie "Kids" :surprised

Ezra

shoey
12-11-2002, 08:08 AM
Thanks for all the response guys!:thumbsup: I'll try to make the adjustments of sizing down the head a litlle and smoothing out her features ASAP. Out of interest what is the movie 'Kids' about? I haven't seen it.

shoey
01-22-2003, 10:53 AM
Finally got her rigged, Let me know what you think.

Cheers:bounce:

http://www.cookercare.demon.co.uk/Art/split.jpg

shoey
01-22-2003, 12:38 PM
A tiny little animation test for you to look at. its just to test out the rig.
:bounce:

Dance (http://www.cookercare.demon.co.uk/Art/dance.avi)

Cheers for any comments or suggestions

cuse
01-22-2003, 04:34 PM
she looks kinda stoned in that dance, her eyes are really strange... plus shes very fast, makes me think she should be spinning on her head :)

nice work with the modelling tho



cuse

azazel
01-22-2003, 07:25 PM
Nice, but I have some crits:

- there's a shadow on her face, tweak some lightning
- I'd remove speculars, at least from her face and hands, looks a bit plastic now
- there's something strange with her shoulders, I think You should lower them a bit (It's visible on the right pic)
- if You can use or fake SSS, or at least make her not that pale

Keep it up, waiting to see more :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

hopper2k
01-22-2003, 10:10 PM
I also think she looks a bit adult looking. I haven't seen the animation, but perhaps you can animate her in a way that would obviously make her a little girl, and would make people like me automatically think she's a little girl when I see her animated instead of looking at the actual model itself.:thumbsup:

Zero_Gambit
01-22-2003, 10:53 PM
whoa! i have to agree she looks pretty stoned on the video, particularly due to the eye movement. The model looks great, but i agree her head looks rather old to be just a little girl. The deformation on the skirt is excelent! what system did you use to animate it? looking forward to the short!

1000
01-23-2003, 06:48 AM
good good

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