View Full Version : Character: Little Girl.
shoey 12-10-2002, 06:40 PM This is the little girl, Mable, that will be starring in my short animnation 'Kids'.
(edited, updated image)
http://www.cookercare.demon.co.uk/Art/split.jpg
Original pic is HERE (http://www.cookercare.demon.co.uk/Art/13.jpg)
WIP is HERE (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=31339)
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I like it....maybe size the head down just a tad...the body looks a little thick to me too........Looks really good though...want to see her in the scene you have modeled....:thumbsup: :surprised
Titank
12-10-2002, 08:06 PM
This is a nice model and i like it, but the head is too sharp to be the one of a kid really, you should smooth it a lill' .
robmuska
12-10-2002, 08:29 PM
anyone here see the movie "kids"?
i own it. great movie.
Joviex
12-10-2002, 08:40 PM
Nice work. Looks like a female elf/gnome. Maybe the head could do with a tiny shrink.
mushroomgod
12-10-2002, 08:45 PM
looks pretty cool...good work :applause:
stephen2002
12-11-2002, 01:03 AM
yes...head is a bit too large and adult looking. Just need a little bit of tweaking.
nice job overall.
E.Z. Schwartz
12-11-2002, 01:58 AM
I like her big head, but I agree that her nose is too sharp. I hope your movie isn't like the other movie "Kids" :surprised
Ezra
shoey
12-11-2002, 07:08 AM
Thanks for all the response guys!:thumbsup: I'll try to make the adjustments of sizing down the head a litlle and smoothing out her features ASAP. Out of interest what is the movie 'Kids' about? I haven't seen it.
shoey
01-22-2003, 09:53 AM
Finally got her rigged, Let me know what you think.
Cheers:bounce:
http://www.cookercare.demon.co.uk/Art/split.jpg
shoey
01-22-2003, 11:38 AM
A tiny little animation test for you to look at. its just to test out the rig.
:bounce:
Dance (http://www.cookercare.demon.co.uk/Art/dance.avi)
Cheers for any comments or suggestions
she looks kinda stoned in that dance, her eyes are really strange... plus shes very fast, makes me think she should be spinning on her head :)
nice work with the modelling tho
cuse
azazel
01-22-2003, 06:25 PM
Nice, but I have some crits:
- there's a shadow on her face, tweak some lightning
- I'd remove speculars, at least from her face and hands, looks a bit plastic now
- there's something strange with her shoulders, I think You should lower them a bit (It's visible on the right pic)
- if You can use or fake SSS, or at least make her not that pale
Keep it up, waiting to see more :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
hopper2k
01-22-2003, 09:10 PM
I also think she looks a bit adult looking. I haven't seen the animation, but perhaps you can animate her in a way that would obviously make her a little girl, and would make people like me automatically think she's a little girl when I see her animated instead of looking at the actual model itself.:thumbsup:
Zero_Gambit
01-22-2003, 09:53 PM
whoa! i have to agree she looks pretty stoned on the video, particularly due to the eye movement. The model looks great, but i agree her head looks rather old to be just a little girl. The deformation on the skirt is excelent! what system did you use to animate it? looking forward to the short!
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