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Danry
02-12-2006, 12:21 PM
Hi to all. I choose SCRIPT #2.
The drizzled Nick the drunk want to booze up , where is him ?
I use 3dmax and vray to rendrer.

(http://attachment.php?attachmentid=90081&stc=1)

sjmcc
02-12-2006, 04:52 PM
I like the pic and the frosty texture on the window. The texturing in the room seems a little bit too busy though. It makes it difficult to really focus on anything in the scene. The focal point for the script is the bottle so maybe try to do something to make it draw your eye towards it.

jeremybirn
02-14-2006, 01:31 AM
I agree with sjmcc - even though the volumetric effect with dust in it, the textures, etc. are all nice, the image is somewhat busy and lacking in focus. Especially when a drunk sees a bottle, there should be a sort of tunnel vision leading your eye straight there.

-jeremy

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