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ryankittleson
12-10-2002, 05:38 PM
Hi all, please let me know what you think of these pencil drawings done for my figure drawing class sketchbook. most were done in 20 minutes to 2 hours. all but 2 are from life, the others are from my imagination (named as such).

http://www.brainbutter3d.com/sketches

http://www.brainbutter3d.com/sketches/female2.jpg
LordEzzat
12-11-2002, 11:29 AM
They look quite exceptional very well done IMO...good work!:thumbsup:
kidchuckle
12-11-2002, 02:15 PM
not a bad job... but one thing I might say is before you do your life drawing... try doing a rough stick figure to measure your proportions...
The life drawing is a little of on proportions... like the mid section is too long... and the forearm is a litte too short...

but keep up the hardwork...
bumskee
12-11-2002, 05:52 PM
i think it's great, very expressive....
very expressive...

i guess like kidchuckle said, a bit out of proportion here and there but it's all about overall impression isn't it?.....
capturing that instance.
it surely does carry the mood....
mattregnier
12-11-2002, 07:34 PM
These look really great. My only crit is overall on your hands and feet. The nails look a bit small, this may just be because of whoever your model was. Keep up the great work though. You've got a great style. :thumbsup:
lordmachuca
12-12-2002, 07:43 AM
might want to make overlaps. like in the forarm, i think the proportion is okay because of forshortening but take the end of that wrist and over lap the hand with it. do you know what i mean. it be alot easier to explain if i could show you
thecrow
12-13-2002, 04:26 PM
you are starting to underdtand the form...
the face needs work...the eyes are a bit off...take care to kep the hands and fingers a bit thiner...
your doing good..keep it up...also...set your lighting up...lets see spot blacks
-crow
dtrimble
12-13-2002, 04:39 PM
I agree with crow, use more lines as guides for the face characteristics, make sure everything is lining up.
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