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3dcook

02-10-2006, 02:56 AM

http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/31403/31403_1139543794_medium.jpg

Title: "battle Horn"
Name: Dennis Cook
Country: USA
Software: Photoshop

This is a Warrior character that I've had in my sketch pad for a while and decide to color it.
Any Crits or comment's would be appreciated.I've been watching this site and have been amazed at the talent here.I hope to add more work in the future, So Please, Crit away!
Thanks

nerdyninja

02-10-2006, 07:05 PM

I he looks great! I love the colors and the sketches in the background. i wish we could see the whole figure though. :sad:

Crits: lets see perhaps the arm closest to us could be bent inwardly it might look better that way. Cuz right now it looks as though you have the other arm bent in but I think it would be better if you bent the one in front in and made the other one straight. Also right now it seems his closest arm is a bit too short...maybe...I dont know. But there are some crits for you! :shrug:

3dcook

02-10-2006, 07:23 PM

Hey Thanks Nerdy, Maybe I'll sketch him in a full body scene, I might have been just lazy when I sketched him back when.

Thanks for the CRIT man, I see exactly what your saying, I think the pose I was going for was him starting a swing motion.HMMMM! maybe not. I think your right.
I'll take that into consideration when I do the full body sketch.
Thanks again.

V_Shane

02-10-2006, 08:44 PM

hey found it! You didn't say where you posted at dude!

Looks very cool Dennis, pretty much what he said is spot on, the only thing I would add is that make sure your fist lines up with your arm, his shadowed arm seems a bit askew from the bottom gripping fist on the sword.

I posted a finished piece up as well and haven't seen it yet. Are you going to do a WIP?

3dcook

02-10-2006, 09:55 PM

Thanks Shane,
Yes, I'm going to start a WIP soon but for now I've got a few more finished pieces that I want to post soon.

nebezial

02-10-2006, 10:01 PM

not bad stuff i like it i personally think you could work it up more, aside with the anathomy
i love the feel of the character, basically i like it but i see it goin further and being develloped into something real professional, how long have you been using photoshop and which version is it?

3dcook

02-10-2006, 10:38 PM

Hey nebezial, I've been in photoshop7 for about2 years. I still feel like a dog tryin' to crap a bone. I'm going to redraw this character and see if I can put a little more life into him.I need to spend more time with my colors and blending.
Thanks so much for your comment, your work is awesome.

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