Mountains

[bumskee]

it's very primitive...hehe...
lovely atomosphere u have created though.

i think i will be looking forward for that huge story..
mountain got me all excited...

[loganx3d]

These do not look like mountains. It looks like a third-grader's drawing of mountains. That having been said, here's why:

Mountains are formed over long periods of time, so the elements (wind, water) tend to wear them down even as they develop, leaving large areas of smooth(ish) curves. Very rare is a mountain range with extremely sharp peaks, and even rarer are those with multiple sharp peaks.

Obviously you're not looking to represent any real mountains, and if I were to take a guess, your story is not set on Earth. Even considering varying atmospheres, world alike have similar elements to wear down mountains and carve features through gravity, rainfall, and wind.

I'm sorry, but this is not something I can take seriously. Develop your story, and perhaps it will make up for your illustration. But story first, THEN post to a messageboard. :)

[Sceme]

hmm...loganx3d, i understand, and i will now tell u why they are sharp. Sharp mountains they are, because they are forming a line, "port" or what ever, seperating the land from the other world. Only rare peoples travelled through it, and blaa blaa blaa :D

anyway, they are sharps because they supposed to be :D. AND YES there will be also normal MOUNTAINS :D very smooth ones :D
i hope i have made my self more clear for u :D (sorry my bad english, again :D

but thanks for critic, it's always welcome

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