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chrissorbit
02-09-2006, 07:22 AM
Hello,

I am Christopher Rebeiro. I am just a fresher in this animation field. I have made a small robot transforming animation and would like your feedback.
You can dowmload it from the following link:-
http://www.4shared.com/file/652331/b9d3bc46/cybernators.html (http://www.4shared.com/file/652331/b9d3bc46/cybernators.html)
Please check it out. Let me know the problems and also give me detailed solutions to the problems.

wtoddk
02-10-2006, 05:51 AM
Hi Christopher... not bad for a beginner. If you're looking for critiques on animation, there's not much to say...there was much more camera animation than character. Of which neither was bad. I liked some of the camera shots, like when the robot lands at the end. I did notice that after his hand strikes the ground, as it begins to stand up, the fingers enter the ground. When the robot is unfolding...perhaps a little shake when the pieces arrive in place....like they're locking into position. Try a little slow out/in on your keys as well.

If you'll allow me, I would suggest that you work a little on your color schemes and lighting.

Great work!

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