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carlsden
02-08-2006, 05:11 PM
Hi Guys, this is a 10 sec animation clip i'm working on. Sorry about the bad render quality of the animation (pc cant handle anything at the moment), but i hope you guys can see something and can tell me how I could improve or change stuff.
Any advice would be appreciated.

http://www.sendmefile.com/carlsden/00272493
(For those who are havin trouble:- after you click on the link, it will take you to a web page, there is button which reads 'Download file'. that is the one to be clicked.)

Render from the scene:
carlsden
02-09-2006, 06:31 AM
no replies anyone? I would love some feedback............
dalmanna
02-09-2006, 11:33 AM
the download doesn't work for me sorry
carlsden
02-09-2006, 12:54 PM
i just checked the link and its working fine!

after you click on the download button you might have to wait for about 15 seconds and then a link will appear saying download file. click on that.
carlsden
02-10-2006, 09:44 AM
So none of you guys are able to download the clip?
dalmanna
02-10-2006, 01:07 PM
nope when i click on it, it seems to just ignore me (this is the link you have to wait for not the first one) i'll keep trying though i do wanna help
carlsden
02-10-2006, 01:25 PM
Ok, try this one: http://dl.sendmefile.com/get/d6e1fbc82dd2a99f8c18bc14ca147b18/Q/wrytio.avi
carlsden
02-10-2006, 05:47 PM
are you guys able to download it now?
RaoUUUL
02-10-2006, 07:06 PM
first link worked, second didnt, second link brought me back to cgtalk. first off i see some work went into this. it looks like keyframes at the moment. the lighting looks decent. your characters left arm jumps around too much. and if the character with the knife is trying to be quiet maybe he should be in his face with the knife, whispering, if he has all that motion you think he would but not necessarily be yelling. just a few comments. keep at it!
carlsden
02-11-2006, 07:09 AM
RaoUUUL, thanks for the comments. the guy with the knife is a man called Dan Brown. the reason I've made him a little too expressive with his hands and body is because the guy who is sleeping has actually killed all of dan's family members while he was small. After 30 years Dan has managed to find this guy and guess what. he is paralysed. the only parts of his body that move are his head and neck.
Dan is filled with rage and wants to finish the guy, but it doesn't seem right if dan just wispers. Imagine in reality if someone was going through a nightmare of watching his parents being murdered at a young age of 10, it would haunt him for the rest of his life. and Dan had actually seen the guy who had murdered his parent. ever since then, the guys face was constantly on dan's mind. and so he is but compelled to speak the way he does.

but wait till i upload some more updates.........
carlsden
02-14-2006, 08:41 AM
here's another updated version. I have to still work on the hand movements a bit and towards the end i think i have to put in a bit more flow.

anyways, here it is http://breakthroughradioministry.com/vengencevanquished.mov
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