Summer Night, Dmitri Kinaev (3D)

[LouisCho]

I love the cartoonish house but:

The taste of summer is here...
At first look I was thinking that these big things was faling snow! It's not evident that there are stars.

Can you feel that this is the start of a magnificent night

No. These scene are not transmitting these mysterious feeling. It's lack of 'I d'ont know what'. you should work on it a little.

Nice work anyway, you're on the way.

[azynkron]

>At first look I was thinking that these big things was faling snow! It's not evident that >there are stars.

Yes, I agree.. They stand out too much.

>No. These scene are not transmitting these mysterious feeling. It's lack of 'I d'ont know >what'. you should work on it a little.

IMHO it's not a lack.. it too much of something and that is light.
As it is now it's both a night and day scene at the same time.

And.. isn't the car falling through the ground?

>Nice work anyway, you're on the way.

*nod* *nod* :)

[BMunchausen]

I agree, I'm sort of confusing by the stylized building and its similarity to the car. I don't really understand what's pictured here so I'm only mystified in that sense - like "what am I looking at?" The details could be clearer and I agree both about the symbols that don't look like stars (they don't glow like stars, aside from not looking like them) and the too-much-light critique.

It's cute though - I think you could still stylize, but you need to make sure you can still identify things for what they are even if they're stylized. Best of luck.

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