View Full Version : Mr. Baroud, Visionmaster (3D)
12-08-2002, 03:01 PM
hi, i try to make an old man .
12-08-2002, 03:04 PM
12-08-2002, 03:35 PM
I think thats really good, especially the lighting. Hes got soul to him. The skin looks like skin rather than a model with a texture.
12-08-2002, 03:39 PM
12-08-2002, 04:16 PM
you did a really good job. you put soul in him through yr shading/texturing/lighting especially on the third pic.
i just wonder could you post a wireframe and also snapshots of the textures so we can learn more from you?
looking forward to see more
btw theres some bump lines that i think are too strong. and something bout his hair too when viewed from the side.
12-08-2002, 05:59 PM
I think the roots of the hair should be more prominant, and maybe increase the amount/length of the hair by a slight amount. Right now it seems you are only going half way with the concept of the hair.
The skin's bump could be reduced very slighlty, while the spec could be increased a tad. It looks a bit unnatural as it is.
Amazing modelling though, and overall I think it's impressive :)
12-08-2002, 06:19 PM
Very good . It that just a head shot or will your finish the whole body ?
12-08-2002, 06:55 PM
that third picture is amazing.
Keep up the good work, and some wires would be useful.
12-08-2002, 07:05 PM
thank you for your comments
here is another one with reducing bump.
the hair are not finish and i must smoothing the model .
12-08-2002, 09:10 PM
vision master is back.. youppppppiiiiii !!!
great work as alway..
and i have to say that his for me the best of your thing i saw..
may be cause i dont really love the " super hero " thing
great great great !!!!!!
15 star ;-)
12-08-2002, 10:04 PM
Wow that looks like a real photo of an old man. Great work!:thumbsup:
12-09-2002, 06:37 AM
Out friggin standing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
12-09-2002, 06:41 AM
Can we see a wireframe
12-09-2002, 09:50 AM
Wowowow.. just super, especially that, smily one... :)
12-09-2002, 01:37 PM
xtrm3d : thank you :wavey:
here is a wire Sheep Factory :)
i will post more tomorow
12-09-2002, 03:02 PM
Its amazing, I love it. The only complaint I have is the hair it looks a little wier. GO MAX!
12-09-2002, 03:12 PM
So is that medicinal weed he's smoking? :scream:
The hair needs some work thou.... imho.
12-09-2002, 05:00 PM
What do you mean with: "I TRY to make an old man"??
12-09-2002, 05:23 PM
:applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:
12-09-2002, 05:55 PM
My only Critique would be the ear, it sorta looks like Couliflour (sp) ear Like wrestlers get. But perhaps this old mans ear should look quite weathered.
I like IT!!
12-09-2002, 06:30 PM
I think you should count this as a masterpiece..:bounce:
12-09-2002, 06:40 PM
:bounce: :thumbsup: :) :beer:
This is fantastic the only critic I have is about the hair like every one else,I think the problem lies in the hair colour its to light almost the same as the skin in the first two shots but as latter shots with the face full frontal and slight change in lighting it does look much better FIRST CLASS:applause:
12-09-2002, 06:45 PM
"Nice to see you Mr. Baroud!"
No, seriously. The third picture looks amazing. I think that you hit the spot with his smile. I stared at the picture and thought that somehow the facial expression reminds me of something. It took me a while until i realized that the smile is similar (no offense!) to the typical "Popeye" one somehow!
Cant look at it without grinning a bit. His "good temper" ( at least at picure three) seems to be infectious.
12-09-2002, 06:48 PM
Just brilliant! He looks like one of those retired Football players that has retired and started to coach a bunch of kids in some run-down village :thumbsup: Thats what came to my head. He really says alot, il ya a beaucoup d'histoire dans ses yeux! Kinda a mix of fatigue and experience, j'aime!
What I love the most Mr iiyama is your file names... of course you have to be french to understand it, and if possible to understand local 'patois' :)
Anyway your work is really great visionmaster. You have my total consideration !
I'd like to see more of it. Do you intend to make something else than stills with him ? Maybe an animation ? a short movie ?
Thanks a lot for sharing such stuff, I hope to hear from you very soon !
12-09-2002, 07:02 PM
bin va jouez au p'tanque nè, q'c'es beauu!!
12-09-2002, 07:13 PM
Tats one winning smile you gave him there, i'd like to see a stronger key light shining into his face just for us detail inspectors to pick appart the detail this model consists of. :wavey:
Is gramps hittin a doobie?
12-09-2002, 07:25 PM
UNBELIEVABLE... 5 stars if i ever seen it:thumbsup:
12-09-2002, 07:37 PM
What? Down to 3 stars? Good lord...
12-09-2002, 07:38 PM
Don't ask me why, but for some reason he makes me think of an old Edward Norton, especially the image in the second post of your thread. Maybe it's the mouth.
Anyway.....no doubt about it, awsome work.
12-09-2002, 07:43 PM
Heeeyyyy thats so cool man! :buttrock: :eek: :beer:
third picture looks like a real nice old grandpa!
12-09-2002, 07:45 PM
at second look, he doesnt look that much like a nice guy...
But the model is still extremely cool and good"!!
12-09-2002, 07:50 PM
Wow this is realy impressive the expressions are just beautiful.:thumbsup:
Like the others I think there is a small problem whit the hairs, I don't do any 3D, but I'm a drawer, so maybe what I'm gonna say is wrong... I think that the problem is the size of the forehead, it's too small.
12-09-2002, 08:19 PM
si le but était de faire le grand bill baroud de l'exxellent manu larcenet je ne peut que m'incliner devant une telle réussite. :bounce:
c'est absolument genial :applause:
12-09-2002, 08:45 PM
crap my pants and call me susan:buttrock:
12-09-2002, 09:31 PM
amazing lighting, and great overall piece. Nice job!
12-09-2002, 09:54 PM
Very very nice! Excellent skin material and lots of character!
The smiling picture makes me think of Popeye the Sailor Man!
12-09-2002, 10:48 PM
I like the imperfection.
12-09-2002, 11:11 PM
Beautiful, inspiring work.
Five stars, also...:beer:
12-10-2002, 02:38 AM
That seems to be an extreemly dense mesh, Am i wrong to assume that it is a 3d scan, or possibly just max nurbs converted to E.Mesh?
12-10-2002, 03:32 AM
Really great man, I love your work, natural style. Keep post more.
12-10-2002, 05:28 AM
Originally posted by parallax
crap my pants and call me susan:buttrock:
i dont know about the pants bit, but >Welcome to the boards, Susanne!<
12-10-2002, 05:36 AM
I think the reason the mesh looks so dense is because it's triangulated, we're used to seeing quads.
awesome work man!!
the asymetric is perfect!!!
1) You are my new god heh:bowdown:
2) You really managed to capture the character of him. Almost like he has a story to tell.
Really great work!:xtreme:
12-10-2002, 10:09 AM
The *only* thing I really think should change is the hair color, especially the roots... but the lighting and character you give this "character" is very well done :thumbsup:
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12-10-2002, 10:32 AM
The skin texture is great, in fact it's some of the best I've seen, I guess also the render engine helped a little. Brazil is a pretty good render engine if you ask me.
I have two "crits". The paper on the cigar needs more "crunched" paper texture, I think it's too smooth. Also I think the old man's eyes look too young, maybe add some wrinkles around the eyes.
Very good. Very good indeed. The man has got "soul".
12-10-2002, 11:48 AM
thank you all.
i can't answer to all of you, because of my bad english...
NVCC-Remote: yes ;)
toma : how do you know my first name ??
strick9: you have right with the ear, must work on it
el patator : bill baroud will save the world !!
lildragon: thank for this honor; ill work harder on the hair
ill post some update this week.
:buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:
12-10-2002, 09:26 PM
great work especially on texturing and lighting
it's been a long time since the last time i saw a very realistic human face like that
:bounce: :applause: :applause:
12-10-2002, 11:06 PM
Originally posted by visionmaster
el patator : bill baroud will save the world !!
01-23-2003, 11:11 PM
That texture is some of the best skin I have EVER seen! bravo!!!
01-24-2003, 03:10 AM
What happened to his joint in the second picture? lol. love it man just love it. im going to begin my first project this weeked(an eyeball from a book im learning with) but i probly wont be as good as you for several more years. keep it up dude.
01-27-2003, 03:30 PM
very realist but there is as same something which disturbs me,the glance it lack can be something.but it is a detail and it is a very beautiful work
01-29-2003, 01:27 PM
sympa le perso....etrange mais je sens un petit fond d'inspiration de chez monsieru larcenet , jme trompe?
01-29-2003, 01:37 PM
First of all id like to say its a great model.
crits tho, I agree with the people on the hair, but what really surprised me is only one other person thinks that the joint needs to be re textured and thats erikals. I just think it looks to CG compared to the rest of the pictures.
Other then that great work.
01-29-2003, 03:20 PM
really impressive , maybe the forehead a bit small
beau boulot en tout cas
01-29-2003, 03:31 PM
impressive and inspirational :thumbsup:
I have a question about hair: is it modelled as a part of the head's mesh and textured or made with some hair-plugin ?
01-29-2003, 03:57 PM
Genial! On dirait Gabin surtout dans la premiere photo. :beer:
translation: kicks ass, first pic looks like a famous (dead) french actor
01-29-2003, 04:07 PM
Zaki, quand je vois la qualité de ton dernier modèle..je pleure de jalousie.. bo boulot ! im sure you ll find a job soon.
Zisland, i think he do what ill do with such thing in my mouth :)
good luck for your work.
napino : non :) tu fais quoi comme études a Rennes ?
jy suis tres souvent..
Microbe : tas dbeaux yeux, tu sais ))
yes yes, for the hair, its a bad bad mesh.)
i found a new solution for my next image. i discovered that in brazil 1.0, there is an option of hair shadow in the light param..
you make hair with shag hair ( dont convert them into mesh ) then, make a brazil material and afect it to the the hair.
use ONLY a brazil spot light ...and you have a wonderfull radiosity hair with shadow. ill post a pict in 4 houres.
thank you :)
Both realistic and "free".
Cool rendering, and a plenty of stars.
Waiting for the next pict then...
et une boite de Guronsan® pour le p'tit gars, une!
01-29-2003, 06:53 PM
here is the hair with shaghair (no mesh )and brazil 1.0
take less than 3 minutes on a p4 1,4ghz.
08-29-2003, 12:21 PM
Excellent modeling and texturing, all set in a great light!
not my bag but nice all the same. good work man
09-16-2004, 07:16 AM
really good modeling and texture work. Nice job.
the cigarette though doesn't look right. Doesn't look like it's really in his mouth. Just kind floats there.
07-26-2005, 10:29 AM
To be a 2002 work it is impressive.It seems very real.
07-26-2005, 10:29 AM
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