Character ~ { female with nude elements }

[Lamster]

Looking good so far, the neck area and the clavicle area needs some work though. Neck seems a bit too long, and probably would need more definition to keep up with the detail established in the face. And the clavicle area seems too pronounced, especially the area where it joins to the chest seems to be very abrupt. Nice modelling, keep it up.

[Cleveland]

extremely sensitive modeling reo, very nice. i think the lamster touched on the same problems that i see. keep it up. can't wait to see the rest of her.

cleveland.

[Voron]

I like the features, they seem very gentle. Curious to see where this is going

[Reo]

http://www.hiddennull.com/projects/assasian/ass_bod_shade_001.jpg

WIRE CAGE HERE (http://www.hiddennull.com/projects/assasian/ass_bod_wire_001.jpg)

cleaned up the neck and other areas here you go guys. :wink:

[nubian]

beautiful start.
keep it coming

[JOAS]

She's beautiful Reo, nice work dude. the only thing that bothers me just a bit is the rib cage area... seems to lack the underlying skeletal detail that you captured in the clavicles and neck area.

would it be possible to see a closer wire frame of the head? the nose area is all muddled from this distance.

Keep it up, i'm looking forward to the rest of her.

joe.

[Giom]

Yea, what can I say that hasn't been mentioned before - besides, really good modeling detail. I'll be following this thread closely.

[Reo]

thanks guys, lots of good points for this model, I will take them in advisement.

I'll post a head wire for you Joe, as for the ribs, you are right they lack any real form I'm not sure if they will ever be seen once the concept has been realized, but I may just model the detail any ways just for the hell of it.

okay thanks guys I'll update soon.

[Ashura]

For some reason I really love the long neck, and those lips!

Those are some pretty lips.

It screams style!

Also, big props for not breaking the breast to head equation.

( One Breast > One Head = Fail )

Some people might call these small, but I think they're perfect.

[Vectorius]

Indeed, it would be nice to see some wire..very good model dude!:thumbsup: keep it up Reo!

[Giom]

I'm agreeing with Ashure on the brests. (For what it's worth)

[Reo]

Indeed, it would be nice to see some wire..

sure no problem just click the link that says wireframe : )

[webhead]

Very nice start here. She has lots of character already. The breasts looks nice and natural.
Not sure if the head might be slightly too round or if the lips are slightly too big for my tastes. Hard to say judging from the angle of the head in the picture, however I think it is very well done. I'm eager to see the finished model!

[zachlantow]

Looks good! Post up a wire for us to see topology. All I can see is that the bellybutton is too big!!:bounce:

[webhead]

Looks good! Post up a wire for us to see topology. All I can see is that the bellybutton is too big!!:bounce:

He has a link to the wire in his post. Almost missed it myself.

[feverinlove]

I think her breasts are too seperated.. Other than that very good start!

[stefanosoik]

i believe that the head needs to be a little bit smaller :) very nice work keep going...

[piksar]

Looks good, keep working

[odf]

Ex-cellent! :thumbsup: I just love the look of your characters. Nothing to crit here, just hoping for updates soon. :)

[gunslingerblack]

i think the breasts are alittle too round and perfect, try getting alittle more realism into that model as far as the chest goes.

[MVDB]

Lovely modeling so far Reo!
about the brests, everybody is different in their build and anatomy, so...
good job, looking forward for more!

[gunslingerblack]

yes everyone is different i agree but natural breasts dont look perfectly round like they have implants underneath them

i would be happy to be proven wrong in this situation so if anyone has a picture of natural breasts that look like that (tasteful) please post

[Reo]

thank you every one, I guess I should point out that I have not really tweeked the breasts yet and I'm not sure how much I will be doing to them, since there will be clothes on her.

I guess in hinde sight I should have not posted the chest yet, but oh well : )

thanks for the crits so far guys. update soon

[odf]

I think small breasts like that can be pretty perky, especially if the owner is fairly young. The real test will be animating them... :p

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