Mushroomhouse

[bjotto]

The original idea:

[Revilo]

gee papa smurf that sure is the smurfiest house i've ever seen on the smurfinet......

Great man. I like it a lot. I happen to be a fan of the smurfs. :D

[suffix]

love the style!!! let's see that thing textured!!! great model! :bounce:

[bjotto]

I've been quite busy the last time but today I had time to continue, so here's an update(better late than never):

Edit: the lighting is very basic and is absolutly not final and I haven't started to work on the hills in the background

[NileshXYZ]

nice idea! something I would see in Nintendo game like in Yoshi game or mario, will be waitn' for final render

[bjotto]

I've added a flower lying on the bench and some rocks a little everywhere.

Any changes before I start texturing?

I'm sorry for the low quality of the image.

[Raul-Reznek]

I like the first render best :D

The last version is FAR too confusing

Good job :D

[Hates_]

I really like the style of the house but perhaps the second render is a little too busy :shrug:

[bjotto]

I don't know, I think I can remove some of the busy look by making the textures(everything being in the same color doesn't really help) and by making a different lighting, I might remove some of the leaves behind the latern

edit: I didn't change very much between these images

[bjotto]

better?

[brammelo]

Hi Bjotto,

I think the picture would be better without the bushes in front. Its seems like you have brushes on both sides of a path towards the entrance door. I think it would be better to leave the bushes on the right side of the path behind, or replace the bushes to the right side of the image, as this makes a better frame for the mushroom.

But great image!

Cheers,
BaRa

[phishmann]

the house looks great!:thumbsup:
I think to make the outside look less busy you should maybe make the grass much softer and shorter. It would give it more of a fantasy look, if thats what your going for:shrug:

[Cinema1954]

I think the top of the house curls under a bit too much... compare it to the drawing. It seems to be losing a bit of the "mushroomness" of the original. In the drawing, you can see up into the underside more; it's instantly recognizable as a mushroom. In the 3D rendering, I'm not sure I would immediately know what it is.

[bjotto]

look, look, an update!
today a started texturing, I've only made the mushroom itself so far and I'll probably make the ground tomorrow, this is not much but atleast something...

[proton]

cool idea

[bjotto]

Bbelieve it or not, another update:
I changed the lighting but it's still not final, the final should be more mood giving

[blindleader]

now there's some different colours in there it's starting to get seperated out and not looking so cluttered and confusing.

Keep up the great work :thumbsup:

[bjotto]

Not much left now, just the sky and the leaves
I've completly remade the lighting and now I'm happy with it

[Remi]

Sweet Merciful Crap...that's great...keep updating:thumbsup:

[.overflowed]

I like it couse it ain't sweet. It unique in it's mood. It looks like some old-school ilustration.

Great work:thumbsup:

[bjotto]

The final version will have haze and a touch of focalblur otherwise it's pretty finished but please crit and thanks for the kind words everyone

[bjotto]

I forgot to say that I'll do some color correcting
for the final version, this is straight out of the box

[Manicalavera15]

shtroumpf shtroumpf shtroumpf !

hey cool dude, the scene looks great, really clean atmosphere !

ok i save the screen ! continue, what about little character? like shrek ;) or another style, but make one in this scene ll be nice, and the little house ll be happy :applause:

[Flog]

Now this is cool. Nice to see something other than a gollum or star wars model. heheheh I keep writing this alot but its refreshing to see someone with talent do something really neat like this.

Great work!!

[nanabaky]

"c'est tout mignon!" how to say that in english ??? :hmm:

[stuf123]

That is great. I love everything about it. Great colors! Nice work man.

[Null_Object]

Nice looks like something out of a Tolkien book me likes. HEY whats up Steve nice to see another Aii grad on here.

[brammelo]

Originally posted by nanabaky
"c'est tout mignon!" how to say that in english ??? :hmm:

Tu pourrais essayer "it's so cute".

Ciao,
BaRa

[l_farley13_l]

The clouds might be a touch out of style with the rest, but a good idea to get way from the complete ideality.

The close grass looks great but I think the hills might have been better off without complete covering of grass, just like hand placed patches od it.

Really beautiful!

Farley13

[bjotto]

yeah, I know, I might change them some but all do that in photoshop

<---loves multipassrendering and alhamaps

[bjotto]

I've rendered it all and started to combine it in photoshop and now I need some other clouds, it looks awful with the fog and haze, at the moment I'm using some kind of gradient with som painted variation, I'll post it soon. Please post out your ideas on the clouds everyone

Laaater

[NikLG]

I like the clouds as they are. Gives it a slightly sinister edge and stops it being to cutesy.

[cuse]

wow thats a dynamic scene

:surprised

could ya post a bigger render, me likes, want new background please :)

great work!



cuse

[bjotto]

I'll do that with the final image

[bjotto]

This is probably the last update, I chnged the sky to something thats in my opinion much better. I also added fog.

[Cryo_RO]

Wow! really nice
I especially like the mood , and those leaves blowing in the wind
Great work!

oh and this sky fits the mood much better

[rage288]

glad to see you here bud
the image is way cool
i like the mood a lot
nothing to crit

keep it up!

[Blackassheep]

I likle the texturing. Looks great. Gives you the feeling of a small world yet its larger then you know. Nice work

[bjotto]

noen of you have thought of anything to change and I'm just thinking os some more colorcorrections so I'll post the next version in the finished work forum along with hires image.
thanks for all the crit and kind words everyone

[Spliff_Richards]

I really like it.

[bjotto]

It's now posted in the finished work forum

[mushroomgod]

looks great...but then iv all ways been a fan of mushrooms :p

[diazgl]

exceptional piece of work. I love the lighting. Could you say a few things about the lighting of the scene an compositing of the clouds and fog?

PS: I liked the other clouds better, or if you stick with these clouds, you could give the grass on the foreground a similar painted feeling as the clouds (since they take up a large part of the scene), and make the quality of the grass match the quality of the mushroom house and that little flower on the right (i completely love that)

[bjotto]

there are 7 lights in total, one spot for each hill in the background. 4 spots pointing at the mushroomhouse. they were colored from yellow to blue. Also one yellow/orange point in the latern

[cuse]

looks great! by the way you should change your sig now to 'check my wip and finished post' :)

thought i would post a direct link to anyone who wants the finished work post the house at the end of the morning (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=35856) ...


cuse

[DimitrisLiatsos]

:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

Extremely nice work...watched all the steps...very nice!!!:thumbsup:

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