CGTalk - Edward and Llarry

Aserash

01-23-2006, 03:32 PM

http://zappa.tvu.ac.uk/~03vandermerwejacobus/edward.avi

This is my finished animation for my university project. I know it has loads of imperfections, but I'm relatively proud of it.

http://zappa.tvu.ac.uk/~03vandermerwejacobus/llarry.avi

and this is the animation for my Character Animation module. It's a lot simpler, but hopefully still fun.

I value your opinions and would like some creative critisism... be gentle.

- JD

Ranimate

01-23-2006, 03:59 PM

One word, Entertainment.
I enjoyed both pieces, I think the models and renders are a bit weak and the animation could be worked on. But I think you did manage to nail the jokes and the way you delivered the idea, story.

I liked the monster when he was practicing his roar in the cave and then showed us what he is made of with a big, shaking roar, I think the music and sound came in nicely.

I liked the lama piece, I think the acting was cute and nice too.

Good job, keep it up, I was entertained

Gonna watch "Emperor's new groove", later.

Ranimate

:)

Chris Bacon

01-23-2006, 04:57 PM

Ok the only proble I have is the animation.....its, jumpy...if that makes any sence....try smoothing it out on the graph editor...

othere than that I liked it...

good work

Aserash

02-04-2006, 03:55 PM

Thank you for your comments and critques. I Appreciate it.

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