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loganx3d
12-01-2002, 05:44 AM
I've been working on this, but slowing down lately, so this might be the last revision. To keep me going, I'm looking for some good critiques! :)
Painter with Wacom, no ref.
Thanks!

wildsheepchase
12-01-2002, 07:05 AM
:surprised
Well, I think her legs and feet need to be seriously thinned out and the feet need to be smaller. Also, the foreshortening of the legs needs some work. They look like the legs/feet of someone much larger and heavier than the torso would suggest.

PsychedelicMind
12-01-2002, 08:11 AM
my my... painting without reference can be difficult sometimes. specially when forshortening... her posture looks a little weird... the forshortening of her legs could be better i think... and she needs a facelift :D hehe... okay. but her nose is just biiig :)ganbatte! you can do it!

loganx3d
12-09-2002, 03:20 AM
OK, she's leaning forward into a position which admittedly is impossible without being limber or stretching first. :) I like the pose, though.

As for her face, I think she would be insulted if she heard that... ^_^

kev_jenks
12-09-2002, 05:09 PM
exactly how many people is that joined at the hip???

no offence but i think you ought to try life drawing classes


kev j

DuRanG
12-09-2002, 06:07 PM
this position is actually possible, but shes just.. ugly :surprised

one333
12-10-2002, 06:44 AM
I think it's entirely irrelevant to point out that she is ugly. Not everyone wants to draw masturbatory pseudo-girlfriends. It can be amusing to point out in the context of an otherwise intelligent critique. So until that happens I don't think it' worth mentioning.

loganx3d
12-11-2002, 05:49 AM
I've attached a perspective shot that I did really quickly in Poser... sorry for the quality, but it was the first (and hopefully last) time I've ever used the program.

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