View Full Version : PERPETUUM MOBILE ... Begins ( Teaser )
01-19-2006, 11:40 PM
He have just finished the first part of our 3D Animation project : PERPETUUM MOBILE
You can take a look at this Teaser at ...
We are using Maya for modeling and Renderman
for shading, lighting and ... rendering.
Comments and Critics are very welcome. Thanks !
01-20-2006, 02:55 AM
aren't teasers supposed to give you an idea of what the movie is about?
i didn't get it in this one... maybe i missed something... :shrug:
well my only crit after watching the clip would be that the film itself seems to lagg(?) a bit as the camera pans thru the scene, you could probably tweak its frame rate or something for a smoother flowing video...
aside from that, the audio and visuals are both great! good luck! :thumbsup:
01-20-2006, 07:41 AM
Very fantastic effect!
01-20-2006, 07:57 AM
Ragdoll you're really severe. A teaser is different from a trailer. It is just an happening and that is excately what is this short.
I like it. Especially color and renderings. But I find it very slow on animation.
01-20-2006, 09:23 AM
I like the lighting,and the stagging in the end!
02-08-2006, 12:55 AM
Thanks for the comments !
Dear Ragdoll, Authentic is right. The Teaser presented is just to show
the Look & Feel of the story. We will we working for sure on a Trailer
as soon as the project was completed.
I know it is a little bit slow but the story is about a race against time,
so the beginning of the story it is suppose to be that way. :)
There is a children race right after the presentation of the Alchemist
to increase the speed of the "montage".
Thanks Tiny_Swallow & Lighting_Bug.
02-08-2006, 02:03 AM
Very well done :-) I like the mood the lighting lives off. I also really like the character with the skinny wrists. :thumbsup:
02-08-2006, 05:01 AM
Great environment work!
The look is top notch - excellent job
02-09-2006, 09:57 AM
A spanish artist.... Hi!!....very nice ambience....Good Work.
Muy buen trabajo, te sigo en esmaya y es altamente bueno.
Very nice work :thumbsup:
Very nice, i know you're still tweeking things out and my only crit is the animation of those "cilicking balls" it seems a little slow and not very realistic...otherwise everything else from lighting and animating is very well done!! Keep up the GREAT work, and good luck with everything!!
I definitely am interested in seeing the finally product. Ambient was perfect and although the trailer itself feels more like the beginning of a short (cuz its not in the usual 9-10 cutscenes) it definitely merits huge credit.
My only critique, and its more of a question I guess is when the thing (dunno if man or beast or whatnot...lol..) walks in...it feels like his rolling in and not actually walking in...although im not sure of course if he's supposed to be rolling or walking in anyways...lol...Feels like he has no up and down or left to right motion if you know what i mean...
but everything else was very, very well done..
Grats on the accomplishment so far...:)
02-19-2006, 01:47 AM
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