View Full Version : sylphen- elven girl
01-14-2006, 04:17 PM
hi all, i'm new in 3D and at cgtalk...
i would like to show you all, my WIP head. it's not perfect yet...for me... i'm accepting C&C and i'm glad to take all correction to develop my research of topology and others.
here you go ^^
this is my first human head modelling.. tough its not realistic, but i want this character to come alive^^.
her body is on progress. i'll upload it soon after i finished the shaded mesh^^
thank you for C&C
Nice start Annette !
i like your Style .....
for criticism it is better you post rought wires. ( i can better see edge flow)
can not wait to see the body
keep it up
last image was rought wire....
nothing to criticize
Nothing to crit from me. Great style.
01-22-2006, 08:59 AM
thank you Akoa and Vaio, its not done yet...
after i research for face topology then i'm confused about her jaw, because when i apply her face texture, its just strech away from cheek to below her ears.
I think her topology is not good yet. can somebody tell me where the five star polygon should take place?
01-22-2006, 10:37 AM
cool can`t wait to see the body keep going :thumbsup:
02-16-2006, 11:44 AM
finally the body is done..its not quite right yet, so, i need some input to improve this art. pheww... yes it took a long time building a body like this for me (-_-)a. C&C very welcome ^^http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v520/Alexi_L/slyphen_front_body.jpghttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v520/Alexi_L/sylphen_back.jpg
i my self feels strange about her upper back polygon, but i dunno what is wrong.... looks like her back's bone is not showing. but it turns out not bad ^^; her bottom too... do you think its too "box feel" i mean,... its not quite round for a cute bottom ^^ hehehe...
here is the hand:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v520/Alexi_L/palm.jpg (i'm giving the link, in case if the picture is not showing fully)
i made her hand following joan of arc's tutorial but i dont really get it, because joan of arc made the glove, not hand. so arrange her palm,... and i dont think its right already.so i'll be very welcome to C&C . Thankyou ^^
i'm start working on her leg.
02-16-2006, 11:44 AM
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