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Greenhalls
01-14-2006, 04:17 PM
hi all, i'm new in 3D and at cgtalk...
i would like to show you all, my WIP head. it's not perfect yet...for me... i'm accepting C&C and i'm glad to take all correction to develop my research of topology and others.
here you go ^^

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v520/Alexi_L/shadedwire.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v520/Alexi_L/wire_unsmooth.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v520/Alexi_L/wire_smooth.jpg

this is my first human head modelling.. tough its not realistic, but i want this character to come alive^^.
her body is on progress. i'll upload it soon after i finished the shaded mesh^^

thank you for C&C

-Annette-

vaio
01-15-2006, 07:52 AM
Nice start Annette !

i like your Style .....

for criticism it is better you post rought wires. ( i can better see edge flow)

can not wait to see the body

keep it up

Ronny

vaio
01-15-2006, 07:55 AM
sorry !

last image was rought wire....

nothing to criticize

Ronny

Akoa
01-15-2006, 06:49 PM
Nothing to crit from me. Great style.

Greenhalls
01-22-2006, 08:59 AM
thank you Akoa and Vaio, its not done yet...
after i research for face topology then i'm confused about her jaw, because when i apply her face texture, its just strech away from cheek to below her ears.
I think her topology is not good yet. can somebody tell me where the five star polygon should take place?

antone-m
01-22-2006, 10:37 AM
cool can`t wait to see the body keep going :thumbsup:

Greenhalls
02-16-2006, 11:44 AM
finally the body is done..its not quite right yet, so, i need some input to improve this art. pheww... yes it took a long time building a body like this for me (-_-)a. C&C very welcome ^^http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v520/Alexi_L/slyphen_front_body.jpghttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v520/Alexi_L/sylphen_back.jpg

i my self feels strange about her upper back polygon, but i dunno what is wrong.... looks like her back's bone is not showing. but it turns out not bad ^^; her bottom too... do you think its too "box feel" i mean,... its not quite round for a cute bottom ^^ hehehe...

here is the hand:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v520/Alexi_L/hand_full.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v520/Alexi_L/palm.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v520/Alexi_L/palm.jpg (i'm giving the link, in case if the picture is not showing fully)
i made her hand following joan of arc's tutorial but i dont really get it, because joan of arc made the glove, not hand. so arrange her palm,... and i dont think its right already.so i'll be very welcome to C&C . Thankyou ^^
i'm start working on her leg.

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