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Titank
11-29-2002, 08:46 AM
http://perso.club-internet.fr/fred806/tony/faery.jpg

Haya Cg-talkers ! This is my finished lill' wizard's house. I'm gonna make a landscape and characters and so on....
impressions and critiques welcome :D

gato
11-29-2002, 09:07 AM
Hi Titank...very good work on textures and nice modelling.
very original finish, I love the colors..
Full on :beer: :thumbsup:

LordShaitan
11-29-2002, 09:28 AM
Awsome, very vivid and colorful. Gotta love that style

MK2
11-29-2002, 10:17 AM
Haha... this blue stuff... rooftiles (?),
are in the wrong direction... this way all the rain can directly flow into the house.

But the rest looks fine...

mk

Titank
11-29-2002, 10:54 AM
Yeah i noticed that too late, i'll have to change it... or pretend this is a house in a land where it's always sunny :p

Evil Teddy
11-29-2002, 02:49 PM
Oooh! Neat! I love this style! I think I saw this in the WIP section. Very nice. :thumbsup: Just fix those tiles. Question: the lights...are they fireflies or what?

proton
11-29-2002, 03:05 PM
reminds me of something from Final Fantasy 9.....very cool!

Titank
11-29-2002, 03:09 PM
Thx man ! They're just stars actually, and a lill' magic something speeding in the background ;)

tariel
11-29-2002, 04:05 PM
Hi man !

That's awesome! Really nice!
I like the design and textures.
Waiting to see more.

dwillms
11-29-2002, 04:08 PM
Hahaha I just noticed the roof tiles. They are all ASS BACKWARDS. Those are gonna let the rain!!! I love the colors and presentation of this model otherwise.

Totitch
11-29-2002, 04:54 PM
Trés beau! :thumbsup:

Nothing to critic! It's great! :applause:

arjun
11-29-2002, 05:31 PM
Looks awesome :beer:
This would be one of those things that looks cool within a fenced small yard with grass and all. Dark eerie setting. Wowzers, be sure to show us if you finish making it into a scene.

NeonGuy
11-29-2002, 08:51 PM
oh yess!!! i like this cartoon style stuff! good work!!!

Titank
11-29-2002, 09:38 PM
Thx guys i really appreciate all these compliments, that just gives me MORE motivation to do better :D.
Good call Arjun, a small fenced yard is exactly what's on his way as a landscape ! And by the way pretty thank you Proton for your comment, now i can show off with my buddies BWHAHAHA HA !
See you soon for rest of all this :)

ThirdEye
11-29-2002, 10:30 PM
There's no handle on the door :p

Titank
11-29-2002, 10:34 PM
HUM ! well done :D You exposed me !!! waaaa!

JuanAntonio
11-29-2002, 11:17 PM
It´s a wizard´s house. They don´t bother with door handles...:)

Great work!

Titank
12-10-2002, 07:21 PM
http://perso.club-internet.fr/fred806/tony/cabane_by_night.jpg
Here's a night shot, this is both my first landscape and first night shot, what do you think of this ?

harly
12-10-2002, 07:55 PM
wow, i love it!
wonderful atmosphere..the clouds and the glowflys look phantastic.
are they painted?
i would suggest to add some extra lanterns to the house, it´s somehow too dark.

Remi
12-10-2002, 08:00 PM
Looks great....If I was you I would light it just a tad bit more to show off the model...Well done....:thumbsup: :surprised :buttrock:

Joviex
12-10-2002, 09:50 PM
Man that picture is excellent. Extremely stylized work. Great job.

Tex
12-10-2002, 11:43 PM
this is really sweet. the originality of the textures is something I haven't seen in a while. the only problem i see is the roof tiles are backwards. but i know you already know that heh. awesome work:love:

raden
12-10-2002, 11:57 PM
Salut Titank:)

Impressive job you show here:thumbsup:

Good design & texture, I like it's nouveauan look.

Crit: I kinda agree with Remi about the lighting, set more lights but not too much, just to show the shapes. And maybe for that little sparkling lightbulbs on the ground I'd say go with yellow colour to make this scene more dynamic?

Btw how the h*ll did you do those clouds??? Excellento:applause:

piajartist
12-10-2002, 11:58 PM
a lot of the colors look toonish

piajartist
12-10-2002, 11:59 PM
FOr some reason i have lost over a hundred post counts, i used to be at 420 posts, the hell is going on, Im not joking now it says im at 314, HAS this happend to anyone else?

arjun
12-11-2002, 12:04 AM
Really beautiful work :bowdown: :bowdown:
What's that mr voice? You want to see an animation/movie?


What, did I say something? ;)

Totitch
12-11-2002, 12:07 AM
Trés belle scene mais si tes nuages etaient faits main ça serait encore mieux!
Retouche le photo par exemple, qu'elle paraisse moins realiste...En "blurant" un peu tout ça!

Beautifull scene!:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

JBruckner
12-11-2002, 12:42 AM
Im in love.

BiTMAP
12-11-2002, 12:55 AM
post counts are down cuase of a server roll back, and just so the artist READS it


the tiles are backwards, the bottoms need to be on top of the tiles below them, or else rain and such flows INTO the house

Titank
12-11-2002, 09:16 AM
I know about the tiles man, dont break my ears like that :)

Raden : the clouds are photo, there's a massive post-prod under photoshop in here.

Martijn Wijmer
12-11-2002, 01:24 PM
I really like your style. The scenery reminds me alot of one of my favorite games: Abe's oddyssee. (You know, the little, chanting green anti-hero alien that goes doh--doh--doh--doh--) Really nice, especially the last render "by night" Great work, can't wait to see a whole village in this style. Good work, man!!:buttrock:

MadS
12-11-2002, 04:33 PM
That little hut has a lot of character. Great job! Can't wait to see the style of characters that will inhabit this world. It kinda reminds me of Final Fantasy 9. Great game that was.

As for the critiques, as pointed out, the tiles don't make sense. I mean, it looks cool, but illogical.
And the grass infront of the hut looks too uniform, both in spacing and length. Make it more chaotic and varied like the grass on the hill. ;) Other than that, it looks very enchanting.

The-Buzz
12-11-2002, 05:52 PM
Good work!
I like the magic of this scene;)

I think your cloud is too realistic for this scene:D

Good continuation :bounce:

Jenner
12-11-2002, 06:34 PM
WOOOW!!! :buttrock: :buttrock: man, thats great dude!!!
but... the rooftiles again. Sorry, I realize its a shitty job to fix :thumbsdow ... Man the picture is great though. What program did you use again?

Titank
12-11-2002, 08:10 PM
i used Max 5 and photoshtop, both for texture and post-prod :)

xtrm3d
12-11-2002, 10:07 PM
hhooooo c est baaauuuuuuuxxxx

moi j aime bien !!!

i give you five star !!!

pigwater
12-11-2002, 10:22 PM
cool feel to it... really enjoyable style

FusionDG
12-11-2002, 11:14 PM
Titank,

I love the model since it was in the WIP section. A little more lighting to highlight your model would be nice as stated.

I like the clouds in the sky, maybe the stars that are behind the clouds should be less bright? Overall a real beautiful job.


Oh, and I don’t know if anyone pointed it out to you yet, but your roof shingles are upside down ;) j/k

zappatoff
12-12-2002, 05:25 AM
:applause:





very cool.
remember Myst.

i like all...
z.



:applause:

tariel
12-12-2002, 07:43 PM
hi !

It's getting better and better!
Awesome work! The whole scene is great and it brings really nice feeling to the viewer and you can feel the magic.

I like it a lot! :applause:

RiotManZ
12-12-2002, 08:13 PM
very nice!
I want to see the people living in there!!!!!:applause: :bounce: :beer:

facial
12-13-2002, 04:32 AM
really nice style, I love this work. keep post more, man:beer:

BiTMAP
12-13-2002, 05:04 AM
so are you going to post more pictures :D and good to know u heard bout the tiles ;)

anticz
12-13-2002, 05:05 AM
YAY. Love the fantasy/storybook illustration look. I strive for that myself. Looks great. I know it's been said but the roof tile thing is a little odd. Not something that goes un noticed but other than that it looks fantastic.

Titank
12-13-2002, 11:26 AM
Thanks for all your msg guys ! :beer:
But well i have to be honnest this scene is very far from perfect and the night render helps a lot to hide some things...
But i'm letting this scene behind for a while, so that when i come back to it i'll have a clearer idea what to improve and how to do it !

So here's the total day scene !

_Anticz : yeah i noticed the inspiration in your work, i've even taken a pic of your nixye ( the one with blue crystals ) to my inspiration folder for my next scene :p
_Thx Tariel ! If this pic could bring some feelings to the viewer... i'm just so pleased about that !! :beer:

http://perso.club-internet.fr/fred806/tony/wip_jour_03.jpg

fred806
12-16-2002, 06:49 PM
really wonderful. I love it.

I want to see a character on this set!!!!

XerC
12-16-2002, 09:48 PM
Cool style!
Especialy the 2nd picture (at night) has got a lot of atmospere! I don't know why, but it somehow reminds me of "The Secret of Monkey Island", and also the second part: "LeCuck's Revenge"... *good ole times* :love:

Greetings,
XerC, who wants to see more of these great night shots! :drool:

dawmar
12-16-2002, 10:23 PM
This is really great. It has so much charater that it lets your imagination run wilde.
Keep up the good work.

I only have one suggestion or more of a request. What if ther was a little bit of morring fog? Oh and what program R U using?

dawmar
12-16-2002, 10:37 PM
This is really great. It has so much charater that it lets your imagination run wilde.
Keep up the good work.

I only have one suggestion or more of a request. What if ther was a little bit of morring fog? Oh and what program R U using?

stickyblue
12-17-2002, 06:26 AM
i LOVED your style ! :thumbsup:

Kurtzar
12-17-2002, 08:04 AM
Looks nice. A nice fantasy setting,pleasant. Just get around to changing those tiles around,( I know you know about that already,;) ).
Fine looking work.

:beer:

alphastudios
12-17-2002, 03:28 PM
CHO CHWEET!

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