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[freddy7133d]

not bad....
most of the proportions look right...
but the hand on her left looks a little small...
a bit more detail in the robotic parts would be nice too....

but as I said before not bad...:thumbsup:
good concept for cg:)

[LordEzzat]

she look spretty good but I'd have one leg human..i dont know why maybe to balance her more...eh what do i know but it'd be cool to see her 3d'ed...

LordEzzat

[deejayhore21]

here is a back view of her, I do agree that the hand needs work. Any advice is greatly appreciated.

[Kirt]

I'd look for better ways to merge her mechanical parts to the fleshy parts. She looks more like a mechanized maniquin than an fleshy cyborg. The torso cut off is the part that makes it appear so, more than any other area.

Also, I'd work on the mechanics a bit more. Take a look at some anatomy books and try to conceptualize joints and mechanics that mimic how the human body functions (i.e. the pistons in the calf areas don't make sense because the leg doesn't move up and down in that area).

The bikini bottom isn't really needed either since that area is mechanized as well. After refining the hip joints, add some armor casings that mimic the bikini look - but look like they serve a purpose for being there.

Form follows function. :D

[deejayhore21]

thanks a lot guys, this will really help.

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