Character - Keeper

[LeeLee D]

The reflection on his Eyes is incorrect and from the size of his pupils Im going to assume he's high on either Coke/E/Meth/Shrooms/....or he is in a really dark room.

Also, something about the way his Bicep is connecting to his forearm in the texture is odd, i think it should be alittle more centered..

The render itself seems to dark, cant see alot of the detail in the texture, you might want to apply some Self Illumination to the material

[Dark_sOLACE]

I'll take meth for $500 Diana.

For some reason makes me think of someone going through a Vanilla Ice or a Markie Mark Phase (not that I would know from personal experiance :rolleyes: I swear)

Seriously though I would like to start off with saying over all I like the model and that you got some nice skills on you ( hehe wait for it ..............) but,
I agree with Lee about the Pupils being a tad too big .. (nice catching the reflection being incorrect lee) ..The arm texture bothers me abit also but not so much as his head .. I have been looking at it for about five minutes and I still can't really see it skin texture seems nicely done but arg, gimmie a second.. .. okay looked at it again mid post and I think its just the texture on his lips its way to pale for the skin color .. although he kind of looks like he was fighting (maybe depraved of sleep, food, water and all that good stuff) so maybe your intent was to have pale sickly looking lips (which is a super nice touch) but like I said they are too pale for his skin color, so when I look at the full body pic in his face all I really see is a basic line where a mouth should be with just a bit of shadows. maybe if you give his skin a more pale sickly look it would match or to make things easier just add a bit of pink into the lips maybe a light brown..(not saying to make it look like lipstick just a bit to match the healthy skin color) ... heh although noone will most likely care about the damn lip color it will always bother me damn details *twitch*
oh also and it being too dark some detail seems to be lost but I like what I can see although the red undershirt bothers me a bit (maybe add a low opacity textured layer in Photoshop on top of the red shirt to grim it up) its way to clean compared with the green top

One more thing compared to the detail on the green shirt, stubble eyebrows, reflection in the eyes (although one is upside down) .. the hair just looks like it was thrown on or like it was the last thing you did and just wanted to get model over with *shrug*

Of course none of this really matters when your going to be running around trying to shoot him as soon as he comes onto the screen in your mod but you said "C&C are welcome" dooming yourself to read my blabber.

PS. I would leave the reversed eye reflections (if you got a say in it) that way you could walk around in clip mode and get up close and personal and show friends your evil scheme to make reversed eye reflections destroying mods as we know it. Then one day telling the world destroying everything we believe in therefore causing man to destroy himself in the raving lunacy that as become his life all because of the damn reflection in his damn eyes did not match up.:twisted: or you could say its your trademark..

you got a site for the mod or a mod name? Can't wait to see some more work GL

-Dark

[dimi16]

the only thing that bothers me is
A. the dark textures seem to take alot of the detail away, either delete the geometry detail save some performance and leave it dark or lighten up the textures and show the detail for all its worth

B. The palms of the hands look to big and the fingers to short

all that other stuff is things that people will never notice nor care about during gameplay, unless ur going to have some upclose ingame cinematics...

but good work fix those two things, and what the others said if u have some extra time ;) and it will be great

regards
Dimitri

[dreamsunlimited]

good work, just throw some light in the clothes textures and fix above crits and u will improve this model a lot.

[Akimine]

Hey guys ! thanks for all C&C !

"the hair just looks like it was thrown on or like it was the last thing you did and just wanted to get model over with *shrug*"
exactly =)

I think i've corrected the biceps issue, but not sure, also this time i've directly take screenshots in xsi because I sucks with Mental Ray :p
http://angelusinferis.free.fr/CGTalk/garde_separateur2.jpg


His pupils/lips are correct this time ?
http://angelusinferis.free.fr/CGTalk/close-up_head2.jpg


Thanks !

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