Human female model.

[yoshi99]

Keep up the good work!

[AndrewRaZ]

it's coming along very nicely.

my crits:

the face is a little too round and feels like it might be slightly too wide or too short. the result is she looks like a child with an adult body.

what i see of the arms are kind of thin, which lend toward the child feel again. her shoulders might be a bit narrow too.

the hand is lacking some definition around the knuckles especially, though that can be easily explained since it's not done. the proportions look about right.

it's hard to get a feel for the proportion of the body overall from these shots, so i might be seeing things that aren't there. a full-body shot (or a couple) will probably help get a better sense of the model as a whole. even if it's not done, and still very blocky, we can get an idea of the proportions.

[EternalArt]

Great work ... it's a good star man .. go up

[jjcoolio]

I think the model will come out very pretty when its finished. btw I really dig your armpit. It's always one place I have a hard time.

[shinsaku77]

thank you for your crit and advices.
ill try to fix up what u all told me.
i havent touch anything yet but i post what i got so far. (so ppl can see whats wrong better!)
Red_Raven, thank you for many advices, those helps me a lot. :)

and... jjcoolio, your Audrey Hepburn is hella good :eek:
wish i can reach to your level some day !

plz tell me more about my model, even small things r very aprreciated.

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