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pablov
11-28-2002, 12:34 AM
:bounce:

Stonepilot
11-28-2002, 12:45 AM
Pretty Cool.The lighting is kinda nice. Get rid of the spotlight with the fog and the sparkles they're very distracting to the eye. In my own opinion. The placement of the hotspot is very distraticting it keeps on pulling the eye away from the model. So maybe just move the hot spot more towards the back of the model. So the it guides your eye.

sixtyten
11-28-2002, 03:35 AM
your water looks dodgy. Kinda to flat or something. i dunno.

srich23
11-28-2002, 06:23 AM
yeah, i would try to bring the viewer attention to the excellent modeling of the castles. i also don't like the sparkle light things.

lmc
11-28-2002, 06:41 AM
Wah, nice lal....

Jeffo
11-28-2002, 01:30 PM
Hey pablov,

cool castle and great texturing, but i agree with the others about the water, looks flat and pales in comparison to the rest of the image.

TES
11-28-2002, 09:43 PM
hey guy!! itīs great!!!castle and lighting is fantastic!water and background looks ,that they needs to be repaired........

ThirdEye
11-29-2002, 12:05 AM
Nice! what software and renderer?

Shiny
11-29-2002, 01:16 AM
gosh, that's one fine castle.. i imagine it could be one of those perfect elf castles?!

Entangle
11-29-2002, 02:06 AM
as soon as I saw it, I though Rivendell!

AC_Shrike
11-29-2002, 06:54 AM
Excellent model and scene, but you have a major error with your lighting. You got the tone/colors right, but look where the sun pours from the clouds (note the volumetric beam) and then look how the light strikes your models...from a completely different location from the left. This also results in incorrect shadows, especially from the architecture shadows on the water's surface.

An excellent start to a very nice scene, otherwise. Get to it, I want to see it completed.:buttrock:

Peace,

Shrike
Lead Artist - Boundless
http://www.alienculture.net

Zastrozzi
11-29-2002, 09:43 PM
yay you finally got another post up five stars :thumbsup:

viper11885
11-29-2002, 11:22 PM
wow, castle looks very good :)

but i would change the water to make it more lifelike.. it just doesn't seem to look right.. too flat...

i too agree w/ the sparkles... i think they gotta go.. it constantly catches my eye and takes it away from everything else...

KOKOMO
11-30-2002, 05:03 AM
I love the castle, more pics plz

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