Game Char - Skin

[obelisk]

This is looking great PD. A few crits that may help.

- skin colour is too uniform. noses and cheeks tend to be a little redder for example. try and break it up a bit.
- is she wearing grey lipstick?
- her shaved hair seems very white for it's length. perhaps it could be darker or sandier.
- some sharper details like scratches would help bring out the breast plate.
- pants seem uncomfortably bunched around her crotch.
- looks like the pants are giving her a wedgie (ow!). maybe you don't need to define the top if he bum-crack quite so much.
- face, neck and undershirt might be a little too clean. maybe she just had a shower though?
- maybe darken the area where the arms meet the breast plate. the transition seems too polygonal.
- belt design seems very eccentric. not bad, just odd.

Hope that's helpful. Keep the good work coming. Can we see some more details?

Cheers,

-O

[Aggroblakh]

The face definitely looks a bit fake, which is fine except that it contrasts with the relatively realistic body texture. However, I'm just being picky, it looks great anyways.

[Psionic Design]

Thanks for the great crits guys, it "really" helps!!

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