Original Character : Manique, The GhostViper Assassin

[Kamui]

hey Psychadelic!

very nice character. the final image i really like. i like the lush greens :)

my only crit is why did you get rid of her pigtails? i think you should have kept them! ;)

oh yeah, it all makes sense now because of the way you talk.. :scream:

[typeA]

well..you want some cirt euh......hehe..will i like the second pose of the 2 up top..not the one you spent all that time coloring..muhahahahahaha....but....i like it anyways..just not as much:wavey:

[PsychedelicMind]

okay, Kamui, you can officially kill me now cos I freaking FORGOT to add in her HAIR!!! Er... chotto... Will do that riiight now... Thanks for reminding me... boy, do i feel sheepish... :blush:

[PsychedelicMind]

ho ho! alright! Hair is done! Now i can go eat my dinner... :D

[puddlefish]

i think the face and the hair (especially) are really nice, but i think her costume could use some more thought. it seems that an awful lot of comic style (particularly manga) female characters wear this kind of outfit, it's become a bit commonplace. i think a more original outfit would make a much more striking character.

some of my favourite female costume designs are ash's in the film avalon. functional and they look great.

hope this helps!

[PsychedelicMind]

Avalon? Never heard of that film before... Yah. think i have a problem with clothes design... siiiigh. need better ideas... will go check out that movie if i can...

if ANYONE out there has ~resourses~ on interesting clothes design and stuff like that, don't hesitate to tell me the link :D I greatly appreciate it :) arigato...

[Sir PAL]

yep. another nice work from PsychedelicMind. especially those plates in her hair and those floating balls above them (but where are they in the coloured pic???)...very special and stylish!!!

[PsychedelicMind]

thank's Sir Pal... I ommited the glo-balls... cos they looked kinda stupid when I actually tried to fit them into the pic... :D

[CGmonkey]

PRINCESS MONONOKE!!!!! :bounce: :bounce:

[Kamui]

ah! where's the glo-balls?? actually, the entire design is reminds me of the phantasy star online characters, which is a pretty cool thing!:thumbsup:

[PsychedelicMind]

hehe.. does it? I've never seen Phantasy Star before... maybe i should check it out :D

[Bahamut]

Try to check out the final fantasy lV-Xl.

Veeeeeeeeery cooooool design...:buttrock:

[eunuchbot]

cool pic
here's your crit.:
-good design, but not for a assassin (aren't they soposed to be stealthy?) in this case less secondary motion (hair) and less visable skin (don't want to be recognized!!)
-good coloring, but as a composition it looks flat, maybe some more contrast on her shadows and highlighs would do the trick... the back ground: there's something about the tree to her left (our left) that bugs me... it looks kinda flat, but then again the background shouldn't be as detailed as the foreground... I don't quite know what to say here, it does work well with the comp though.....

hope this helps

[PsychedelicMind]

nya... thanks for the crit eunuchbot. It's useful info :) Am already thinking of redoing this piece... or just doing another one with a better composition & camera angle. :D Sure hope i get around to doing it... :surprised

[Indolent]

I'm lovin' this, man. I'm just starting to get into Painter 7, with my wacom. Keep it up, dude.

[PsychedelicMind]

Thanks Indolent! :D Will try to keep it up! arg arg... dying... need energizer.... aaarg...

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